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Killian
04-09-2009, 11:56 PM
I've just published my level for LBC2. It took me a record-breaking time of four days to complete but I'm very pleased with what I've achieved in that time.

PSN: The_Killian

Level Name: LBPGolfEU - Par 1

No F4F?: I would do F4F but I will be very busy in the next 5 days. However, if you do wish for some feedback on your level please post it in the thread and I'll try my best to get to it, most likely on Tuesday.

Images:
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/littlebiggallery/images/455/1_A_Photo_2.jpg http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/littlebiggallery/images/455/large/2_A_Photo_1.jpg http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/littlebiggallery/images/455/large/3_A_Photo.jpg

Description: This level follows a similar concept to my Problematic Packaging survival challenge. You play within the ball and your goal is, surprisingly, to make it to the hole.

Thanks: Pitcard, V0rtex2002 and RangerZero for testing it for me and offering suggestions. Much appreciated. :) Thanks Vanemiera for filming it!


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RangerZero
04-10-2009, 12:13 AM
Let me tell you that the ratio of "your efforts vs my enjoyment" is EXCELLENT for your level there.

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tonhe98
04-10-2009, 03:01 AM
I can check out your level possibly this weekend, if you could, check out my level too.

Here is a link to the post. LBPGolfNA - Driving Range (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=10225)

Thanks !

-Tony

CCubbage
04-10-2009, 01:27 PM
I really enjoyed this level. It's not as much golf as it is a really cool level where you ARE a golf ball - and I personally think that's a good thing. I had a lot of fun playing this. After the contest you should really expand on this and have the golf ball go through all kinds of adventures (maybe even starting at the bottom of a pond and finding the hole).

Great stuff! 5 stars and hearted!

I know this thread isn't feedback for feedback, but I would love it if you checked out my golf entry!

Killian
04-10-2009, 11:47 PM
Images added, will try to get a video.

Thanks for the feedback guys.

Tonhe and CCubbage, I'll play your golf levels as soon as I get home tomorrow. :)

Coreymill
04-11-2009, 03:05 AM
Well, I tired a couple times but ran into problems.

- First time I played, the first lift at the beginning where you can go left or right at the top. I went left first then tried to jump down on top of the lift. However, instead of getting back down, or having it move up so I could go to the right I just got stuck and had to restart.

- The second time I played I got to the part where you have to feed the tree and the branch that throws you up there ended up breaking the ball and I fell down to the bottom of the level and couldn't finish it.

- Anyway, I really like the idea of the level a lot and it is fun. A lot different than most of the other gold levels, which I think is good. I will try it again tomorrow.

v0rtex
04-11-2009, 03:10 AM
I had a great time testing and playing this level. It's an awesome and unique take on the challenge of this contest. I hope the judges reward you for your innovative approach.

Good stuff Killian! 5 Stars and Hearted.

No F4F needed, thanks!

Sackdragon
04-11-2009, 03:34 AM
Is it even possible for a hole to be Par 1? Because a hole-in-one is supposed to be negative, and a par is a neutral 0.

Anyway, I might check this out. My golf level had a similiar gameplay mechanic (although yours is probably much better than mine).

TJapan
04-11-2009, 01:20 PM
Hey Killian, i just played through, and i must say, this level is pretty great! I actually couldnt finish it however, due to one section in particular, which may have been mentioned to you before... the part where the branches break, the first time, i got dragged down to the left, and coudlnt get back to the level. the second time, a branch landed in front of me, and i could see the hole right there!!! the third time, the ball broke between 2 sticks as we were falling.

however, i really liked the tree feeding, and the whole concept was pretty novel. I gave you 5 stars and a heart, because the whole level was really enjoyable. if you get a chance, a little bit of feedback on my LBPGolfNA-Par 5 would be really helpful.

Jaeyden
04-11-2009, 09:06 PM
This level is certainly a stand out level from the rest of the golf entry's. I think it's rather enjoyable and refreshing approach to the whole thing. I can certainly tell you I wish my ball would mysteriously find it's way to the hole when I hit it out of bounds. It's a golfers dream ;) Anyway, I played through it several times and didn't run into any of the issues stated above. I loved it and hope it does well. Oh yeah..P.S. they're right about the Par on the hole...it should probably be a par three, as that's really about the only hole you'll ever be able to get a hole in one on.

Dexiro
04-11-2009, 10:49 PM
really fun level ^^

i probably won't be taking part but where this golf contest start??

Killian
04-11-2009, 10:49 PM
Well, I tired a couple times but ran into problems.

- First time I played, the first lift at the beginning where you can go left or right at the top. I went left first then tried to jump down on top of the lift. However, instead of getting back down, or having it move up so I could go to the right I just got stuck and had to restart.

- The second time I played I got to the part where you have to feed the tree and the branch that throws you up there ended up breaking the ball and I fell down to the bottom of the level and couldn't finish it.

- Anyway, I really like the idea of the level a lot and it is fun. A lot different than most of the other gold levels, which I think is good. I will try it again tomorrow.

I have never encountered the second one. I'll get on it right away! Thanks :)


Is it even possible for a hole to be Par 1? Because a hole-in-one is supposed to be negative, and a par is a neutral 0.

Anyway, I might check this out. My golf level had a similiar gameplay mechanic (although yours is probably much better than mine).

I know nothing about golf unfortunately. Do you think that Mm do? I'd rather not change the name but if it's necessary I will. Hopefully I won't be disqualified. :(


Hey Killian, i just played through, and i must say, this level is pretty great! I actually couldnt finish it however, due to one section in particular, which may have been mentioned to you before... the part where the branches break, the first time, i got dragged down to the left, and coudlnt get back to the level. the second time, a branch landed in front of me, and i could see the hole right there!!! the third time, the ball broke between 2 sticks as we were falling.

however, i really liked the tree feeding, and the whole concept was pretty novel. I gave you 5 stars and a heart, because the whole level was really enjoyable. if you get a chance, a little bit of feedback on my LBPGolfNA-Par 5 would be really helpful.

I really thought that I'd fixed that yesterday. I'll make a few more adjustments, thanks. :)

I'm going onto the LBP now to play those levels you posted. Thanks for all of your feedback do far everyone. :)

Vanemiera
04-11-2009, 10:53 PM
Images added, will try to get a video.



I could do that. I will film it when i get home again, if you don't mind;)

Killian
04-11-2009, 11:32 PM
I could do that. I will film it when i get home again, if you don't mind;)

That would be fantastic! :)

As far as I know, I have fixed the bug that stops you at the end. I have also just fixed the one at the beginning which allows you to go backwards along the invisible barriers.

Coreymill
04-12-2009, 06:46 PM
- Well, I played the level again and the first time when the guy hit me at the beginning of the level I ended up getting knocked out of the ball and had to start over.

- The second time I made it to the tree that wants you to feed him and I knocked the eggs down, but nothing happened. I think maybe they went too far or something so it didn't activate anything and I couldn't continue and had to start over.

- Third time through I was able to make it to the end! Finally. haha

As I said before I think it's a really nice idea for a level and I like it a lot. I just don't seem to have too much luck with it for whatever reason.

Killian
04-13-2009, 12:18 AM
- Well, I played the level again and the first time when the guy hit me at the beginning of the level I ended up getting knocked out of the ball and had to start over.

- The second time I made it to the tree that wants you to feed him and I knocked the eggs down, but nothing happened. I think maybe they went too far or something so it didn't activate anything and I couldn't continue and had to start over.

- Third time through I was able to make it to the end! Finally. haha

As I said before I think it's a really nice idea for a level and I like it a lot. I just don't seem to have too much luck with it for whatever reason.

I extended the radius on the nest so you shouldn't have that problem anymore. Thanks for the feedback. :)

deboerdave
04-13-2009, 02:36 AM
great level overall

i ran into one problem. after i feed the tree and then keep going forward the branches break. i guess they are supose to, but i ended up on the bottom of the level with no where to go. i think my guy was suppose to go more right when they broke, but got stuck more leftwhen the branch was falling and ended up down on the bottom

Vanemiera
04-13-2009, 02:15 PM
So Killian here is your video:

YouTube - LBPGolfEU - Par 1

dkjestrup
04-13-2009, 10:38 PM
I played this, and although it is cool, it could be more golf related lol.

4/5 stars from me

PS. I managed to get the 2p prize 1p! Try and fix it!

Killian
04-13-2009, 11:13 PM
So Killian here is your video:

YouTube - LBPGolfEU - Par 1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ITH7T6gmuI)

Thanks a lot! :)

+Rep for you.


I played this, and although it is cool, it could be more golf related lol.

4/5 stars from me

PS. I managed to get the 2p prize 1p! Try and fix it!

I wanted it to be different. :)

How did you manage that? Did you get it stuck?

dkjestrup
04-14-2009, 12:48 AM
The sensor must have been too small, I could roll in the middle, it would come down, I would roll to the edge and it would go up and somehow I got it!

Killian
04-15-2009, 11:01 AM
The sensor must have been too small, I could roll in the middle, it would come down, I would roll to the edge and it would go up and somehow I got it!

Hmm, I'll have to fix that. Thanks. :)

wexfordian
04-15-2009, 11:08 AM
I played this last night. Great level.

I loved the idea you "helping" the ball into the hole.

I liked your decoraration of the level also.

***** and heart. :)

Pitcard
04-15-2009, 12:37 PM
Just wanted to say, that music you used at the start of the level... thats the best music in the game :)

Super level btw, thoroughly enjoyable. I don't think there's much to add other than what people have already said.