View Full Version : Ghostly Story Reviews

04-26-2009, 03:17 PM
As you've probably noticed, the amount of stories being posted in this sub-forum is starting to rise; yet not enough.

So, I began to think for a while, working out what would encourage people to post some more stories here and whatnot and then I came up with the idea: 'Reviews'. I had a feeling that if people were guaranteed detailed feedback, they'd want to post their writing more frequently, so I decided that I could run this.


Simply post the name of your story to get started! :)

Waiting List:

Dawesbr - Evolution = Reviewed
Rocksauron - LBPC: The Villain = Reviewed
Cog - The Unknown
Dawesbr - Bits and Bobs
CreateNPlay - Wings of Speed
Hamsalad - Undead Hope
Pillaysteven - Hunted

04-26-2009, 03:22 PM
Interesting! Could you do my Story thus far, Evolution? I keep posting Chapters when I can, so I'll probably post here to ask you to review each new one. Anywho, yeah, check it out please :P

04-26-2009, 03:24 PM
My story :kz:

Just who IS the vet killer? :eek:

04-26-2009, 03:26 PM
I'll get right on it. :P

EDIT: Evolution - Reviewed

I'll be reviewing yours later on today, Rock; don't worry. :P

04-26-2009, 04:05 PM
Ah, very cool, could you do my story 'The Unknown'? Thank you.

04-26-2009, 04:40 PM
Oh yeah, could you also do all of these:


I know it's a bit much, but that's actually schoolwork that I need to learn from for my GCSEs, so feedback is actually pretty important :P

04-26-2009, 09:50 PM
Can you review my story please.


04-27-2009, 04:18 AM
want to do my story:P should be easy since you've read it already haha. at least what i have so far

04-27-2009, 02:15 PM
Right, from now on, even if I know it could you guys please actually post the name of your story please? It saves me from having to search around for it. :P

04-27-2009, 05:27 PM
Could ya do my one - "Hunted"


04-28-2009, 03:20 PM
My story Wings Of Speed Please.


04-28-2009, 08:40 PM
Right, I apologise guys, but I'm not sure I have much time for this - Perhaps one of you should make a reviewing thread?

04-28-2009, 09:03 PM
I already read 90% of threads :P (Sorry I haven't done yours yet, CnP.)