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Chump
07-26-2009, 09:58 PM
When The Bombs DIDN'T Fallchuck_18mp
You are a visitor in the Unfallen Bombs factory. The employees are some little jokers so they put hidden bombs everywhere. A must play if you don't like Bombs survival challenges.
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It is now longer and better. I'm sure you'll love it more than before.
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/BOMBS01.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/BOMBS02.jpg
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/BOMBGirl.jpg

New Video Review by obsoleteXeo:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XofH-E4z0xM

javi haguse
07-27-2009, 03:33 AM
This level was awesome!
Very creative!
I really like the overall design of the factory and all the details that you included. You can really tell you put a lot of work into it. It was awesome how you kept the dialogue smart and funny. The creepy girl character was also very well made. With her legs crossed and the funny nose, it was priceless. I think this is the first step on us forgetting about this entire "when the bombs fell" phenomena!!
I do have to say that it would be nice if you added some music to it. It felt kinda lonely at times ;)

Keep up the good work
:star::star::star::star: & beautiful

My F4F Level is: The Descent (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14107)

TheMarvelousHat
07-27-2009, 03:37 AM
I'll have to check that out.

I actually finished a bomb survival level set in a giant building ...




... Pondering if I should publish it ...

ll_ye
07-27-2009, 11:13 AM
The first obstacle there was pretty nice, it's a pretty decent level and I would've like to have seen a few more hazards.

Otherwise well crafted.

david1209
07-27-2009, 02:33 PM
great idea very original. weird though i searched it and there were no results :|

Adam9001
07-27-2009, 03:27 PM
Where the button is where you hold for 5 seconds, you can go behind the scnery.

And you cant get past that part ^^

EDIT: NVM.

I thought you had to jump on the girl then go over there top part, not go below xD.

Anyway cool level could be longer.

Ryutei
07-27-2009, 04:14 PM
'Sounds fun. I'll give it a try. It's about time someone does a level that DOESN'T make bombs fall.

Chump
07-27-2009, 05:26 PM
Thanks for the good and constructive comments! It's really appreciated.


Anyway cool level could be longer.

The reason why it's short is that I was in a monthly contest. The deadline was August 1st so... But with all the good crits I got, I think I'll maybe do not a sequel but a side story, um... *idea*

-Chuck

Little B.I.G
07-27-2009, 06:25 PM
What a great level and also a good creator!!!

Project_MK
07-27-2009, 10:32 PM
You had me feeling sorry for that little girl at the end - you could have made a really nice story-based level with her. The obstacles were nicely made, but easy, and there really was no challenge to this level - except at the beginning, of course. Three stars.

Chump
07-27-2009, 11:27 PM
Thank you very much for the crit Project_MK! I know there not much challenge. Because the subject of the contest was a funny level.


You had me feeling sorry for that little girl at the end - you could have made a really nice story-based level with her.

Yeah! I had a wonderful idea about a side story for this little girl. I say no more.

Little B.I.G
07-28-2009, 01:48 AM
tell us please we wanna know more:P!!

Chump
07-29-2009, 01:24 AM
So anyone play the level since the changes I made?

Chump
03-08-2010, 02:03 AM
Bumpity-Bump:
I added obsoleteXeo video review.

And just so you know, I'll continue it during the next weeks so check it out with the new stuff!

Chump
04-09-2010, 11:23 PM
Bump:
I wasn't feeling like doing another thread about a level that is basically the same but with better editing, lightning, gameplay and simply more fun!
Feel free to give constructive feedback and yes, I'm F4F ;)

pickled-punk
04-10-2010, 09:31 AM
Fantastic level. Simple, yet quirky and engaging backstory.

The basic ideas of the undetonated bombs worked really well: it created a sense of mild paranoia. Never knowing what will detonate. The bomb-sign is everywhere, but only some will detonate, and sometimes even simple pink floaty can blow you up.

Good gameplay. Some of the obstacles felt very fresh and original. Not too difficult, not too easy.

The little girl character was very well made. Sad and creepy. Be wise and heed the advice of her teddybear. I will definately check out the story level you've got planned.

One snag: the big bomb block you have to dragg up the incline is a bit heavy and unwielding.

Didn't manage to snatch away the prize-bubble, so I'll have to return for that.


If you have the time for F4F it would be great if you could take a look at one of my levels.

Chump
04-10-2010, 02:32 PM
THe bomb part is now fixed and the prize bubble, well you gotta bring a friend ;)
But, thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you liked it

Skeggers
04-20-2010, 04:15 PM
Added Your Review On The Weekly Reviews Thread
(http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?25612-Weekly-Reviews-%28Taking-Requests%29&highlight=Weekly+Reviews)

TheCountessZ
04-22-2010, 11:36 PM
I really like the changes you made, Chuck. I couldn't help but grimace every step I took...fearing that I'd get blown up (which did happen a few times). :) You really updated the platforming elements too. Your layer shifting skills are really good. And that little girl! Man she creeps me out (in a good way of course). She's hilarious. Well done, Chuck and glad you updated it.

midnight_heist
04-23-2010, 01:14 AM
The thing I loved about this level was the girl's story. I wanted more ! (platforming was fun too)
I was expecting the girl to say something like: "No! I don't want you to leave!" *creepy voice* and beat her as a boss or something.
You should extend this level or make a sequel, as it has a wonderfully simple yet engaging story.
Great level. :)

Hearted you as an author, your winter level is pretty cool too. :)

qrtda235566
04-23-2010, 02:43 AM
Yay! Longer? I must check this out again.

Chump
04-23-2010, 02:49 PM
whoa! Thank lot guys for the kind words!

@midnight_heist:
I have a workshop on my moon about a story with the little girl. So if I ever get my free time back and enough motivation to continue working on it, well, be sure I,ll let you guys know here :)