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supasheep
11-23-2009, 09:59 PM
The first level I've made :D It's based on one I made for my sister to act as a tutorial for her / to introduce me to the create mode. I've made it a bit more difficult, but it's still pretty easy. Please play and give as much criticism as possible :)

Sackwise
11-24-2009, 03:06 AM
I'll check it out tomorrow after school once it's been released on the US PSN :]

Taffey
11-24-2009, 06:33 AM
I played this earlier this evening, and although it's a very basic platformer I do like that you kept with the fire theme. Well, mostly. You said that this was intended to be more of a create mode tutorial than anything else, and for that purpose it probably works pretty well. Your hazards and challenges seem to be playtested and for the most part are entertaining, but there aren't many of them. The skateboard thing at the end is fairly ugly, and wonky as well - the rear wheel isn't centered on the bolt. The mechanics throughout are fine, but I'd just like to see this developed a little further.

I rated this one a 2.5/5, which rounds up to 3 stars in-game.

supasheep
11-24-2009, 08:39 PM
Ok, thanks for the honest opinion :)

Taffey
11-25-2009, 05:30 AM
No problem. :)

I honestly did enjoy your level... At least it's complete. There's a lot of half baked experiments in the community levels pool right now, but yours isn't one of them.

Now, go make it longer and I'll play it again! :)

Darth J464
12-02-2009, 09:34 PM
It was good, but it needed some music.