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G-Hustla
03-06-2010, 02:26 PM
Hi , I'll review your level. Saying about your good and bad bits , what could be improved upon and what is exceptionally good . If there is any pictures you're lucky !!

I will ( if I can) play the level with some friends as well so I have a few more things to say.

Any level will be reviewed but I am kinda biased against bomb survivals , I find these too repetitive .

NOTE: I will only review a level if it has 3 or more stars as a rating.

austimerr
03-06-2010, 02:33 PM
How bout my level
Name: Bamboozled
PSN: gmerritt

iGotFancyPants
03-06-2010, 04:00 PM
Please review:

Escaping the Doctor's Cave
by iGotFancyPants

Thanks in advance! :D

LordMagicPants
03-06-2010, 04:33 PM
If it's not too much trouble...

King Orca And His EVIL Sandcastle Of DOOM!
by LordMagicPants

G-Hustla
03-06-2010, 06:52 PM
Ok guys , I will start work on your reviews tommorow lunch . Not allowed on PS3 after game marathon today.

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 12:16 PM
Ok , I'm about to start playing your levels.

samalot
03-07-2010, 12:33 PM
just an idea, why dont you join
littlebigreviewers ?
www.sackcast.co.uk/lbr
I have seen a couple of these thread around, i ahve nothing against them but I know that lbp is run by only 2 people and they would be happy for help XD

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 12:34 PM
REVIEW: Bamboozled by gmeritt.

Just by playing 2 minutes worth of this I could tell everything belonged with each other , although you may want to avoid showing the level floor in some obstacles .
In some places this is hard , like at the bit with the grass pplatform on a winch and oiston followede by a jumping challenge. I found myslef dying almost too much here , maybe have a checkpoint up there somewhere ?
I found 1 censored bit of text after I had found all of the seeds .
Some of the gameplay sections later on were definately diferent to most puzzles I've seen recently.
The level had a decent amount of score bubbles .
Overal I would rate this level 4/5 stars as it was good but difficult in places.

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 12:35 PM
ok , I'll try to join that later.

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 12:53 PM
REVIEW : Escaping the Doctor's Cave by iGotFancyPants.

This level has great visuals and some good platforming from square 1 .
I got stuck in various places and therefore had to pop back to the start of the level. Some of the lights don't seem to look right though , why lime green lights in a cave ? (refernce from level ) " I'm outside but where do I go ?? " " What about going home ?"
The ending feels like the serpent shrine ( MM) , didyou use the canyons template or did you make that ? Good overal ending .
Overal I wold rate this : 4 stars/5

iGotFancyPants
03-07-2010, 12:59 PM
REVIEW : Escaping the Doctor's Cave by iGotFancyPants.

This level has great visuals and some good platforming from square 1 .
I got stuck in various places and therefore had to pop back to the start of the level. Some of the lights don't seem to look right though , why lime green lights in a cave ? (refernce from level ) " I'm outside but where do I go ?? " " What about going home ?"
The ending feels like the serpent shrine ( MM) , didyou use the canyons template or did you make that ? Good overal ending .
Overal I wold rate this : 4 stars/5

Thanks for the review! And no, I didn't use any templates. All was made by me.

Also, I used green coloured lights to make the cave seem more lively and exciting. It was all part of the theme. Which parts did you get stuck at? I never had any problems with people getting stuck before.

Thanks again!

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 01:17 PM
REVIEW: King orca and His EVIL Sandcastle of DOOM! by LordMagicPants.
I blame that rap music !!! LOL!! I have paint on my nails and make up on my face !! This level has great humor and a good fun challenging design .
Some great platforming puzzles can be found inside this level. It has a thing about it thatmakes it look and feel planned , not just randomly created in create mode .
I found the underwater race section great until I tried to do the bit with the explosives and none EVER came , so I had to return to pod .
Overal 4-5/5stars

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 01:28 PM
No problem ,
got stuck on the ancient vases a few times , I kept on getting trapped and had to pop.

RedShadow_88
03-07-2010, 01:43 PM
Hey man, could you review my new level?

The Secrets Of Red Canyon - A New Adventure Starts
by RedShadow_88

Also can be found on the cool pages. (at the moment it's on page 5 I think)

austimerr
03-07-2010, 02:00 PM
REVIEW: Bamboozled by gmeritt.

Just by playing 2 minutes worth of this I could tell everything belonged with each other , although you may want to avoid showing the level floor in some obstacles .
In some places this is hard , like at the bit with the grass pplatform on a winch and oiston followede by a jumping challenge. I found myslef dying almost too much here , maybe have a checkpoint up there somewhere ?
I found 1 censored bit of text after I had found all of the seeds .
Some of the gameplay sections later on were definately diferent to most puzzles I've seen recently.
The level had a decent amount of score bubbles .
Overal I would rate this level 4/5 stars as it was good but difficult in places.

Thanx G. Yea I know the green platform part is kinda hard but hey, people need to be challenged to keep them entertained. Thanks for giving me four stars.

LordMagicPants
03-07-2010, 02:07 PM
Thanks, much appreciated. Did you try pulling on both switches near the bomb part?

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 03:01 PM
REVIEW: The Secrets of Red Canyon - The New Adventure Starts by RedShadow_88.

This level is like a terrorist HQ ,packed with bombs and danger .
This is a great level in the mines theme ( not template) , it has a good challenge on a train , a variety of obstacles , a car that needs to be fixed by finding repair kits and a LOAD of bombs and exhileration.
I struggle to find any bad points here , I'm looking forward to the rest of the sereis .
Overall 5/5

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 03:03 PM
@ LordMagicPants . Yes I did pull both of the switches but still couldn't get any bombs to appear.

RedShadow_88
03-07-2010, 03:11 PM
REVIEW: The Secrets of Red Canyon - The New Adventure Starts by RedShadow_88.

This level is like a terrorist HQ ,packed with bombs and danger .
This is a great level in the mines theme ( not template) , it has a good challenge on a train , a variety of obstacles , a car that needs to be fixed by finding repair kits and a LOAD of bombs and exhileration.
I struggle to find any bad points here , I'm looking forward to the rest of the sereis .
Overall 5/5

Thanks a lot for your review G! (:
I'm working on part 2 so stayed tuned!

ladylyn1
03-07-2010, 04:40 PM
Level: 'Myst: Masterpiece Edition'
PSN: Ladylyn1

Note, you will need to play the introduction first, plus the finale is in a separate level... I hope ur up for a challenge!

You could find yourself playing this level for well over 1 hour. If u start to get frustrated and stuck here is the link to the Level Showcase which includes the walk-through:

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?22388-Myst-Masterpiece-Edition&highlight=myst+masterpiece

Thanks in advance

G-Hustla
03-07-2010, 07:55 PM
Woah !!1 2 famous / cool creators !!!! I can't wait Redshadow and I'll start you review soon ladylyn if it takes over 1 hour if my brain is slow then I should probaly start tommorow .


EDIT: Well ladylyn if Myst is any good I won't mind spending an hour on it ! =)

shebhnt
03-07-2010, 08:59 PM
Hey there, I was wondering if you could give me your opinion on my level:

Joe Snow Mountain
Shebhnt

Thanks for your time!

G-Hustla
03-08-2010, 06:11 PM
Hi guys , bad news . Tonight I'm at Army Cadets until I have to come off PS3 time and tommorow I'm playing rugby at school until 5 soo I may be tired and quite dopey =)

liljokerjc
03-08-2010, 11:42 PM
Hey, can you review my theme park level. it is called littlebigsixflags themepark by liljokerjc

Taz_1981
03-09-2010, 06:10 PM
Lvl DoughBoy's vengeance
PSN Taz_1981

G-Hustla
03-09-2010, 07:06 PM
REVIEW : Myst Masterpiece Edition by ladylyn1
WOW!! This is an amazing looking level from the start , with a good use of materials and stickers/decorations .
Some of the puzlzles are challenging TO THE MAX!
I had to use the walkthrough since it was too complicated for me . Again I'm struggling to find some bads points for this great level ; well done !!

G-Hustla
03-11-2010, 06:48 PM
Sorry guys I won't be doing a reviews for a while.