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MTVirux
03-30-2010, 04:15 PM
Imagination Landshadowsilver2000
This is a level that takes you on a quest to reach Imagination Land.

But first you will have to pass some tests along with sackboy you just met called Dr. Sack
Collect the Runes of Imagination to increase your imagination skills.

Leave any (CONSTRUCTIVE) feedback you want.
And post what you think of it.

Fastbro
03-30-2010, 09:22 PM
I'm downloading this level now, so I'll leave feedback a little later.

VelcroJonze
03-31-2010, 03:20 AM
Hello MTVirux!! Welcome to the psp forums.

This is the best place on the web for lbp psp and I hope you have a blast here.

On to your level. First of all, add some music. For me it is a must, even Glokenpop is better than nothing. :)

I liked the gas block piston contraption and I made it through without dieing!! I liked the story, the idea of absorbing a rune of imagination is intriguing. I like the whole "talk to him or die!", and the emitted platforms are a nice touch. Lot's of stairs (I don't like stairs), but they lead to a Boss!! Well worth the trek upstairs. The boss was a pushover but his electrified SkillSaw, kills me, and take revenge for his fallen commander. Now a key, and another, and a penny with a key in it. Lot's of keys!! And the big finish.

Hmm..., not bad, your level designs need some work, and there were no point bubbles, which gives this level zero replayabilty in my opinion. Also, add a background instead of using the default carpet room, unless that's what you wanted of course. I will add, that your sticker work on the emitted platforms was very nice, you are good with stickers. :)

So, overall I gave you three stars for your level, if you add some music, point bubbles and a background I'll replay it it grade it again, how's that?

Since this is a f4f thread, can you give my new levels Timber Canyon or Tera Cota a run?

masterlemons
03-31-2010, 01:10 PM
I might check this out, but as Timber said, prize bubbles, music, and (usually) backgrounds are a must.

VelcroJonze
03-31-2010, 10:25 PM
I might check this out, but as Timber said, prize bubbles, music, and (usually) backgrounds are a must.

I like my new name, TimberJonze!! :D

Lilman1101
04-01-2010, 12:13 AM
timber or lumberjack

VelcroJonze
04-01-2010, 05:11 AM
timber or lumberjack

AxeManJonze!! :cool:

Sorry MTVirux, back to your thread now. :blush:

Domik12
04-01-2010, 08:19 AM
Hi, MTVirux. Main idea of your level is great! And realisation is not bad, but if you will do more detailed and well corner edited environments it will be much better. I think, that Imagination Land must have more impressive to the eye views. So I gave you 5 stars for idea and inly 2 stars for realisation. It equal to 3 stars in game. Sorry, but I think you can make more impressive level. And I will wait it from you! Good Luck!

MTVirux
04-03-2010, 09:54 PM
I'll plan the v1.1 It should be ready later tonight

masterlemons
04-03-2010, 10:28 PM
xD I dunno why I put Timber, I think it was cause I was thinking of Timber Canyon.

MTVirux
04-03-2010, 10:32 PM
xD I dunno why I put Timber, I think it was cause I was thinking of Timber Canyon.

Do you mind I'm trying to run a level here :P