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Dhana777
05-19-2010, 11:40 PM
Cavernous CanyonSchottiSM
Sackboy flies in a small plane over the Cavernous Canyon.
Suddenly the plane crashes, and he must find his way to the next town.
But beware, the Canyon is dangerous!
Please mind that my PSN for PSP is SchottiSM

Thank You!



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rn41la0sQ7k

Thanks to Jeffcu28 for this great Video:)


Special Thank's to RedRenegade who forced me to build a Level:rolleyes:
*joking* He really helped me a lot with my Level !

Voltergeist
05-19-2010, 11:45 PM
Oh my gosh! You made "Demo" didn't you! Well, if this is anything like it, then this will be a very good level. Sorry I never gave feedback to that by the way.

Dhana777
05-19-2010, 11:55 PM
It is "Demo" but now it is finished :)

Voltergeist
05-20-2010, 01:46 AM
Hey, I'm here with your feedback!

Wow. Let me just say that was a very impressive level.

The art was amazing for the most part, especially that long skeleton - my jaw definitely dropped there. Only one improvement here: Try using more materials to make the caves - layer materials and see what goes well together. Gameplay was a blast - literally, with all those bombs! - and there was lots to explore, which I really like. Having multiple ways to play through is a great touch. I loved feeding the worms, and "Don't Activate" - I should listen to the games more, hehe. Here's one more tip on that note though: experiment with pistons and winches, they make the level feel less like a walk and more like a ride!

This level gets five stars and a heart, and you're receiving a creator heart from me too! I'm gonna try to get some friends around here to play this, because it would be a tragedy to see this fantastic level go unnoticed. I can tell by this you're heading for some great levels in your future. Can't wait to see what you make next!

On the subject of F4F, would you visit my Blue Behemoth level? I could use some more feedback. It's just a demo though.

Great work!

Alismuffin
05-20-2010, 06:22 AM
As B3 said, the multiple paths are really nice! I played it twice cos of that:) art is good, and i could see u were trying to make some parts look further away, but it would help if u used the black gradient sticker. All in all awesome level though:)

Captain Rule
05-20-2010, 07:23 AM
This level is great! I had a lot of fun with it. The visuals were pretty awesome and had some fun in it. I really liked your sticker switch and The skeletons put my skeleton to shame. 5 stars for you.

RedRenegade
05-20-2010, 11:11 AM
Love the level very much you know! ;) But before i play the level again i have to delete all downloaded level. I reached 250. xD Hope i can play it soon and give it again 5 Stars and Heart. :D

EDIT: Sony should add a delete all downloaded levels butten! ^^

Dhana777
05-20-2010, 09:45 PM
Many thanks to you all, I have to admit I am overwhelmed from your great feedback:)

@BlueBulletBill:
Your first Post blew me away!


Hey, I'm here with your feedback!

Wow. Let me just say that was a very impressive level.

The art was amazing for the most part, especially that long skeleton - my jaw definitely dropped there.
Thank You!
Only one improvement here: Try using more materials to make the caves - layer materials and see what goes well together.
I will do my best^^
Gameplay was a blast - literally, with all those bombs!
inspired by Secret of Red Canyon from RedShadow88 on PS3 he allowed me to watch over his shoulder while he built his Level (:
- and there was lots to explore, which I really like. Having multiple ways to play through is a great touch. I loved feeding the worms, and "Don't Activate" - I should listen to the games more, hehe.
HeHe I know I'm nasty (;
Here's one more tip on that note though: experiment with pistons and winches, they make the level feel less like a walk and more like a ride!You got me! I hate Pistons, but you're right I need Piston Practise (;

This level gets five stars and a heart, and you're receiving a creator heart from me too! I'm gonna try to get some friends around here to play this, because it would be a tragedy to see this fantastic level go unnoticed. I can tell by this you're heading for some great levels in your future. Can't wait to see what you make next!Thank You! (:

On the subject of F4F, would you visit my Blue Behemoth level? I could use some more feedback. It's just a demo though.

Great work!


As B3 said, the multiple paths are really nice! I played it twice cos of that:) art is good, and i could see u were trying to make some parts look further away, but it would help if u used the black gradient sticker. All in all awesome level though:)

Thank You!


This level is great! I had a lot of fun with it. The visuals were pretty awesome and had some fun in it. I really liked your sticker switch and The skeletons put my skeleton to shameHeHe but I cheated with my skeleton (;

. 5 stars for you.
Thank You!



Love the level very much you know! ;) But before i play the level again i have to delete all downloaded level. I reached 250. xD Hope i can play it soon and give it again 5 Stars and Heart. :D
There woulden't be a Level without You! You urged me two or three weeks until I said "ok I'm giving up I try to built a Level on PSP!" (; Thank's for your betatesting and your advices!"
EDIT: Sony should add a delete all downloaded levels butten! ^^

VelcroJonze
05-21-2010, 01:23 AM
Hello Dhana!! :)

Loved your level. The different paths almost gave the level an open world feel to it, and was very fun to explore. I loved the level layout, and you have a great eye for detail. The skeletons were awesome especially the snake. Very impressive. Not much bad at all with this. I had a great time playing it.

I gave you five stars and a heart and one for creator too because I want to see what you come up with next.

Great job!! :)

Domik12
05-21-2010, 10:38 AM
Hello Dhana!

I tried your level and found it very cool madded! You created very good adventure with nice environments. And it is great idea to add some additional parts in level, that players can find on not during their adventure. I loved the way you made snake skeleton - it looks very believable. My respect for your hard work with corner tool. I had much fun during gameplay and saw many very beautiful things! My only comment is that transition from cave into city madded very cutting. There is almost no any supposition for it before.

But anyway - level is great! I gave you 5 stars and heart and creator heart too! Please make more interesting levels with such great environments and story!

Dhana777
05-22-2010, 08:59 AM
Thank You VelcroJonze and Domik12! (:
Your Feedback is in progress.



My only comment is that transition from cave into city madded very cutting. There is almost no any supposition for it before.

I know I don't like this part by myself.I hope I find a better way for this in my next level.


I just want to thank you all!
I never dared to dream of such gread feedbacks :love:

Taffey
05-30-2010, 09:25 PM
Congratulations on the Spotlight Dhana! We all had an excellent time playing this. :D

VelcroJonze
05-30-2010, 09:47 PM
Way to go on the spotlight!!

I was hoping the team would notice this gem. :)

Alismuffin
05-30-2010, 09:57 PM
Congrats!:D well deserved
u better make more levels!

jeffcu28
05-30-2010, 10:04 PM
Hey Dhana,

Congratulations on the spotlight! I really liked your snake skeletons: they were astounding! :D

To post a video of your level in the OP, just use this code:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rn41la0sQ7k

I hope to see more from you in the future!


Exploding,
jeffcu28

Voltergeist
05-30-2010, 10:28 PM
Nice work getting this spotlighted! It kinda feels like I've parented this level, since I followed it from "Demo" till now.

They grow up so fast, (*sniff*),
B3

Dhana777
05-30-2010, 11:03 PM
:boo: wow Im speechless

Thank You all !:love:

Fastbro
05-31-2010, 12:00 AM
Congrats on the spotlight! I still haven't got round to playing it though! :(

Spark151
05-31-2010, 04:03 AM
Congrats on the spotlight!
I have checked it out, but I stopped like a quarter far in the level.
I didn't know what I was suppose to do. Anyways, I will check it out when I can.

Dhana777
05-31-2010, 08:50 AM
Congrats on the spotlight!
I have checked it out, but I stopped like a quarter far in the level.
I didn't know what I was suppose to do. Anyways, I will check it out when I can.

If you want , you could discribe the spot where you stuck and I'll give you a hint ;)

Arrestor
06-01-2010, 02:24 PM
Hi Dhana,

I am very late to the overall Feedback Party here on LBPC and am now trying to get back to it. Therefore i didnt read through this thread or any previous tips.

The Feedback:
Your level really looks great! The first scene is well made and the little background story is just enough to motivate the player. What i really liked is the fact, that there are multiple paths and that the player is always able to backtrack and investigate what the other possibility would have been. Your caves look really awesome and the gameplay is fun to! I really love the Snakes! You did a great job with them and i think its ingenious to use one component over and over again. That saves time and looks just great! (actually i think this will be usefull someday :D)
The only thing i really didnt like was the ending. In my opinion its over too soon and the city doesnt fit the rest of the level. It feels like you just wanted the level to be over...

Anyway, 5 stars and a creator heart from me!

Greetings!

Dhana777
06-02-2010, 12:53 PM
Hi Dhana,

I am very late to the overall Feedback Party here on LBPC and am now trying to get back to it. Therefore i didnt read through this thread or any previous tips.

The Feedback:
Your level really looks great! The first scene is well made and the little background story is just enough to motivate the player. What i really liked is the fact, that there are multiple paths and that the player is always able to backtrack and investigate what the other possibility would have been. Your caves look really awesome and the gameplay is fun to! I really love the Snakes! You did a great job with them and i think its ingenious to use one component over and over again. That saves time and looks just great! (actually i think this will be usefull someday :D)

Thats simply how Snakes look inside ;)
but I simplyfied it a little bit Click here (http://www.bildwoerterbuch.com/images/all/skelett-einer-giftschlange-286020.jpg)


The only thing i really didnt like was the ending. In my opinion its over too soon and the city doesnt fit the rest of the level. It feels like you just wanted the level to be over...
The Snake took very much Thermometer :( I had to bring it to an end

Anyway, 5 stars and a creator heart from me!
Thank You!
Greetings!

I'm working on your Feedbacks, but it will take some time
I'm busy at the moment:(

Coxy224
06-02-2010, 09:05 PM
Hey, just played through this level and have to say I really enjoyed it :)
Some great platforming, and some nice extra areas you could gain bonus points for, added to replay value and made me really want that top score! Instant fun :p

Sometimes I strayed a little bit from the track and ended up killing myself accidentally, but that was more my own fault. Totally enjoyed your level overall, and I love the visuals and side-tasks.

:star::star::star::star::star: and a <3

If you're still doing F4F: In Search of Idols (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?28023-In-Search-of-Idols-by-Coxy224&p=486722#post486722)

Dhana777
06-13-2010, 10:35 PM
Thanks for this nice Feedback Coxy! :D

amazingflyingpoo
06-14-2010, 12:06 PM
Hidy Ho Dhana777! I don't think that I have had the opportunity of chatting with you yet, so I'll start off by saying hello :-D

So, about this level:

This level is great in so many ways. It has an excellent platforming feel that harkens back to when Lleonard was making PSP levels (hear that Lleonard? I'm still waiting for a new level!). It looks amazing. I just can't believe how awesome those snakes in the cave looked! It was funny, because you had a series of different snakes, and every time I would see one I would think "Wow, this is an incredible set piece", just to find that the next one looked even better.

There was a great mix of platforming, from monkey climbing, straight climbing, and even mine cart riding! There were even secrets! Great stuff.

The only problem that I ran into in the level was that the mine cart ended up going without me. I can't really remember how it happened, but somehow it went on and I was stuck. You created small ledges that I could jump along, but it was pretty tough due to the bad camera angle for downhill jumping.

That brings up one other point that wasn't really a problem. I felt that there were many awesome areas in the level that could have used cool camera angles, but there was no angle to be found. It seems to me that you are someone who is great at creating top-notch set pieces, so why not fully utilize them by having a camera angle that compliments it?

Alrighty, that is all I have. Just to give you a heads-up, I'm thinking that this may just be the next LBL Level of the Week because it is oh, so good!

Dhana777
06-21-2010, 01:16 PM
Hello Mr Poo ;)
Thanks for your kind words :)

I hope I can improve my levelbuilding skill with all this great feedback I got from you all!

himoks
06-21-2010, 04:28 PM
The level was just AMAZING and i loved how you did the snake skeletons. I gave it 5 stars and heart.

kaiju_kid
06-25-2010, 01:12 PM
Hi Dhana
I like you level alot, but I don't want to repeat what everybody else has already said. Everybody seems to like the snakes..Look at the awesome snakes they say... they are sooo realistic snakes... it's like the best snake I've ever seen... I think even a real snake posted on your thread how much you made the snake look like him and his kind.. So, I'm not going to mention that I like the snakes in your level, nope. Um, but I did enjoy the level alot...yeah... Aw, what the heck, the SNAKE SKELETONS WERE COOOL!!!!
:love:

Dhana777
06-26-2010, 10:06 PM
Hi Dhana
I like you level alot, but I don't want to repeat what everybody else has already said. Everybody seems to like the snakes..Look at the awesome snakes they say... they are sooo realistic snakes... it's like the best snake I've ever seen... I think even a real snake posted on your thread how much you made the snake look like him and his kind.. So, I'm not going to mention that I like the snakes in your level, nope. Um, but I did enjoy the level alot...yeah... Aw, what the heck, the SNAKE SKELETONS WERE COOOL!!!!
:love:

I'm glad you didn't mention the Snakes, I can't hear it anymore ;)



Nah compliments never get old :D