View Full Version : What happens next?
08-07-2010, 10:03 PM
Instead of me writing a story, I'll let the community decide how it goes. I'm going to start it off with a paragraph. then the next comment will continue it with another comment. as will the next, and the next, and the next, etc.
Ex: (*** = sentences)
Now User2 continues it.
1. Each comment that continues the story can only be 1 paragraph.
2. You cannot put your comments back-2-back to each other.
3.Don't continue with gore and horror. Teens and adults aren't the only ones on lbpc.
4. The story is in a sackperson's point of view.;) (Why not?)
5. Have fun with it!
I backed up from the gap and sprinted to the edge with a great leap following it. My attempt failed as a decorated block emitted suddenly in front of me. Darn platformer level, I'm always at the wrong place at the wrong time! "Of course! The trees!" i told myself. I leaped up the stairs of trees and sprung above the block and landed triumphantly on the other side of the gap.
09-05-2010, 08:27 PM
EDIT: i am very sorry about the big bump, this was in the middle of the first page, and also, this should be in the games.
Heaving myself up on the block, i look ahead. "GREAT!" i yelled, another 50 cm plummet. The fall ends with huge spikes. "ouch" i said, waile holding onto my zipper, i dont want to lose my stuffing... So this time, i went as far back as i can. i started sprinting, and toke a nother leap of fath, this time, i missed the block. I am getting near the block to land on. at the last time, gravity toke over. I plummet down. I Hit the spikes and black out...
09-11-2010, 03:32 AM
<< I like the fact that it's hidden here...it should keep the "blah blah, and every one dies" people at a distance. Plus, as long as we try to keep the quality of our paragraphs up, it fits here just fine, I'd think.>>
My name is Jackie, and I am a sack-boy. I've also just knocked my self out cold... I may as well catch you up on how I got into this situation, since I'm not all that busy at the moment. As far back as I can remember, I've never been particularly lucky. Other sack people got cushy jobs in costume tutorials, ramp levels, and H4h levels. Guess what my first job was.
09-19-2010, 11:32 PM
I had to corner edit circles!! Goodness gracious, I only got paid like 4 bubbles an hour! And my boss hates me. He's very rude too, constanly throwing missiles and impact explosives at me. One time he even dropped a rocket cheetah on my head!! I had to go to the hospital for a month! And you wouldn't believe the bill, it was over..
09-22-2010, 03:45 AM
"That is enough! I am leaving!" I said. "Where exactly do you plan to go?" my boss fired back at me. "Anywhere... ANYWHERE but HERE!" Then I was off... off on a journey into the world of limitless levels... (or about 3,000,000 levels...) Where was I going? I didn't know. I started from the top of the globe and made my way down towards the middle. Then I had found it... This place... This level... was for me...
10-01-2010, 07:31 AM
"Don't Panic", read the title in big friendly letters next to the entrance. I knew that this was my kind of level! Looking around, I noticed that the shading was somehow nicer, and that there was music playing that I'd never heard before. Then it hit me. "Jumpin' Johosaphat bouncing on a trampoline!", I exclaimed. I had somehow slipped through the regular network, and landed smack-dab in a BETA level!
10-02-2010, 09:03 AM
:o i thought the story had failed XD i had made this during my first week here, so I didn't even know the forum games existed :p)
10-10-2010, 01:17 AM
It wasn't just ANY beta, it was the LBP2 beta! :boo: A sackperson dressed as a construction worker came over to me. "What are you doing in those rags, laddie?" He said. "Follow me, I'll lend you some of my work outfits." I followed him back to his house. I gotta say, it has to be cool livin' in an underground house. "I don't need my job, I mine 'bout a pound of gold a day. But mah wife says I might get credit for testing the LBP2 levels. I say the'll mension my name in the small print and that'll be it." He paused. "How about this, you go to work dressed in my clothes, get all the money, and I'll just stay home? Your lookin' for work right? The only thing I'll get is my name mensioned. What do ya say to dat?" :)
10-27-2010, 09:28 PM
lol great story you guys!
11-05-2010, 09:49 PM
Can I continue it? :) This story is going to be an interesting one!
11-09-2010, 08:35 PM
sure! no problem! i enjoy seeing what you guys come up with :)
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