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lbp is awespme
09-13-2010, 09:16 PM
thats right it is time sackboy ahhhhh the dream osphere the power to make any dreams come true use it to your advantage.it could be the final show down be tween you and the king of sky to shape your and the argnoien cultures destiny. well 3 is done four is in the works but they will be released together to conclude the series

Ricky-III
09-13-2010, 11:42 PM
dude, you really got to stop rushing your levels and improve your grammar. The following is constructive critiscism, not dissing: Your first two levels due to the grammar I could not understand at all. You must have good grammar that fully explains your story or no one will want to play and highly rate your levels. Please take more time to improve this and you will have much better levels. Please take this into consideration.

Balgarino
09-14-2010, 01:29 AM
Yeah,he's heard that like a hundred times...it's hard to learn correct grammar:D right lbp is awespme? :p

Ricky-III
09-14-2010, 02:36 AM
yeah, i know, Ive gone through it a few times with him already, but I never give up! :)

Spark151
09-14-2010, 11:23 PM
Whoa, maybe lbp is awespme is a typo.
I realized the letter P is next to O. I'm late. XP

Anyways, I have nothing to say, but good luck!

Ricky-III
09-14-2010, 11:28 PM
im late too, I never realized that! Good luck on your level, sorry for the harsh criticism

lbp is awespme
09-16-2010, 01:57 AM
wobble bolt fail corrupt and have to restart both my sister deleted 3 and corrupt 4.new level thread i am putting these aaway for a while