View Full Version : Parakee's Ending Contest

10-21-2010, 12:11 PM
I am having a contest to get the best ending possible for Parakee isle, the series. Post your idea on how to have the last level play out, make sure you play the third one first though, so that you know how it is gonna start. It must end with sackboy making it safely back home. Also, i don't want any bomb/shark survival style ideas, becasue there are already to many of those. Anyway, the top ten ( once i have all of the entries ) will go into a poll which will be the final vote. Prize: a heart from me, publicity within the level for yourself and your levels, and maybe more. if you have any questions, post them here.

10-21-2010, 04:22 PM
Can you explain the story so far?
(and don't worry, nobody will suggest a bomb/shark survival, at least not seriously)

10-21-2010, 11:29 PM
i was going to, but it took so long to post, that it automatically logged me out T.T ... i should have copied it before i hit post... aww man. that sucks. best thing i can say to do is play the level. because i personally am not going to rewrite that.... if someone wouldn't mind.. play it, and write a shortened version of the story, please, later i will post a full version, with pictures, and this time i will write it on a document, save it, and then post it. sorry. i will get the story here asap! but, it would be helpful if someone could make a shortened version. also, if you REALLY NEED TO KNOW the back story to the final level, just play the first three. thanks.

10-25-2010, 01:52 AM
You start out in a sand cave, which is connected to the docks, where you landed at parakee ( not shown, only see the cave. ) you see a stand, and ask where you can get a vehicle, the cashier tells you just a little ways away. you find a buggy shop, the shopkeeper tells you there are some out back, so you jump in one and take off. you drive to the cave under the mountain. you walk into the mountain, and too the elevator that takes you to the ski lift, which takes you to the peak which has the lodge which you have booked a room in on it. you get across the very large gap, you see clouds just beside your car, but be carful not to fall out, becuase you will die in tha fall! ( not to mention i couldn't get it so that the lift would reappear at it's starting postition. ( sorry )) anyway, you reach the other side, and you go into a tunnel, when you come out the other side, you see a lava flow, and some large, long boulders sticking out of the side of the cliff, you climb these, and reach the top, and find some lava flowing down from an overhang above. you follow the path you have jut found, and find the lodge, and the receptionist tells you your room is ready. ( end of part one. BTW this isn't nearly as good a story as the original one, but as per the mistake noted above, i cannot show you the best one. ) you wake up on your third day at parakee, on the floor. you wonder why, but ignore it, and go outside, back toward the ski lift, only to find out it was destroyed by an earthquake and some of the lava you saw a couple of days ago. so, you head towards the zip line, as per the receptionist's suggestion. you see the lava flow you had noticed the other day on the overhang, and use rocks to get across ( it is the invincible material that looks like lava, it is safe to step on. ) and then follow the path that is littered with rocks, fallen from the peaks above. you continue, until you see an upwinding path paved with white wood, and with white wooden guard rails. you follow it to the zipline station, where you jump in a zipline and slide down. you get to the bottom, and go through a tunnel, which is coated in leaves. you follow the path through a beutiful forest, and find a warp station. you smile for the camera in the wall, and then it spits out an id card ( the photo, all must be in range to get the photo, otherwise, just use any sticker. you place the sticker on the warper's scanner ( the sticker switch, MAKE SURE YOU ARE IN WARPER BEFORE YOU PLACE THE STICKER) and then you get warped to the station near the docks. you walk toward the door, and an old man tells you to hurry up, and that most of teh boats are gone. you run, and get there just a bit too late, someone is just getting into the last boat. ( end of part two, the best decorated part of the series, is the forest. i think it is quite beutiful. ) you wake up the next day in the chair you fell asleep in on the day before, and get into the only boat back into the docks, you start across the gulf, and run into a small island, you notice wheels on the bottom of the boat, and you roll right across the island. you arrivee at the midgulf docks, where you meet the expert diver you saw on the tv in the dock station ( where you woke up ) you ask him if you can borrow a diving suit, so that you can get to the yacht you rented on the other side of a building, he says yes, and then you go up inside the building blocking your way, and jump atop some boxes, and pull a lever, which makes the door start down, but it gets stuck, so you jump over it. ( yes, it is intentional that it gets stuck in the level. most think it was a mistake. ) ( you jump from atop the boxes. ) you follow the dock to the port where your yacht is at, ( end of part three ) you head off on your way to..... ( start of part four, the ending level, which i need made. ) here are some [ictures which go along with the story. ( yes, they are in order, so don't worry. ) http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9246/71681668.jpg http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1138/68200010.jpg http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9969/67294730.jpg http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/115/21019298.jpg http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/2956/65381955.jpg http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/9534/26785369.jpg http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2888/68124547.jpg http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5690/forest1d.jpg http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/7201/forest2i.jpg http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8207/forest3.jpg http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5948/75224943.jpg http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6567/10569519.jpg http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/7575/46634670.jpg http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6554/60798853.jpg http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4466/39484802.jpg thanks for reading, and looking.