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Caemgen
11-18-2008, 07:44 AM
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Lost in the Cold

There are stories of a creature who lives in the hills of Antarctica. Most of the Sackpeople are aware of this threat and few dare to cross his path, though it is the fastest route to Sackcity, a place of creative wealth and technology. You, however, do not care about this myth. You, the bravest Sackboy of them all, will defeat this creature!

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Hello!

I'm happy to inform you about my third level, which I've (finally) published yesterday. I invite you to check it out and leave your thoughts!
Also, someone please check for errors in my level-description (above), since I'm Dutch and my English isn't flawless.. Thanks!

I've added two screens (more will follow). :D

NinjaXYZ
11-18-2008, 09:02 AM
Your English is quite good in that description. Perhaps an English major might be able to find something wrong with it, but I actually thought it was well written and it makes me want to play the level. Tomorrow, I will. For now, sleepy time. :) Looks like a cool level though... temperature-wise too! :hero:

Caemgen
11-18-2008, 10:09 AM
Your English is quite good in that description. Perhaps an English major might be able to find something wrong with it, but I actually thought it was well written and it makes me want to play the level. Tomorrow, I will. For now, sleepy time. :) Looks like a cool level though... temperature-wise too! :hero:

Thank you! I'm looking forward to your reaction when you've played the level.

azbgamer
11-18-2008, 07:08 PM
Wow your level is very cool

Caemgen
11-18-2008, 11:06 PM
Wow your level is very cool

Thank you! :D