View Full Version : Yes, use F4F Sweet Dreams (Short-Film) (RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK)
A short film, Best with volume up loud.
http://lbp.me/v/x29ygv
JonnysToyRobot
02-27-2011, 09:20 PM
If you say so, I don't like being forced into things though :S
Any description on what's involved? I won't be able to play till tomorrow so I'd quite like to know.
Anyway, if you have time take a look at the level in my sig, thanks (:
Haha,
I don't want to give anything away. It's pretty short so It would be better if you just watched it. :O
Sawicki420
03-01-2011, 11:48 PM
very cool, did you make that don't stop believing? if you could be so kind as to try my level id appreciate it.http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?51571-Silent-Hill-2
Twinsanity
07-24-2011, 10:01 PM
That was scary :P lol. For f4f: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?58419-Hula-Island!&p=894531
DoodVogeltje
07-25-2011, 12:13 AM
Queuing this now. I'll play this tomorrow.
Why not play and review my level in the meantime: http://lbp.me/v/2sznf3
DoodVogeltje
07-25-2011, 06:02 PM
Uhm, well, I can't really put this little thing into place. I guess its nice, but it's a little short. The characters were nicely done, dialogue was okay I guess, but it wasn't really substantial enough to provide feedback on. It's perhaps the shortest level/movie I've ever seen and boy, it was scary.
If you have the time, why don't you play and review my level:
LBP.me: http://lbp.me/v/2sznf3
Thread: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?59483-Tubular-Bells-Mike-Oldfield
E: Woops, didn't mean to double post here. I wanted to edit it.
AtlanteanNomad7
07-25-2011, 06:13 PM
Playing it now :)
If you have time, I'd like some feedback on my level, http://lbp.me/v/30p222 Thanks!
Post Level Play - Wow, nice job. Great Journey in the beginning, did you make it?
melomaniac
07-25-2011, 08:37 PM
Queued, I'll leave feedback in-game or edit this post later. Please leave feedback on my level Digital: http://lbp.me/v/38bj3h. Also, I have a demo up of something I'm working on, I'm looking for feedback and suggestions. That level is here: http://lbp.me/v/30cg27.
All of you guys levels are queued, I know its hard to give feedback back on but i preciate your effortss. I left to toronto canada and should be back in a week but hopefully i can play your levels before then, sorry but you guys shuddaa replied earlier haha ah! D: il play them though dont worry.
EnochRoot
07-26-2011, 06:41 PM
Sweet little level which I heartily recommend to all very young sacks to watch just before they turn in for the night...go on do yourself a favour and watch this before your head hits the pillow so your dreams will be filled with fluffy kittens and rainbow unicorns
LOL! good level dude. When I first started watching I thought he we go, another spammy movie waste of server space but as soon as the second half twist kicked in I realised what a great level it is. I won't post any spoilers but will say the creative content in the second half were excellent, skilled models, fantastic atmosphere and great camera work...especially the head be dragged along at the end. Bravo, you sick little puppy.
Here's another one from the dark side of LBP to cast your eye over.
F4F: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?57680-SNOW-WHITE-Noire
Scholarship
07-26-2011, 07:52 PM
I queued up your level because, despite the title being the only description for it, it does sound like something pretty good. I'll leave feadback later. In the meantime, do you think you could also check out my own level at http://lbp.me/v/y4n7x0?
There's also an F4F thread for it at http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?53375-The-Missing-Piece-Part-1
Tuurahk
07-26-2011, 10:26 PM
Wow... I just played this, and I gotta say, it's really eerie, but very good. Loved the transition between "easygoing-cliche" part to the "now-comes-the-twist" part. You need to make a story out of this!
Also, for the F4F, could you please take at my level (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?60382-Little-Big-Gravitron)?
Scholarship
07-27-2011, 04:09 AM
I just played the level.
I...personally, was not very impressed. I know you said that this is is a short film, but to me, there's a limit to how short you can go. Not that I'm the one to make the rules for level design, but by the end of it, I kinda felt shortchanged.
However, what you did have was very well-executed. You just could have used more length.
@Scholarship, i think your right, I could easily make this longer i have a few special ideas. Once i get back Ill get to it.
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