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Winnie
11-24-2008, 08:41 AM
Okay, I've finished my first level outside of the beta. It's called Welcome to Utopia and it's in Australia. Like my beta level, there's some content which might be considered inappropriate, so if you don't like, don't grief me, just don't play it. >.<
It's another story based level, but again like my past levels I've tried to tell a story indirectly and let the player discover what's going on. I just hope that actually works. :p
So, enjoy and give me feedback if you have any. :D
whatisnarwhal
11-24-2008, 06:59 PM
Cool level. Seemed to be based off another game... Hmm
Either way though, pretty fun. I think you captured the image of what a corrupt Utopia would be like.
Winnie
11-25-2008, 04:50 AM
Cool level. Seemed to be based off another game... Hmm

It wasn't intentional. xD
What did it remind you of? And I'm glad you enjoyed my level. :D
webwizart
11-25-2008, 08:31 AM
hello winnie,

i played your level yesterday i liked the level a lot ,
but i m missing some things :

some prize bubbles would be nice.
i liked the decors it was nice done but i was missing som more decoration

for the rest thumbs up

ps: are you from belgium ?? your location is lint it is the homebase of telenet.
if you are, i m from belgium to from antwerp add my psn webwizart.
Winnie
11-25-2008, 11:31 AM
Hey, glad you liked the level. And sorry, I'm not from Belgium, I'm from Australia. ;)

Haha, I completely forgot about the prize bubbles. xD

Hey, just to those who have played my level, were you all able to finish it without any problems?
QuozL
11-25-2008, 12:40 PM
Interesting concept and design but it needs something to achieve other than just getting to the end.

Cheers QuozL
Winnie
11-26-2008, 12:42 AM
Hmmm, maybe I should just chuck some random prize bubbles in there. Anything else you can recommend?
Winnie
10-06-2009, 07:30 AM
Sorry for the epic bump (LOL, almost a year!), but I'm just after some more feedback on the level.

I'm hoping to continue the story, and I want to make it as good as it can be.
rseah
10-06-2009, 07:47 AM
okay i will check it out

(i live in Australia too)
Winnie
10-06-2009, 11:47 AM
Cheers, I hope you enjoy it!

I'm open to any feedback and criticism. :)