New creating levels, feedback?

[Nagash_MalKaVian]

Well, I've created a map on a series and before I publish the second one, would like to hear some feedback from pr0 ppl.

I know the map is quite... bad, but constructive suggestions are welcome so we all can learn.

the map is called "balalaika chap 1 v0.4" (in v0.4 I fixed some edges and made the map clearer, some people were unable to finish it...)

I'm not asking to add to favs or whatever (well i still miss that trophies) but please, I'd like to learn a bit.

thanks a lot.

[whatisnarwhal]

The level was okay.
Try adding music to it.
The vehicle at the end doesn't work that great, though.
I'd recommend just using a simple car.

Also, what does Balalaika mean?

[Nagash_MalKaVian]

The level was okay.
Try adding music to it.
The vehicle at the end doesn't work that great, though.
I'd recommend just using a simple car.

Also, what does Balalaika mean?

sure, I should add some music I forgot completly, thanks.
well, with that final vehicle I had lots of problems because I wanted to use something odd and almost everything failed, if not playing solo, while playing 2p or 3p.
I'll change it for a car or something simpler.

balalaika... it's a long story why it's called balalaika, but actually a balalaika is a russian music instrument, similar to a guitar but with the body triangle shaped. but well, why I put balalaika there is for a very different reason, play through the rest of the chapters incomming and guess :P

[Nagash_MalKaVian]

ok, I think now it's v1.0
full fixes and some music added, not a big deal, but more suggestions welcomed.

Name has changed, since some friends are gonna work in the story.
now it's called Balalaikamancer's game 1 v1.0. =)

please try it now and say something ^^

we want to try to do some kind of stories, I think others are more skiller than me doing maps (what is not hard... :() so check & feedback is thanked =)