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DragonInChains
03-06-2011, 11:24 PM
This is my first big project (in either LBP1 or 2) and my second actual level in LBP2 (I'm not including my scoreboard tutorial) so any sort of feedback would be much appreciated!
http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/e46a8fc4aa363e7bdc010b78e033b20051671d0b.jpg
http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/2474a64efab5dcba0f789d4a11ddf43da5197178.jpg
http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/195c98c9bcc77861b11dcf08ae82d70263a1c771.jpg
http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/e39b67c6dd31b4d16e45a2e6effbb04719415681.jpg
http://lbp.me/v/yhqnkk
FriedGoat
03-07-2011, 02:32 AM
Original idea, Play along movie! good stuff. No faults that i can see, I only wish i knew what happens next. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!

my F4F is the first one in my sig, please leave feedback in the thread! thanks!
Fobstar49
03-08-2011, 04:27 AM
As I said in my LBP2 review, I can't wait to play the game!

I tried this two-player and everything worked fine. We were very tickled by the attention to detail, especially those hospital beds! Creepy-beast was nice and creepy, dialogue was well-written, visuals were good.

Our only complaint is that it isn't always clear when the players should/could move and when they're in cutscene mode. It is truly just a tiny nitpick, but the movie's pacing would probably be better if the players were kept moving and/or stopped right away. That said, your level is full of amazing photo-ops. Woo!
DragonInChains
03-08-2011, 06:56 AM
Thanks for the reviews! I am trying to figure out a way to let the players know they can, and in fact should, move without detracting from the movie. Even thought it is in the description, I know a little in-game hint wouldn't hurt. ;)
I'll get on that tonight and hopefully have it worked out soon.
Kashadooo
03-08-2011, 10:32 AM
Queued! This looks totally good, gonna check out today.
ForcesWerwolf
03-09-2011, 04:03 AM
i watched it!
hehe nice :) LOVE the IDEA

- make the doc a bit running faster, when i had to follow him at the beginning
- i don't want to shake in fear all the time, a hero don't does that :) - oh i can change it x3 yay! thanks
- very good job on the picture with the girl on the table with the two helpers
- very very short for a introducion video in my eyes. you could add a few more stuff and happenings i guess :) - as long the termo is allowing it.
- good job on the blendings to other happenings. well done. nice idea with the tv!

overall: a 8.5/10 - it would be a 9,5/10 if the doc would not be so slow and looking like a machine while walking X)
that are some easy fixes :) so no problem at all!


i would be happy if you do a small feedback on my skunk bunny adventures level linked in my signature :) thank you!
PTdragon
03-09-2011, 04:10 AM
Lol .. omg.. were criativity goes :D
This was amazing.. what an awsome idea :D i want more more ^^


If u can f4f try my
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?52081-Pirates.-Chapter-2-The-Skull-Mountain.
Or any on Sig.. Tks :)
DragonInChains
03-11-2011, 10:07 AM
Alright I think I've found a nice way to let people know they can move. :3
And I did speed up the doctor, since the main reason I had him walk so slow was to give people a chance to realize they could follow him. He's at 60% walking speed now, which I like. It still gives you a chance to see the other patients while not dragging on too long. :D

Unfortunately I can't add any more scenes. The thermo and I are no longer on good terms with each other, so everything else will have to wait.