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KRX
03-19-2011, 02:42 AM
http://lbp.me/v/y43df7this is my first race level is about a competition using lizards, the first track is short because is a demo i will add more tracks later if you want to.
i hope you like it :)
http://lbp.me/v/y43df7
updates:

working on the hub
im working on a new track
i made a new hub
http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/9faa04dec9fe8362a06b1cbd49504eb6f52a3071.jpg

http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/7afd1039bdd7d6e8a5d46a2dab46af9df1e0df76.jpg

http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/07ac7bab5e1b0fa3da0c698b22bd4c5d85f739d3.jpg

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/b3d5d5a10e080c012ec87b6cb95292a6317f87b2.jpg

http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/5faa5bd1be85695e11e64ea5d8d4926d2845da5d.jpg
http://lbp.me/v/y2j4wq

Jenkins21
03-19-2011, 05:23 AM
Level queued. Please check out mine too

KRX
03-19-2011, 11:03 PM
Level queued. Please check out mine too

i queue your level

DrDeath
03-22-2011, 09:19 AM
Nice idea. This is one of the best racing levels i've ever played. You have earned yourself a heart. I will watch development.

F4F http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?52416-Little-Adventure

LieutenantFatman
03-22-2011, 11:26 AM
Hey, I tried your level but unfortunately the lift / elevator kept getting stuck and jamming and I couldn't get it to go up to the actual race. I don't know if it's just me but I had to give up in the end. Sorry, I hope this helps.

From what I did see, the presentation was really good, so thumbs up from me.

KRX
03-23-2011, 02:37 AM
Nice idea. This is one of the best racing levels i've ever played. You have earned yourself a heart. I will watch development.

F4F http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?52416-Little-Adventure

thanks :D im glad you like i will add more tracks later

KRX
03-23-2011, 02:49 AM
Hey, I tried your level but unfortunately the lift / elevator kept getting stuck and jamming and I couldn't get it to go up to the actual race. I don't know if it's just me but I had to give up in the end. Sorry, I hope this helps.

From what I did see, the presentation was really good, so thumbs up from me.

:confused: thats odd i test it out and works fine but i will check it out again (im thinking of using a directional mover instead of a piston)
thanks for your feedback :)

Vergil
03-23-2011, 11:34 AM
I played your level yesterday and i believe it has quite some potential: the arcade-like racing is simple but fun, and the lizard looks quite good. I however feel that the hub should be changed: with lizard-themed racing i was expecting a sort of forest-like hub with actual lizard NPCs, while the current hub seems a bit generic. I also feel that the track could be decorated more. Overall interesting work :).

Please return feedback to my latest level : The Red Baron strikes back http://lbp.me/v/yw22sw in the related F4F thread (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?52800-The-Red-Baron-strikes-back).
Thanks.

KRX
03-23-2011, 09:40 PM
I played your level yesterday and i believe it has quite some potential: the arcade-like racing is simple but fun, and the lizard looks quite good. I however feel that the hub should be changed: with lizard-themed racing i was expecting a sort of forest-like hub with actual lizard NPCs, while the current hub seems a bit generic. I also feel that the track could be decorated more. Overall interesting work :).

Please return feedback to my latest level : The Red Baron strikes back http://lbp.me/v/yw22sw in the related F4F thread (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?52800-The-Red-Baron-strikes-back).
Thanks.

thanks for your feedback i cant decorate the track because is overheating and for the hub im going to change it

Najay1
03-23-2011, 11:31 PM
Level in Queue. Ill post my review here when I play it :) Please Check out level below

KRX
03-24-2011, 07:50 PM
im working on the hub

Fobstar49
03-25-2011, 09:36 PM
Hey KRX,

Great things definitely seem to be happening!

I found the lobby area detailed and attractive. The "under construction" signs were a nice touch. Also interesting to see your Sack gadding about.

The lizard handled well and I can imagine it could be loads of fun with additional tracks.

The only real problem I want to point out is the camera angling at the beginning of the race. For whatever reason, it points away from the direction of the race. Thankfully, arrows on the ground confirmed that I was supposed to head back toward the camera, but it didn't seem "right".

Otherwise, I think all you need is a layer of polish and you're off!

KRX
03-26-2011, 12:04 AM
Hey KRX,

Great things definitely seem to be happening!

I found the lobby area detailed and attractive. The "under construction" signs were a nice touch. Also interesting to see your Sack gadding about.

The lizard handled well and I can imagine it could be loads of fun with additional tracks.

The only real problem I want to point out is the camera angling at the beginning of the race. For whatever reason, it points away from the direction of the race. Thankfully, arrows on the ground confirmed that I was supposed to head back toward the camera, but it didn't seem "right".

Otherwise, I think all you need is a layer of polish and you're off!

thanks for your feedback :)

KRX
03-26-2011, 06:12 PM
i made a new lobby :)

MattAtk
03-27-2011, 08:28 PM
By the looks on those screenies...I can't wait to try out this with my little cousins. :D Queued!

F4F Link: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?53774-The-Great-Tree

KRX
03-28-2011, 06:30 PM
thanks everyone for your feedback

discokrakken
03-29-2011, 07:42 AM
New lobby looks pretty nice. Somehow I managed to get the ninja to stand in front of the door he was guarding and hold it open for me, haha. Whatever, I know you'll build more down that hallway. Anyway, I like how well decorated the race was. The lizards felt a little unwieldy but I like that cause I figure that's what it should feel like when you're trying to ride a lizard, haha. They're a cool vehicle for a race level like this and I like the way they animate. The boosters and stars are great too. Anything you can do that's more like this will help your level stand out from all the other non-lizard top-down race levels out there.

DrDeath
03-29-2011, 08:10 AM
Not cool level? Strange.

JustinArt
03-29-2011, 11:04 PM
Thanks for the feedback of "Cybernetic Adventures Beta". Sorry for a late feedback, but here it is, finally.

VISUALS:
The visuals of the hub level is okay, but could use more polishing. The race track, on the other hand, looks pretty good, and same goes with that lizard of yours.

SOUND:
Neat music choice for hub level, but the custom music in the beach track could use more beat, however, the custom music sounds good too.

GAMEPLAY:
The Lizard control is accurate, and the power ups are impressive.

OVERALL:
It's a fun racing level. Keep it up. A yeah vote.

KRX
03-30-2011, 12:39 AM
Not cool level? Strange.

what do you mean?

KRX
03-30-2011, 12:53 AM
New lobby looks pretty nice. Somehow I managed to get the ninja to stand in front of the door he was guarding and hold it open for me, haha. Whatever, I know you'll build more down that hallway. Anyway, I like how well decorated the race was. The lizards felt a little unwieldy but I like that cause I figure that's what it should feel like when you're trying to ride a lizard, haha. They're a cool vehicle for a race level like this and I like the way they animate. The boosters and stars are great too. Anything you can do that's more like this will help your level stand out from all the other non-lizard top-down race levels out there.

hehe thanks for your feedback

KRX
03-30-2011, 01:19 AM
Thanks for the feedback of "Cybernetic Adventures Beta". Sorry for a late feedback, but here it is, finally.

VISUALS:
The visuals of the hub level is okay, but could use more polishing. The race track, on the other hand, looks pretty good, and same goes with that lizard of yours.

SOUND:
Neat music choice for hub level, but the custom music in the beach track could use more beat, however, the custom music sounds good too.

GAMEPLAY:
The Lizard control is accurate, and the power ups are impressive.

OVERALL:
It's a fun racing level. Keep it up. A yeah vote.

what kind of polishing ?

KRX
03-31-2011, 12:05 AM
im working on a new track

DragonHunterEx
03-31-2011, 03:07 PM
Sry that it took so long but i finally managed to play your level.

...and i really liked it :)
the lobby looks good as well as the lizard.
Good controls, nice details.
I think the idea with the stars and speed arrows is great. It makes your level more unique.

Now it just need more tracks but you already said that more are coming :)
Good job.

KRX
03-31-2011, 06:14 PM
Sry that it took so long but i finally managed to play your level.

...and i really liked it :)
the lobby looks good as well as the lizard.
Good controls, nice details.
I think the idea with the stars and speed arrows is great. It makes your level more unique.

Now it just need more tracks but you already said that more are coming :)
Good job.

thanks i like your level too :)

KRX
04-14-2011, 12:33 AM
i need someone to help me in the second track