View Full Version : Neverynnal Reviews Inc. =) - Closed until further notice!

12-12-2008, 12:14 AM
I'm currently taking requests! The grading system is as follows:

/5 ---> Appearance- is your level polished and easy on the eyes?

/10 ---> Gameplay- was it, first of all, fun to play and did it keep my attention?

/5 ---> Replay Value- is it worth a second or third play?

Thus, a score out of 20 will be given for your level. I will give constructive criticism only, and the pros and cons of your level will be shared.

Please leave your PSN ID, name of level and any other specifics you want me to pay attention to while playing. Thankyou!

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On the Block

1) PSN: deboerdave
Level: Log Jam
2) PSN: Elbee23
Level: A journey through the digestive tract
3) PSN: plasmavore
Level: Riddle Quest- Part 1
4) PSN: PhantasyStarHero
Level: Trial of Skill (Ver 1.04)
5) PSN: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
Level: Area 52 - Live or die...
6) PSN: BassDeluxe
Level: Boss Battle 1: Gelulupas
7)PSN: Ham_Salad
Level: Zombie Zombiez
8)PSN: reiverx
Level: Babylon Quest

Upon further activity in the forums:
PSN: Kirkj
Level: Afraid Of Monster - Hospital 2(Garage)

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REVIEWED LEVELS: (ranked from highest to lowest score)

1) The Sands of Time, PSN- NinjaMicWZ =18.5/20

1) Timmy's Dream, PSN- Hexagohn = 18.5/20

3) The Fall of Winter, PSN-xkappax = 18/20

4) "His World", PSN- xbriandeadx = 17/20

5) The Abandoned Coal Mine, PSN- xbriandeadx = 16.5/20

6) Which Way is Up?, PSN- Walter-Kovacs =16.5

7) Centralia A Ghost Story, PSN - Catiers =15.5/20

8) Alchemy Anthology: Fire I - Antlands, PSN- Chazosulls =15/20

9) Afraid of Monster- Hospital, PSN: Kirkj =14/20

10) Hibachi Dojo, PSN: Gondito=10/20

12-12-2008, 12:21 AM
Alright, I'll be the guinea pig for Neverynnal Reviews Inc!

Level name: Alchemy Anthology: Fire I - Antlands
PSN: Chazosulls

12-12-2008, 12:52 AM
I could use a review for ours. We are a husband and wife team. I do the art and story, he does the game mechanics. I hope you enjoy them.

PSN - Catiers (my husband)
Level - Centralia A Ghost Story
Located near pennsylvania

PSN - xkappax (mine)
Level - The Fall of Winter
Also located near pennsylvania

thanks in advance!

12-12-2008, 01:17 AM
Neverynnal: if you plan on doing this long term, you may earn a sticky along with Aqua. Obviously I want to see the quality of your reviews before I make a decision, but I'm just throwing that out there.

Also, try to do reviews in new threads instead of in this topic, for consistency and easier browsing.

12-12-2008, 03:37 AM
I'll begin the reviews tomorrow, and a sticky would be great if you like the quality Cartman. Mine won't be horribly extensive, as I don't want to spoil the level for potential players. Anyway! Tomorrow I begin. :)

EDIT: Also, any glitches/fixes that need attending to I'll be PMing the author exclusively, rather than posting it with the review.

12-12-2008, 04:43 PM
PSN: NinjaMicWZ
Level: The Sands of Time

...make sure you drop down below at the giant hourglass to find a little surprise... try and sift through the smog a little as well if you're curious. There's also a prize bubble above the giant hourglass, and one tucked into the corner, top right, of the fire room.

Thanks for going to all this trouble to help out the community, guys.

12-12-2008, 07:21 PM
I love your reviews, they're usually right on the dot. Please review my levels, the links are in my signature below :)

12-13-2008, 01:07 AM
I've played the Abandoned Coal Mine twice now, and I'm gonna give it one more go before I give it a full review. It's a long level and a lot to take into consideration, but I was thoroughly impressed man.

As for the 2nd installment, I wasn't able to finish it. At the boss I let go of one of the sponges too early and it swung onto a platform above, leaving it out of reach, thus ending my chances at completing it.

Anyway, anyone else want some reviews done? I'm done finals and got a crapload of time to kill until January, so lay it on me! :P

12-13-2008, 01:34 AM
PSN - SuperPhillip
Level - 0-1 The Warehouse
Located eastern U.S.

It's a tutorial level made as if LBP doesn't even exist. It's obviously pretty easy, but that was my goal.

12-13-2008, 11:38 PM
I'll get to reviewing both brians and phillip's on monday first thing. Currently tied up in drinking and hockey! :P

12-14-2008, 12:01 AM
You don't need to hurry anyway.
I don't think he and I are going anywhere. Have fun this weekend! ;)

12-14-2008, 12:01 AM
hello, I'd like my levels reviewed.

PSN: Kirkj
Level #1: Afraid Of Monster - Hospital
Level #2: Afraid Of Monster - Hospital 2(Garage)

12-14-2008, 12:06 AM
I would love a review of my first level. I have two, but my second one isn't polished yet.
So if you could review "Which was is up?" I'd love it.

12-14-2008, 03:23 AM
Hey Neverynnal I would love it if you reviewed my Level "Hibachi Dojo", just search my PSN Gondito, or add me!

12-14-2008, 05:37 AM
Hey i saw that you beat "His" World. Congrats! That level is tough! :p haha

I hope you liked it :)

Let me know what sponge got stuck, because I've been testing it and i have no idea how that could have happened.

Thanks again :)

12-14-2008, 06:01 AM
I've suggested it to Shining Aqua as well, but you might want to edit the first post and include links to all the reviews you've done. As time goes on these things will fall off the front page and people might want to track your entire work as a reviewer.

It's better to start now when you just have a few to link than when you have a tonne and it's too hard to do. :)

12-14-2008, 06:09 AM
If you do include reviews in your first post, it should just be: title, score, link to full review. Otherwise it would be huge.

12-14-2008, 04:56 PM
Aye, that sounds like a plan guys. I'll do just that.

As for "His World" brian, yeah I finally finished it :P The sponge got stuck as I was traversing the boss during my first play, but I think it was just a big fluke because in my 2nd play I pretty much tried to see if I could do it again and I couldn't. So don't worry about it :P

12-15-2008, 01:26 AM
Hey, it'd be great if you would review my level Timmy's Dream a link to the thread is in my signature.

12-15-2008, 02:54 AM
You can take me off the list.
I'm happy with what I have anyway. :)

12-16-2008, 09:06 PM
hey Neverynnal you could check out my levels

air blasters (unique shooting air craft level)

log jam (fun challenge stage based on log rolling 3 rounds of increasing dificulty)

rocket sled adventures (single player recommended platforming)

not much in the way of story driven but should provide some challenging fun gaming
like to hear what you think


psn deboerdave

12-18-2008, 04:11 AM
Early indications show that the new shorter small intestine version of the digestive tract level is being well recieved. Would you be able to officially review it some time?

The link to the official thread is here: A journey through a digestive tract (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5828)

I'll point out something as well which might not be obvious, and mention it in Shining's sticky thread as well...

If you edit the very first post in this or any other thread, you can see a title section. If you edit this, it will change the name of the thread - but any hyperlinks to this thread will still work.

This should allow you to say "taking requests" or "current review list is full, will update when openings occur" or whatever you want to say.

Might help when people read the title, don't read the whole thread, and put their name down even when you are busy. :)

12-18-2008, 10:32 PM
Thanks for the tips as usual Elbee! :)

Sorry if people are waiting on their reviews. I'll be doing a whole wackload tomorrow morning. I'm currently working on a level in my Knight's Tale series, and I'm having so much fun with it that its been impossible to stop. Oh god...can you believe it? Actually having a lot of fun making the level and not just rushing to get it done. I think I've finally gotten the hang of all the LBP mechanics in create mode so it's more a pleasure now than a pain :)

Anyway! Tomorrow I'll be posting 2-3 reviews! Stay tuned :cool:

12-20-2008, 03:43 PM
YES! my level is number two on the list now!

Shining Aquas
12-20-2008, 08:02 PM
If you do include reviews in your first post, it should just be: title, score, link to full review. Otherwise it would be huge.

Regardless of the format, it will still be huge:eek:

12-20-2008, 09:40 PM
Yeah ain't that the truth. I think the format I have setup at the moment is fine. I may think about adding the threads soon here too.

12-21-2008, 07:32 PM
Got a review request, now that I finally got my first real LBP level out.

PSN: Sir_Linque
Level: Treetop Escape

Thanks! :)

12-21-2008, 09:34 PM
Yay im next!

cant wait to see the review nevery!

12-22-2008, 12:33 AM
On the Block

1) PSN: Walter-Kovacs
Level: Which way is up?
2) PSN: Gondito
Level: Hibachi Dojo
3) PSN: Hexagohn
Level: Timmy's Dream
4) PSN: doeberdave
Level: Log Jam
5) PSN: Elbee23
Level: A journey through the digestive tract

cool i glad your going to check out log jam. Just want to let you know you spelled my name wrong here should be deboerdave.

12-22-2008, 09:17 PM
Can you please review my level.

Riddle Quest- Part 1
PSN: plasmavore


12-22-2008, 10:31 PM
Never when will my review be done?

12-23-2008, 04:32 AM
Sorry bud. I've been really busy lately with the holidays. I'm planning on reviewing both yours and Walter's level tomorrow. I've given "which way is up?" a couple plays and written down some notes already so it shouldn't be long before I get to yours LBG. Sorry again man!

Shining Aquas
12-23-2008, 04:43 AM
I think the term I'm going for with this submission is "fuggin hypocrite"

If you are willing (and sane enough), here is my level. I'm opening it up for interpretation, in all its horribleness:
Trial of Skill (Ver 1.04) (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5720)
PSN: PhantasyStarHero

I guarantee people will call me a hypocrite by the end of it. :D

12-23-2008, 02:29 PM
Sorry bud. I've been really busy lately with the holidays. I'm planning on reviewing both yours and Walter's level tomorrow. I've given "which way is up?" a couple plays and written down some notes already so it shouldn't be long before I get to yours LBG. Sorry again man!

Hey dont sweat it man, its a really nice thing your doing so take all the time you need

12-25-2008, 01:22 PM
Level Name: Area 52 - Live or die...

PSN: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX

I'd appreciate your feedback on this level :) it took me a good 60+ hours to make so it should be worth your time i hope ^^

p.s. Merry Christmas everyone! :)

12-27-2008, 05:04 AM
Sorry about the delay guys. So busy with the holidays that I haven't had a chance to even play.

12-28-2008, 03:12 PM
Sorry about the delay guys. So busy with the holidays that I haven't had a chance to even play.

that's ok, your doing this out of your own time, so take your time,.. no need to rush :]

12-31-2008, 06:56 PM
Hey Neverynnal, I'd appreciate it if you'd review my level.

PSN: BassDeluxe
Name: Boss Battle 1: Gelulupas

12-31-2008, 06:59 PM
when you get around to it if you feel like it you can check out my zomg zombiez level. i know you checked out my other one and liked it

01-02-2009, 01:01 PM
I know you're busy but when you get time can you review my level Babylon Quest by reiverx.


01-04-2009, 02:37 PM
I know I've moved up to second spot, but I've already had two reviews of the digestion level in this review section. You can take it off the list if you like and help make your list shorter. :)

02-11-2009, 05:31 PM
Hey, i'd like a review on my level: "Hard Simplicity".

It would be appreciated if you leave the feedback in my thread: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8525

One note: It's a level about secrets, so don't expect lots of guidance as about where to go.

02-12-2009, 09:45 AM
Would you like this list unstickied to take some pressure off you, Neverynnal? You can request it be stuck again once you get back on top of things. ;)

02-21-2009, 06:29 PM
PSN: brnxblze
Level Name: Mission 1: The Bank Robbery
Icon: a bank
Location: USA

Thread: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=9083