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Outlaw-Jack
10-25-2011, 07:16 AM
Before you proceed, make sure you've read Parts One (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?64445-LBPC-Haunt-(Part-One)-The-Troublemakers-Three&p=941923#post941923) and Two (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?64626-LBPC-Haunt-(Part-Two)-A-Deadman-s-Rhapsody),
So that way, you'll understand the story entirely through.
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Onto the next segment of our ongoing horror tale,
Where our last group from before has started to moan and wail.
Inside a tomb, they all are trapped, sealed for eternity...
Unless a course of action is taken by our next three.

How unfortunate.

(Merc)”Boooring!”
(nysdurgh) “It was YOUR idea to head over here in the first place.”
“Hey! It's not EVERY year I get to spend time with my folks. Still doesn't mean I can't complain.”
(Valeview)”It's not soo bad... they got free candy!”
“... to the people who are actually 'trick-or-treating'?”
“People still do that?”
“Uhh, yeah. It's Halloween, remember?”
“Ohh, so THAT's why people are looking weird today!”
“Wow. Really...”
“... well SORRY. It just so happens that I hang around the two most uneventful sacks in October. You guys make me forget things sometimes.”
“Whatever. It was Merc's idea, anyways.”

Although there aren't interested in candy this year,
They still dressed up to look rather queer.
Nysudyrh, with much irony,
Dressed as Princess Luna from My Little Pony.
Valeview, wanting to be a hero,
Took a hint from Sackgirlsrule and dressed as xero.
And as for Merc, well... for our story's sake,
He decided to be cool and looked like Nathan Drake.

“Dangling off any cliffs lately?”
“Like you're one to talk, pony boy.”
“It's a 'filly', thank you very much.”
“Whatever. You're still dressed as a character from a show made for little girls.”
“... coming from the guy whose currently in drag.”
“... coming from the guy whose cross-dressing as a female unicorn with wings.”
“Touche.”

Our intrepid trio, for this Hallow's Eve,
Decided to go over to Rick's and Lady's.
A hotspot for candy and Halloween craft...
Merc's grandparents were anything but that.

(LadyLuck_777) “Hello boys! Having a good time?”
“Swell!”
“Bleh.”
“We're fine, Grandma.”
“That's good.”
(RickRock_777) “Honey! We need more Snickers!”
“I'll need to get the ladder, dear!”
“Just ask one of the boys to do it! I'm sure they won't mind!”
“Sigh. Merc, could you be a dear and go grab another bag, please?”
“Ugh, fine...”

With some reluctance, Merc got up from the couch,
Walked over to the pantry, though with a slouch,
Reached up high, grabbed another bag,
Then gave it to Lady, who was dressed as a hag.

“Thanks, dear.”

With a kiss on Merc's cheek, Lady went back to Rick,
While the boy's other two friends-

“Someone likes you, slick.”
“Ooh, lovers-in-wait, amirite?”
“Stop it. That's gross. She's my grandma.”
“You never know...”

Annoyed by their rather gross remark,
Onto a pillowy mission Merc began to embark.

“Whoa there, Nolan North. No need to be-”

SMACK!

“Oww!”
“Hah-hah! Good one, Merc!”

THWACK!

“Oww! That hurt!”
“Crybabies. It's only feathers and cotton.”
“So? Aren't we made of the same materials?”
“...”
“The last time I checked, I wasn't stuffed with feathers.”
“Like you said, you never know...”

At that very moment, like a serpent in wait,
A spirit possessed Nys and stood him up straight!

“Whoa. You okay?”

With a blank stare, and his jaw wide open,
He let out a moan.

“That's not what I was hopin'.”

His eyes became disks, and they began to glow,
Whatever it was, they were in for a show.
With a purple aurora surrounding his skin,
A spirit's plea was about to begin...

(Morgana25)“... well. This isn't what I was expecting, but it'll do.”
“UUUAAAGH!!”

Our dumbfounded duo sprang out of their seats,
Staring at Nys, who looked rather discrete.

“Say, have you two boys seen a Mrs. 777 anywhere?”
“How do you know my grandma?! Why are you possessing Nys?! WHO ARE YOU?!!”
“I'm freaking out, MAN!!”
“Whoa-whoa-whoa. Now just calm down, you two...”
“CALM DOWN?! You just possessed one of my friends!!”
“Well, it DID grab your attention, now, did it?”

With that witty comeback, the two stood confused.
If they wanted her out, she obviously refused.

“Please. You must listen to me. I have an urgent message for Lady, and I don't have much time-”
“What's going on in here?”
“Oh! Lady! Just the person I wanted to see!”
“... are you okay, nysudyrgh?”
“Lady, don't you recognize me?... or, well, my voice? I know it's been a while.”

Rather stumped, Lady thought it over,
Then gasped in shock for what she would discover-

“... Morgy? Morgana25?”

Overjoyed, she leaped out of Nys,
Appearing as an old friend Lady did miss.

“You still remember!”
“Morgy! It is you!”

The two old girls embraced in a hug,
While our frightened duo retrieved their lug.

“It's been too long, dear!”
“Uhh... you okay, dude?”
“That... was really weird.”
“Do you even know what's going on right now? I have no idea...”
“Nada. Not even a clue.”
“Oh my. What on CraftEarth happened to you?”
“It's terrible, Lady! Oh so terrible!”
“You can tell me anything, dear.”
“What's going on here?”
“Oh! Hello there, Rick!”
“Who in Heaven's name is...”

Slow to see through his aged glasses,
He started to recognize one of the lasses...

“Oh my... bless the stars! You're alive!”

Filled with joy, he hugged ol' Morgy,
As the old trio calmed down-

“Please, tell us your story!”
“Wait. You're Morgana25?”
“The one and only! How come?”
“But aren't you-”
“Dead? So you'd think.”
“I thought ghosts weren't able to-”
“I'm already a spiritual deity. So, my powers are a little different.”
“Oh.”
“Though I'm not surprised if you did think I was dead. It's been a while...”
“Well, since you're here, could you please explain why there's a bunch of random people running around town screaming?”
“... who?”
“Uhh... lemme think...”
“We got gdn001, Sackgirlsrule, CyberSora, TheCountessZ, Incinerator22-”
“Countess? Cin?”
“I guess you know what they've been up to?”
“... oh no. It's worse than I thought.”
“Exactly 'what' is this you're talking about?”
“It's the reason I'm here. I need help. To break free.”
“When you and a bunch of people died a year ago...”
“We weren't dead. We were sucked out of our skins and locked away behind a painting.”
“That old mansion...”
“You know about it?”
“The o'-10 Incident. It's been a while since people have mentioned it, but we still remember.”
“At least me and Lady do. I don't reckon any of these 'whipper-snappers' can recall.”

Glaring at the rather young three,
Rick shook his head doubtfully.

“Don't be shaking your head at us, old man.”
“Always ignorant, kids now these days. You '10ers and '11ites don't even realize what happened backthen...”
“What are you talking about, Grandpa? I remember being there.”
“That's absurd! We had xkappax babysitting you while we were attending.”
“... oh yeah. I never told you guys.”

Catching the group's attention, Merc lowered his head,
As though he deeply regretted what he had just said.

“... you were there?”
“Yes. I was there. And I was at the masquerade, too.”
“But I thought xkappax died from a construction accident...”
“Whoa there, Indy. You're telling me that ol' xkappax-”
“She died in this very house. And I watched her burn away.”

Mortified, to think, they were on bloody ground,
The group began warily looking around.
How could someone had possibly died,
If for many months after she was there by their side?

“But we still saw her around town!”
“Did she let you touch her?”
“Well, no. She was always so sensitive about her personal space-”
“Now you know.”

Closing his eyes, and with a heavy sigh,
Merc began telling his story, trying not to cry:

“One year ago, I remember coming here,
With xkappax babysitting at this haunted time of year.
She was always good with kids like me; so caring, nice and kind,
And though she wasn't getting paid, xkappax didn't mind.

But around the hour of 9 or so, I heard the back door close,
And at this quiet, precise sound, my babysitter rose.
She told me to go to hide in my grandparent's bedroom,
And I couldn't help but feel this sudden sense of gloom.

Locking the bedroom door, I left on only one light.
I sat down on their large bed, my spirits filled with fright.
Yells and screaming erupted from the living room down the hall,
But as soon as I thought it was over, there came a sudden brawl.

I heard the shattering of some pots, perhaps a window or two,
And shouts coming from xkappax and someone I never knew.
The floors vibrated, the walls shook; I thought it'd never end!
But then I heard a bloody scream... from my babysitting friend.

Horrified, I almost bolted out the door,
Until I realized that this fiend might have wanted more.
So exercising caution, I slowly crept down the hall...
You would never believe the next thing that I saw.

There I saw xkappax lying, with a knife stuck in her head.
Although I was pretty young back then, I knew that she was dead.
And standing right above her was a figure with deep eyes,
But his face was too concealed for me to recognize.

Staring at xkappax's body, the figure struck a match,
Dropped it on the ground, and on fire, her body catch.
Satisfied with his evil works, he slowly turned around,
Walked toward the door he came in through, and left without a sound.

Walking toward the smoldering scene, I quietly cried,
For this was no way that xkappax should have died.
I watched her body burn, as it slowly turned to a char,
Then I swept up what's left of her, and put it in a jar.

Realizing what he'd done, I knew where he'd go next,
But as soon as I bolted outside, I began to hear his hex.
Looking at the haunted house located down the street,
I stood there horrified, watching the murderer's feat.

Sprinting down the sidewalk, running up the road,
I saw many people running away, grim times they did forebode.
I bolted up the hillside and broke through the front door,
But what was left of the party... was not there anymore.

The evildoer long since left; no presence could be found,
Except for six bodies... that lied dead on the ground.
I couldn't believe my eyes; the fiend got away.
So I went back home, covered in tears, waiting for the next day.

Xkappax's ashes are buried next to a tree in the backyard,
And though I've wanted to forget... these memories die hard.
I don't go trick-or-treating, because this is what I fear:
That I might become 'his' next victim around this time of year.”

Done with his tale of woe, Merc looked up through teary eyes,
Clearly seeing his emotions expressed on the other guys.

“Oh. Oh God...”
“Poor xkappax...”
“You never told anyone?”
“No. Because no one would believe me if I did.”
“That still doesn't explain why we could still see her around.”
“She wasn't caught in his hex. Otherwise, we'd see her face in that painting as well.”
“But I'm certain she'd tell someone-”
“She never talked. At least, now she doesn't.”
“I'm a ghost... technically. I can talk fine!”
“I can't explain why she doesn't- or can't- talk. You never hear about RockSauron recalling what happened, either.”
“... well OBVIOUSLY! He's the Peanut Lord of Darkness! He probably caused-”
“Stop that. He'd never do that. You don't know him well enough to presume those things.”
“But he-”
“That's only how he portrays himself on the outside. You don't know what he's truly like until you get to know him better.”
“... nothing makes sense anymore!”

RING! RING!

“Odd. Who'd be calling right now?”
“I'll answer it.”

Walking over, as though he had no choice,
Nys picked up the phone, and heard a familiar voice:

(UltimateClay) “Wow. I still got reception out here!”
“Clay?”
“Oh yeah- HEEEELLLLPPP!!”
“What's going on?!”
“It's a bit hard to explain, and I don't think you'll believe me, but me and some of my friends are, erm... trapped?”
“Why did you call us?”
“I tried contacting GDN, but he wouldn't pick up his cellphone! I've tried all of my other contacts, but no one is responding! You're the only guy who has picked up so far!”
“... where are you?”
“In an old catacomb out in the Forum Games Wilderness! Some ghost lead us there!”
“Ghost?!”

Noticing the caller's rather urgent tone,
Morgana rushed over to Nys and snatched the phone.

“Who?!”
“M-MORGANA?! How are you-”

Suddenly being knocked away by Joey on their side other line,
The weary ghost picked up the call, and surprisingly sounded fine.

(Joey) “Morgy!! I'm so glad to hear from you!”
“What are you doing in the tomb, Joey?!”
“I tried getting some help to free us from this curse! But that fiend trapped us in here!”
“I thought we told you to stay put at the mansion!”
“The others already got caught by the murderer! I had no choice!”
“... oh no...”

Realizing the matter at hand, Merc took the phone,
Now realizing that, in this turn of events, he wasn't alone.

“Where's the tomb.”
“It's along the old hiking trail! Littlebigdude805 left his eggs behind, so that will be you indicator!”
“Thank you. We're on our way.”

Hanging up the phone, Merc slowly turned around,
Looking at the others, who dared not to make a sound.

“... I really don't like that look in Merc's eyes.”
“Our friends are in grave danger, and you're gonna back out now?”
“W-well of course not! Just saying, is all.”
“I think we all know too well that great danger will be involved.”
“Please, let me handle this. I can-”
“You're still bound by the curse. Once time is up, you're back behind the painting.”

Looking at the clock mounted on the wall,
They only had an hour left- barely any time at all.

“Seeing that we have limited time as is, we'll need to make up our minds quick. Who's going with me?”

Trying ever so hard not to give in,
Nys' and Vale's morals took over as they both said:

“We're in.”
“Me and Rick will stay here, in case anyone passes by.”
“I'll guide you three to the tomb, but you'll have to figure out a way to open it to free your friends.”
“Well, it seems like the 'Three Musketeers' are out to save the world once again!”
“Either that... or the 'Three Stooges'.”
“Then it's settled- let's go!”

Quickly gathering their stuff without a minute to spare,
Our steadfast four charged out the door and into the autumn air,
For their friend's lives were at stake, and with time running fast,
Can they somehow manage to save the day before the night has passed?

Stay tuned... ~ Outlaw-Jack

butter-kicker
10-25-2011, 12:50 PM
Very good sir and a brilliant read...
However you made me a promise in the first story to check out my halloween story if I made one,
well know I have and for not reading it
I BANISH YOU

jks :p

RockSauron
10-25-2011, 01:12 PM
YOU SAID THREE PART! YOU LIED /cries

Anyway, cool :p Loved it. Now I guess we'll need to wait to see the end. I'mma take a guess and say the ending will be on Halloween?

RickRock_777
10-25-2011, 01:22 PM
Whew! I'm glad I didn't forget my lines.

This house of horrors
A Mansion on a hill?
Unveils "in part"
A hard swallowed pill.
A rising distant sun casts light
It's silent ray, with golden might
Could shine and keep
Dark beasts at bay
But predators,
They will always prey.

biorogue
10-25-2011, 02:00 PM
xKappax? nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!Why!!!!!!

Great read Jack! That was a good way to start my day, thanks man.

Lady_Luck__777
10-25-2011, 02:27 PM
Oh Jack, my dear, thank you for including us in your story. :D
After putting on my orthopedic shoes and using my walker to get my Gerital, bi-focals and coffee, I lowered my lift chair and signed on to LBPC. What a thrilling surprise to see you had posted another chapter. It was so scary I thought my pace maker was going to go haywire. I need to go take a nap to get my blood pressure under control before the next chapter!
Good job my friend!
?- Would you be willing to continue these LBPC storylines after Halloween?

Morgana25
10-25-2011, 02:51 PM
Cool :) I'm like dead but not dead. Does that make me a zombie??

nysudyrgh
10-25-2011, 03:27 PM
Best stories EVAR! :3

>er.
10-25-2011, 09:09 PM
Wooaahoaw! This is an incredible halloween story :D keep going!
Hm, I keep getting this crazy urge to try sketching it out a comic version :p

Testudini
10-25-2011, 10:28 PM
http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr79/UltimateClay/GhostBustahs.png

Keep up the good work! :D

xero
10-25-2011, 11:02 PM
This story is entertaining, and fun to say the least,
but will our heroes save us, or be slain by the beast?

Whalio Cappuccino
10-25-2011, 11:59 PM
I read Jack's part with this voice in my head...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXLQAGJoz3k

DominationMags
10-26-2011, 01:24 AM
Yes er YES. Comic version ftw! I like how different characters from the forums are in these stories.... I wouldn't mind being in one myself :rolleyes:

Outlaw-Jack
10-26-2011, 03:51 AM
Very good sir and a brilliant read...
However you made me a promise in the first story to check out my halloween story if I made one,
well know I have and for not reading it
I BANISH YOU

jks :p

I gave your story a read. It's actually quite good!
Now just add the next part!... understood? :p


YOU SAID THREE PART! YOU LIED /cries

Anyway, cool :p Loved it. Now I guess we'll need to wait to see the end. I'mma take a guess and say the ending will be on Halloween?

The ending will come once I have it typed out;
I simply can't end this right here, no doubt!
And perhaps, perhaps not, it remains to be seen,
That the ending might come before Halloween.


Whew! I'm glad I didn't forget my lines.

This house of horrors
A Mansion on a hill?
Unveils "in part"
A hard swallowed pill.
A rising distant sun casts light
It's silent ray, with golden might
Could shine and keep
Dark beasts at bay
But predators,
They will always prey.

I say, ol' chap, your rhyming's getting quite good,
Perhaps that's why your house is the most visited in the neighborhood.


xKappax? nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!Why!!!!!!

Great read Jack! That was a good way to start my day, thanks man.

Wow... to think that when someone dies,
It means a "good day" in someone else's eyes. :p


Oh Jack, my dear, thank you for including us in your story. :D
After putting on my orthopedic shoes and using my walker to get my Gerital, bi-focals and coffee, I lowered my lift chair and signed on to LBPC. What a thrilling surprise to see you had posted another chapter. It was so scary I thought my pace maker was going to go haywire. I need to go take a nap to get my blood pressure under control before the next chapter!
Good job my friend!
?- Would you be willing to continue these LBPC storylines after Halloween?

I really do thank you for your's and Rick's supports,
And it made sense to have you two as elderly cohorts. xD
Since I can clearly see that you guys enjoy the reads,
I'll make a story every month to satisfy your needs.
Each story will be based on a special holiday,
But with an LBPC-twist and told in a special way. ;)


Cool :) I'm like dead but not dead. Does that make me a zombie??

Technically, since you are a spiritual deity,
You coexist between both realms, so you aren't a zombie.
But hey! If you ever want to be one for a day,
Just lemme bite your arm and I'll send yah on your way! :p


Best stories EVAR! :3

I do enjoy the comment, but really, the best?
I'm sure there's many others out there who'd clearly attest.


Wooaahoaw! This is an incredible halloween story :D keep going!
Hm, I keep getting this crazy urge to try sketching it out a comic version :p

I'm glad you enjoy the read; I definitely love to rhyme,
And if this is a way to give back, I'll do it all the time!


http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr79/UltimateClay/GhostBustahs.png

Keep up the good work! :D

I find it ironic, snide commentary aside,
That it is your trio that's currently trapped inside. :p


This story is entertaining, and fun to say the least,
but will our heroes save us, or be slain by the beast?

Nice rhyming, I must- wait, what are you doing here?!
You should be stuck in the tomb, screaming in fear! :kz:


I read Jack's part with this voice in my head...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXLQAGJoz3k

... I must say, after hearing that song,
I could imagine myself reading like that all along. xD


Yes er YES. Comic version ftw! I like how different characters from the forums are in these stories.... I wouldn't mind being in one myself :rolleyes:

Don't worry about that, my friend,
Although this one's coming to an end,
The next story, if pilgrims are your thing,
Will tell the tale of a site's beginning... ;)

At this point, the ending has already been thought through,
And since I have a good idea, only typing's left to do.
But do not fear. Because you all know me so well,
After this will be another! But when?... only time will tell.

RockSauron
10-26-2011, 04:10 AM
So, a Thanksgiving one next month. After that, I can only assume a Christmas one.

Let me guess: I'd be the Grinch? ;-;

biorogue
10-26-2011, 04:17 AM
well, looking back at it, I guess it does sound like I was having a good day due to the demise of xKappax. Didn't mean for it to sound like that Kappa. I meant, seeing this next chapter made my morning and...oh never mind.

RickRock_777
10-26-2011, 04:17 AM
Impeccable! Remarkable! And a brilliant conveyance of insight Outlaw-Jack!

Your reply was very entertaining as well. And the hint of "a pilgrimage tale" has me sitting on the edge of my chair. And have you noticed both "grim" and "image" are bound together and overlapping in the word "pilgrimage"?

xero
10-26-2011, 05:49 AM
Nice rhyming, I must- wait, what are you doing here?!
You should be stuck in the tomb, screaming in fear! :kz:

Thanks for the kind words, but you are mistaken,
though my body was captured, my consciousnesses wasn't taken.

>er.
10-26-2011, 05:52 PM
http://cosheeta.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4e0i4o

Ayup, i did it. It's only part of the story, and all sketches but, the heck it was harder than i thought xD
(Uuuh it's too big to upload on photobucket, you all know how to use DeviantArt right?)

Thanks Jack! Again, keep going! :p

Testudini
10-26-2011, 06:00 PM
http://gyazo.com/0bf34abfbf5cf94d5b1ee639bef05533.png

http://assets0.ordienetworks.com/images/GifGuide/DealWithIt/Terminator-deal-with-it.gif

Good job! :D

Lady_Luck__777
10-26-2011, 07:00 PM
Yay Jack!
I'm looking forward to future editions of your fun and witty stories.
Only problem is:
I see the stories in my sleep
and all the rhyming in my head doth peep.
So when I lay upon my bed
the stories continue in my head.:)

nerzdadestroyer
10-27-2011, 06:45 PM
awesomeness.... these are soo good ( oh and lol, nys :p ) cant wait for part 4, will anybody die??? :O

craigmond
10-27-2011, 06:58 PM
You're running out of colours there. Great story so far!

Valeview
10-27-2011, 09:31 PM
Great Story! But Most of the people in the story...i seem to know all of them.
I have no idea who most are!
anyways, thanks for including me...I seem a little...odd to say the least!

nysudyrgh
10-29-2011, 03:22 PM
Yay Jack!
I'm looking forward to future editions of your fun and witty stories.
Only problem is:
I see the stories in my sleep
and all the rhyming in my head doth peep.
So when I lay upon my bed
the stories continue in my head.:)

That's cheating, you already know what happens next. :mad:









:p

Outlaw-Jack
11-01-2011, 06:02 AM
It is with much reluctance, and a little sorrow,
That the final part won't be up `til tomorrow.
But there's still some other news, and, to say with much glee...
I finally got my Internet working on my PS3.

Lady_Luck__777
11-01-2011, 02:04 PM
[QUOTE=Thennys;946102]That's cheating, you already know what happens next. :mad:


I wish I did but I don't. Why would you say that, it's Jack's story.

@Jack- can't wait to read the rest of the story.

biorogue
11-05-2011, 06:44 PM
It is with much reluctance, and a little sorrow,
That the final part won't be up `til tomorrow.
But there's still some other news, and, to say with much glee...
I finally got my Internet working on my PS3.

wow, where I live "tomorrow" means the very next day
what's going on Jack? What is the delay?
I hope you're safe and not in some trouble.
Perhaps you were sucked into a time bubble?
Are you now roaming the land in the past?
running from dinosaurs, I sure hope you're fast
Maybe the future you did enter
please tell me there's not a nuclear winter
well I see your last visit was just 10 hours ago
maybe I just missed it, am I that slow?
Please Jack post the next chapter
and fill this thread once again with laughter

Lady_Luck__777
11-06-2011, 01:17 PM
Jack where are you???
Having withdrawal's here.. need next chapter please.

RickRock_777
11-06-2011, 02:59 PM
OK...I'm jumping,
On this train too.
Still a bit baffled,
Could there be a snafu?
Or has PS withdrawals
Got the better of Jack?
Oh wait, now I see,
Jack's Burger is back!

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=37626

Outlaw-Jack
11-06-2011, 09:44 PM
My life has been quite busy,
As much as you'd object.
I have to write a Western
For a school film project.
It's also true that lately,
I've been on my PS3,
But that's when I'm not busy
And when I have time for me.
This story will conclude
once the last part is done.
I'm doing all I can,
So sit tight, everyone!

xero
11-06-2011, 10:53 PM
It's good to hear from you,
The worst is what I'd feared,
I thought that you'd forgotten about us,
or simply disappeared.
It's hard sometimes to be patient,
But I will try my best,
To wait it out until you're done
And hold back my protest.