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Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-06-2009, 09:08 PM
Level Name: The Facility
Creator: Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX

I've been hard at work on this level constantly for the past while, and after much testing, and level making, its finally done. Please note, you can complete this level with multiple people, but is best played singleplayer.

Update: just added a new update, I've added many more "secret" locations for more points, and added in a new race mode in which you unlock for beating the level, adding alot more replayability and promotes you to do better than your previous run. I've also colour coded the last boss fight to make it a little easier.

Pics: Here are some pics of my level, and i did not post pictures of the two best things in my level, each boss, wanted them to be a surprise :] and the pics IMO dont do the level justice at all because there's usually always something moving in your sights, and the quality of the pics isnt that great, but anyways, enjoy :) (sorry that many of the pics are from editing mode)

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4174/1003182gn2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2089/1003183gi7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3161/1003184qt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/834/1003185uq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4898/1003187pq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5661/1003189on1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Description: You are subject 43, one of many. You have been chosen to participate in the facility, training grounds in which none before you have survived through. Will you do the impossible and survive, or die like the rest?

Boss Fights: They're are two boss fights, both are epic, and full boss fights. Each take up a good chunk of the thermometer. And are both very original. They both have a nice challenge to them, and are both well made.

Music / Sound Effects / Camera Zones: All music is set to fit the theme of the battle, or stuff going on. The sound effects all match their actions, and fit nicely. The camera zones all work very well, and allow you to see what you need to do, and whats going on.

Custom Content: EVERYTHING in my level is completely custom, i made it all myself, and dislike using other users stuff (but feel free to use anything of mine if you want to :P). The boss fights are especially original, and im sure you'll have a blast fighting both.

Gameplay: My level has been made to have both the paintinator and platforming, all implemented from the beggining, not just a tacky add on. There is plenty of doing / using both, and sometimes a mix of both paintinator and platforming at the same time.

Testing and Community Support: My level has been played thoroughly multiple times, and made sure to not be buggy / glitchy. It all runs smoothly and is error free (to my knowledge anyways :P). I'd like to thank The_Killian and OCK for playtesting my level, and helping with feedback.

Feedback 4 Feedback: I will keep us aswell as i can with F4F, and i will get to everyone at some point in time. Please post your likes and dislikes / tips / suggestions etc. If you want me to give you feedback please post your psn username and level name :] thanks.

I hope you enjoy playing my level as much as i enjoyed making it :) have fun you guys ^^

p.s. if you ace the level (good luck :P) you get the final boss ;)

Kog
01-07-2009, 12:56 AM
I started this level thinking it was going to be good, and it was. The many little challenges were tricky, but I passed them. I liked the robot with his many stickers and decorations. The first boss was good, but there is a slight cheat to beat him, were you just hide in the little box that the square goes in, and shoot from there. You can't die. Most people make bosses like you, were you have to kill them, then get a box, and put it in a hollow shape matching it. Instead, make the boss have a Magnetic Key on it, and have a Magnetic Key Switch, that fills the whole room with it's radius. Invert the Magnetic Key Switch, then connect it to the thing you want to open. So, when you kill the boss, and the Magnetic key disappears, the door opens. :hero:

There were only two things I didn't like in this level. Some of the background walls and such could of had more detail. That final boss was not killing me a lot, yet it was just annoying to keep having to dodge back into to cover over, and over, and over again. The Boss took me about 10 minutes to beat. And got pretty boring.

Overall it was a good level. 4 Stars, and hearted. Good job!

Sonic5411
01-07-2009, 01:07 AM
Looks super complicated
Im going to have to try it out

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-07-2009, 01:10 AM
I started this level thinking it was going to be good, and it was. The many little challenges were tricky, but I passed them. I liked the robot with his many stickers and decorations. The first boss was good, but there is a slight cheat to beat him, were you just hide in the little box that the square goes in, and shoot from there. You can't die. Most people make bosses like you, were you have to kill them, then get a box, and put it in a hollow shape matching it. Instead, make the boss have a Magnetic Key on it, and have a Magnetic Key Switch, that fills the whole room with it's radius. Invert the Magnetic Key Switch, then connect it to the thing you want to open. So, when you kill the boss, and the Magnetic key disappears, the door opens. :hero:

There were only two things I didn't like in this level. Some of the background walls and such could of had more detail. That final boss was not killing me a lot, yet it was just annoying to keep having to dodge back into to cover over, and over, and over again. The Boss took me about 10 minutes to beat. And got pretty boring.

Overall it was a good level. 4 Stars, and hearted. Good job!

hmm, thank you for the info the on the key info especially, i was always wondering how to do that! :P i really appreciate it, next time im on ill be sure to fix that right away.

and ill try and get some stuff in the backgrounds, try and fill it up again, thanks yet again for more feedback :)

10 minutes!? :O hmm, we're you always running back to the bos for cover or did you switch back and fourth inbetween layers? it never takes me all that long to do it, but i guess that could just be cus i made the level :/ ill see if i can throw something together to change that up.

Thanks for all the feedback.


Looks super complicated
Im going to have to try it out

i hope you enjoy playing it :)

ZepOfLed
01-07-2009, 01:15 AM
Good work Sniper! I just played your level and I've got to say that I enjoyed it thoroughly. I consider myself fairly adept at LBP by now, and I was completely satisfied with the difficulty. It's hard enough that you have to pay attention, and maybe die a few times to get the timing down, but not hard enough to be annoying. I like your scenery objects and machines, such as the collapsing doors and mechanical bridges. Also, the way that you advance is pretty cool; shooting targets that, when destroyed, move covers in front of the blasters in your way.

I would say that the level is very complete and I wouldn't change much. However, for the final boss, it's hard to tell which blasts are on which layer, making them difficult to dodge properly. Maybe if you made the blasts on one layer a different color it would be easier to tell. Once I figured out the pattern it wasn't bad though. The target on his gun takes a while to destroy because of the frequent blasts, but that's a good thing. For the target on his head, all I had to do was stand on the back layer right in front of him and fire a constant stream of paint. I don't know if that's what you wanted, but you might consider amending it.

Great otherwise!

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-07-2009, 01:41 AM
Good work Sniper! I just played your level and I've got to say that I enjoyed it thoroughly. I consider myself fairly adept at LBP by now, and I was completely satisfied with the difficulty. It's hard enough that you have to pay attention, and maybe die a few times to get the timing down, but not hard enough to be annoying. I like your scenery objects and machines, such as the collapsing doors and mechanical bridges. Also, the way that you advance is pretty cool; shooting targets that, when destroyed, move covers in front of the blasters in your way.

I would say that the level is very complete and I wouldn't change much. However, for the final boss, it's hard to tell which blasts are on which layer, making them difficult to dodge properly. Maybe if you made the blasts on one layer a different color it would be easier to tell. Once I figured out the pattern it wasn't bad though. The target on his gun takes a while to destroy because of the frequent blasts, but that's a good thing. For the target on his head, all I had to do was stand on the back layer right in front of him and fire a constant stream of paint. I don't know if that's what you wanted, but you might consider amending it.

Great otherwise!

thanks for the feedback Zep, i just posted my feedback on your level too (sorry it took so long). Im glad you enjoyed the level :) and yeah, i was thinking that as i was designing it, but never went through with changing the colours, but after the feedback im hearing i think ill be changing that up. Other than that im glad you liked it :)

OCK
01-07-2009, 11:19 AM
I had a chnace to try this out earlier today, here are my thoughts:

Pros

- Complexity. You have so many moving elements and switch combinations happening that I was literally astounded. The sheer volume of it all is something that I have not really seen before. Amazing stuff.

- The gameplay kept me entertained from beginning to end. The action is non-stop, the platforming is clever and I particularly liked your use of dissolve to open up new areas/platforms etc. Very well done.

- Two bosses, what more can I say? I loved the first boss. It's movement pattern was unlike any other boss' that I have fought and the receeding elevator was a nice touch. I loved the look of the second boss but there were some problems (more on that later).

- Challenge. I love a good challenge and this level provided it. I must stress that it never felt frustrating but always kept me on my toes.

- Story. Your story isn't overly complex but I do appreciate that narrative was implemented to move things forward. I also loved the design of your robot, very cool.

Cons/Suggestions:

- I was not able to finish the level. The reason? Your final boss. EXTREMELY tedious and overly difficult to kill. You designed the boss in such a way that the player literally has 1.5 seconds to get a couple of shots off (which need to be aimed perfectly) before they have to scurry back to cover and wait another 4 seconds before venturing out again. I got very impatient and ended up using all 16 of my lives without even destroying at least 1 of it's weakpoints. If there is a secret then maybe add a speech bubble to assist he player, otherwise some serious tweaking is needed here. I loved the look of the boss and was very disappointed that I could not finish the level.

- I mentioned this in my pm but I must mention it again. I would love to see a bit of variation in the background. The blue VR grid looks great but gets boring after a while. Thankfully the level is so well put together that this is only a minor complaint.

Ultimately this was a highly enjoyable level that earned a HEART! Great job and I hope you tweak the boss soon so I can have another go and see the ending :)

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-07-2009, 01:44 PM
I had a chnace to try this out earlier today, here are my thoughts:

Pros

- Complexity. You have so many moving elements and switch combinations happening that I was literally astounded. The sheer volume of it all is something that I have not really seen before. Amazing stuff.

thanks, im glad that this was noticed, this was something i wanted to have from the very beggining :)


- The gameplay kept me entertained from beginning to end. The action is non-stop, the platforming is clever and I particularly liked your use of dissolve to open up new areas/platforms etc. Very well done.

I'm glad you enjoyed this, and that you weren't ever bored ^^


- Two bosses, what more can I say? I loved the first boss. It's movement pattern was unlike any other boss' that I have fought and the receeding elevator was a nice touch. I loved the look of the second boss but there were some problems (more on that later).

Thanks, after making the first boss, i was kind of ticked knowing my second boss probably wouldnt be as unique as the first, but i decided to stick with the idea of two bosses, and ill explain more on the second boss later in the post.


- Challenge. I love a good challenge and this level provided it. I must stress that it never felt frustrating but always kept me on my toes.

haha, glad it was balanced out :)


- Story. Your story isn't overly complex but I do appreciate that narrative was implemented to move things forward. I also loved the design of your robot, very cool.

heh, thats usually what i always end up doing :P no big story, but enough to push you ;)


Cons/Suggestions:

- I was not able to finish the level. The reason? Your final boss. EXTREMELY tedious and overly difficult to kill. You designed the boss in such a way that the player literally has 1.5 seconds to get a couple of shots off (which need to be aimed perfectly) before they have to scurry back to cover and wait another 4 seconds before venturing out again. I got very impatient and ended up using all 16 of my lives without even destroying at least 1 of it's weakpoints. If there is a secret then maybe add a speech bubble to assist he player, otherwise some serious tweaking is needed here. I loved the look of the boss and was very disappointed that I could not finish the level.

ok, here's what i think the problem is, i think people are running back from every single laser ball, but what you have to do is use each layer back nad fourth. I've made this MUCH easier to see in a newer version i released just this morning. I colour coded each type of laser so its easier to notice which layer its on. Try it out again and tell me if the new clues i provided are easy enough to get you through the fight :)


- I mentioned this in my pm but I must mention it again. I would love to see a bit of variation in the background. The blue VR grid looks great but gets boring after a while. Thankfully the level is so well put together that this is only a minor complaint.

yeah, i know this was a complaint from a few, ill try and throw something together to make it look different, but still organized.


Ultimately this was a highly enjoyable level that earned a HEART! Great job and I hope you tweak the boss soon so I can have another go and see the ending :)

thanks for giving all this feedback OCK, ill be sure to try and fix up the background with something more spiffy. As for the boss fight, i did change it up, and would like to know if what i added is enough help?

thanks again :)

GruntosUK
01-07-2009, 05:17 PM
Just had a play, its a .. level. Heres what I thought the pros and cons were.

+ Its very well designed. Everything flows, fits, and looks great. I was'nt liking the VR look in the screen shots but its well done.
+ Original characters and obstacles
+ I like how the areas are always changing, new paths opening, the cannons getting blocked etc, it all looks and works great
+ Like the way different doors open, it looks very cool
+ First boss looks great.
+ I though your obstacles and platforming section where loads more intresting than the paintinator sections
+ The platforming really is brilliant
+The last boss looks awesome. And is hard to beat

- A pet hate of mine, is swinging on cloth attached to ropes over dangers. Its been done to death.
- You can hide in a hole on the first boss and hardly be touched or have to move.
- The first boss also takes a LOT of shots, it gets boring
- The paintinator when the platforming is so good

This is an excellently designed level that is definetly worthy of a play. It flows brilliant and makes excelllent use of the VR textures. The only problem I had with it, was that the platforming and obstacles where so good, that the paintinator, for me, let it down, and were the worst parts.

**** and "brilliant" tag left in game

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-07-2009, 05:53 PM
Just had a play, its a .. level. Heres what I thought the pros and cons were.

+ Its very well designed. Everything flows, fits, and looks great. I was'nt liking the VR look in the screen shots but its well done.
+ Original characters and obstacles
+ I like how the areas are always changing, new paths opening, the cannons getting blocked etc, it all looks and works great
+ Like the way different doors open, it looks very cool
+ First boss looks great.
+ I though your obstacles and platforming section where loads more intresting than the paintinator sections
+ The platforming really is brilliant
+The last boss looks awesome. And is hard to beat

- A pet hate of mine, is swinging on cloth attached to ropes over dangers. Its been done to death.
- You can hide in a hole on the first boss and hardly be touched or have to move.
- The first boss also takes a LOT of shots, it gets boring
- The paintinator when the platforming is so good

This is an excellently designed level that is definetly worthy of a play. It flows brilliant and makes excelllent use of the VR textures. The only problem I had with it, was that the platforming and obstacles where so good, that the paintinator, for me, let it down, and were the worst parts.

**** and "brilliant" tag left in game


thanks for all the feedback grantos, hmm, maybe ill lower the health on the first boss then, ill get a little more feedback on him first though. This is the first time the first boss has gotten more critism than the second, but i guess you were the first person to play the new colour coded second boss and leave feedback.

It's a shame you didnt like the paintinator parts though, and sorry bout the swinging over obstacle parts, yes i do know its been overdone to death, i just love doing it, its kind of a bad habit of mine :/

im currently at home, but ill give your level a go tonight and give you feedback as soon as possible (either tonight, or tomorrow mid-day)

thanks again for the feedback, and im glad you liked all the moving things / new areas / stuff changing etc :)

GruntosUK
01-07-2009, 06:02 PM
thanks for all the feedback grantos, hmm, maybe ill lower the health on the first boss then, ill get a little more feedback on him first though. This is the first time the first boss has gotten more critism than the second, but i guess you were the first person to play the new colour coded second boss and leave feedback.

It's a shame you didnt like the paintinator parts though, and sorry bout the swinging over obstacle parts, yes i do know its been overdone to death, i just love doing it, its kind of a bad habit of mine :/

im currently at home, but ill give your level a go tonight and give you feedback as soon as possible (either tonight, or tomorrow mid-day)

thanks again for the feedback, and im glad you liked all the moving things / new areas / stuff changing etc :)

I did'nt not like the paintinator sections, just the platform sections were much better IMO.

And the swinging things are my personal pet hate. Some like, some loath I think ;)

Excellent level though. Really enjoyed it

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-08-2009, 12:14 AM
I did'nt not like the paintinator sections, just the platform sections were much better IMO.

And the swinging things are my personal pet hate. Some like, some loath I think ;)

Excellent level though. Really enjoyed it

ahh i see, well thats not as bad then :D i personally dont like the paintinator when im just standing still, but aslong as i need to be moving as im using it i like it.

haha, yup, everyones got a different oppinion, and nothing can be perfect, because no matter what, it can't be perfect to ALL, just some ;)

thanks, and im glad you did. Ill be sure to check out your level tonight, and from the screens in your thread, and comments, it looks very good :] looking forward to hitting it up ^^

Update: just added a new update, I've added many more "secret" locations for more points, and added in a new race mode in which you unlock for beating the level, adding alot more replayability and promotes you to do better than your previous run. I've also colour coded the last boss fight to make it a little easier.

If anyone tries the race mode out, can you please tell me if i provided enough time, im pretty sure i did, but i want to make sure.

Dimo1138
01-10-2009, 02:26 PM
Yeah, this level was cool. I had my doubts when I first loaded it up, I felt a little accosted by the amount VR materials used, but once I started the level, I was hooked. The shooting was great, the platforming was awesome, the level progressed fluidly and it was all challenging to boot! Really, I could explain it, but you really have to play through the first few obstacles to really understand the method of progression in this level. It was definitely well planned out and must have been difficult to make it all work properly. Outside of the overwhelming amount of VR (I feel the VR materials are good accents but not good to make a whole level out of.) the only problem I had with this level is that there were multiple life gates that had the potential to spawn you directly into death. It wasn't that much of a problem here because he gave you plenty of lives and the gates were spaced out well but in the future, I would watch out for this sort of thing. You don't want to discourage people from playing and, if the level is difficult to start with, that can be the type of thing to make someone just outright quit. Anyhow That's that and we'll see you around.

ryryryan
01-10-2009, 03:03 PM
Woah.... didn't see this! I'm gunna change the name of my level - too similar!

Btw - your level looks awesome so if i get the time i'll check it out!

Killian
01-10-2009, 04:49 PM
Fantastic level. It looks great, it's challenging and really fun to play. It also has good replay value with lots of secrets to find. I really liked the bosses and the cool visual effects like the scoreboard and lights.

One bug is on the second spinning wheel that you have to shoot. After it broke (like it was meant to), I jumped into the gap it left above it because I thought it was a secret. I got stuck and had to kill myself. I think you should close the gap or add a secret area there. ;)

JackBurton25
01-10-2009, 05:45 PM
Very nice level!

+ Good challenge.
+ I like that first robot!
+ The way doors, bridges and traps open is very cool.
+ Everything (i think) is custom. Big + for me.
+ I like the way the level change to give you new paths when you kill an ennemy.
+ Good use of the Paintinator.
+ That last boss is very cool!

- Too much shots are needed to kill the first boss.
- It's good to be constant in the visuals of a level, but it's a bit too much of the same texture everywhere. I like to see some kind of "evolution" in the environment as I progress.

Again, very nice level!!
5 stars, hearted.

I need comments too on a level I made.
The link is in my signature if you have some time.

Thanks!

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-10-2009, 07:28 PM
thanks for all the feedback you guys, and since the VR material isnt like everywhere, i might totally redo the materials, we'll see, i wanna fool around more with that.

hmm, great idea Killian, i spose i could throw a secret in there somewhere if i get a chance :] although it wouldn't be much of a secret now, lol

ok, ill lower the hit points on him by 25 and see how that goes, and yep everything is completely custom :] i love designing everything myself ^^

haha @ ryryryan :P it seems "facility" is quite common these days :P

@jack, ill be sure to check it out, ill post feedback by tomorrow :]

thanks again for feedback everyone, please keep it coming as i am updating the level on a daily-weekly basis, because i still have about 5-10% left on my thermy :D

BassDeluxe
01-10-2009, 11:39 PM
Pros

- Aesthetics work well

- Both bosses are fun to look at and to fight. The color coding on the second one works well.

- Platforming and shooting was fun.

- Difficulty is well balanced.

- Music is good.

Cons

- That part at the beginning, like the first thing you have to shoot. After I shot it and the platform lowered, I had a really hard time getting on the platform. Maybe make it move further down?

Just one minor gripe about your level. It was good, nice job. I gave it 5 stars and a heart.

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-11-2009, 04:28 AM
Pros

- Aesthetics work well

- Both bosses are fun to look at and to fight. The color coding on the second one works well.

- Platforming and shooting was fun.

- Difficulty is well balanced.

- Music is good.

Cons

- That part at the beginning, like the first thing you have to shoot. After I shot it and the platform lowered, I had a really hard time getting on the platform. Maybe make it move further down?

Just one minor gripe about your level. It was good, nice job. I gave it 5 stars and a heart.

ahh yes, i know what you mean. I don't think the problem is from it the way it moves, but its on a different layer than the platform, so sometimes the auto assist doesnt kick in and put you on the right layer and you just fall :/ ill have to fixy that up, shouldnt be hard at all to do ^^

thanks for the feedback DeluxeBass, please keep it coming you guys :]

TJapan
01-11-2009, 08:11 AM
Fun, Complex level. i had a good time, except that first boss made my trigger finger tired. maybe you could color coide the 1st boss, like you did the second?

i liked the platforming, and the shooting was pretty good. very complex way to move around, and it was good how you executed the obstacles. the blue VR grid though... it works with the theme, but i would use it a bit more sparingly. my level has some of the green in it, and im sure people will tell me the same.

good job on the camera angles! there wasnt anything glaring i could really sink my critical tooth into so i'll give your level 2 thumbs up!

EDIT: ahh yes, its not super important, but if you'd like to take a break to play a level, my psn is my forum name. give Dr. Tecnova's Lair a shot.

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-11-2009, 05:52 PM
Fun, Complex level. i had a good time, except that first boss made my trigger finger tired. maybe you could color coide the 1st boss, like you did the second?

i liked the platforming, and the shooting was pretty good. very complex way to move around, and it was good how you executed the obstacles. the blue VR grid though... it works with the theme, but i would use it a bit more sparingly. my level has some of the green in it, and im sure people will tell me the same.

good job on the camera angles! there wasnt anything glaring i could really sink my critical tooth into so i'll give your level 2 thumbs up!

EDIT: ahh yes, its not super important, but if you'd like to take a break to play a level, my psn is my forum name. give Dr. Tecnova's Lair a shot.

yeah, I'll be releasing a level tonight where the boss will take 25 less hits, and I'm gonna try fooling around with different materials. The level may look completely different if i get out of hand :P

and I will definetily give your level a shot, probably tonight, and if not then monday for sure.

Thank you for all the feedback too! and im glad the camera angles worked well without problems :) i tried to make sure that you could always see what was coming for you, and what you needed to do / shoot / where you needed to go ^^ thanks again for the feedback.

Creative
01-14-2009, 03:37 PM
I stumbled across this yesterday when I was cycling through someone's hearted levels... Boy, is it awesome. Here are some of my thoughts...

The Paintinator was incorporated brilliantly. Very few levels put it to good use, they think they have to put it in to make it good, but you my good sir, put it to justice. The difficulty was spot on aswell. Not too challenging, not too easy but BOOOY did that boss make me want to hit something! xD Nice job making the planes colour coded though.

The way you set up everything made it feel like Portal, which is always a good thing. I love all the secret areas aswell - it added to the replayability value although I'm pretty sure I found them all first time ^_^

The mechanisms were ingenious and the platforming sections flowed superbly. Right now, I honestly can't think of any negatives. You should be proud of yourself and the level.

Well done - 5 stars and hearted.

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-14-2009, 09:42 PM
I stumbled across this yesterday when I was cycling through someone's hearted levels... Boy, is it awesome. Here are some of my thoughts...

The Paintinator was incorporated brilliantly. Very few levels put it to good use, they think they have to put it in to make it good, but you my good sir, put it to justice. The difficulty was spot on aswell. Not too challenging, not too easy but BOOOY did that boss make me want to hit something! xD Nice job making the planes colour coded though.

The way you set up everything made it feel like Portal, which is always a good thing. I love all the secret areas aswell - it added to the replayability value although I'm pretty sure I found them all first time ^_^

The mechanisms were ingenious and the platforming sections flowed superbly. Right now, I honestly can't think of any negatives. You should be proud of yourself and the level.

Well done - 5 stars and hearted.

heh, thats cool you found me through someones hearted levels ^^ its a nice feeling :]

thanks ever so much :) im very glad that you enjoyed the level, so, how many secrets did ya find?

theres 4 in total atm, but ill probably add more in the future :]

thanks a ton for playing it, and even more for posting on it in here :)

Creative
01-15-2009, 03:13 PM
No problem :) Hm, there are 4 eh? I'm 75% sure I found all of them... ^_^

I love ALL your levels by the way. I hearted all of them and you as a creator! I'll leave feedback on them later, but you only have two threads up so I'll post the feedback for "Area 52 - Live or die" and PM you the other feedback... You should put threads up of your other levels! :cool:

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-15-2009, 05:37 PM
thanks man, i really appreciate all this feedback :) its very much appreciated, and 75% sure :P

and i might, the only problem is getting pictures of em, if i can get some then i will, but i dont really want to make a thread for them without pics :( then it probably wouldnt get as much attention as i'd like :/

Senrir
01-16-2009, 09:49 AM
Just played it through ... and here are my thoughts ^^" :

Umm ...
ummmm....

- speechless -

lol ... no really its that good!

I have no cons to giva ya!
This is a true MGS-type level!

The challenges were really good!
You have design the level so that you will make use of both arm-grabbing skill and paintinator ^^" which is really good! Not like what we see in the MGS-pack! Very innovative I might say!

The boss was really a boss battle. Though it might be a nice approach to use an inf. checkpoint there for the casual players - and so that everyone gets to appreciate how good the boss battle is without thinking of ... omg! Im about to die ... >,<"

Hearted and Creator-hearted ^^"

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-16-2009, 12:47 PM
haha, thanks ^^

and yeah, i dont have the infinite checkpoint, but i may get the one everyone uses on here and personalize it with a personal touch :)

but overall, im really glad you liked it man :) so no problems with the level?... awesome XD

just curious, has anyone tried out race mode? any problems?

thanks for playing and posting man, i really appreciate it :)

talmasca
01-16-2009, 04:44 PM
pure class 5 stars
gave you hearts on lvls and author

no cons for the facility except i thought the bosses were very hard ( not impossible though ) and some simple minded gamers will give up easily, but i like it the way it is, you can decide whether it needs changing or not

i loved the detail, especially lights and the final boss looked so awesome

talmasca
01-16-2009, 04:49 PM
oops forgot to say can u play my 2 levels and give me feedback thanks

level: silent hill 2 REBORN pt 1 and pt 2
psn: talmasca

Xx_FAF_Sniper_xX
01-16-2009, 05:04 PM
pure class 5 stars
gave you hearts on lvls and author

no cons for the facility except i thought the bosses were very hard ( not impossible though ) and some simple minded gamers will give up easily, but i like it the way it is, you can decide whether it needs changing or not

i loved the detail, especially lights and the final boss looked so awesome

thanks, and yeah, the bosses can be hard, but their not that bad if you find out how to kill them / read their attack patterns.

and i've been asked to add inf. checkpoints, so i may do that when i get the chance.

And ill play your levels when i get a chance... my LBP has been giving me problems and wont load up anything :( not even my levels...