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RockSauron
01-10-2009, 01:41 AM
The Index:

Chapter 1: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_0d44wk2g6
Chapter 2: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_1kmhgr5gc&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 3: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_2gw29d23p&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 4: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_3c88wjsdg
Chapter 5: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_4g26nxjhb
Chapter 6: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_5cs2qp5fj&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 7: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_6hpdrwbs6&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 8: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_7dd7txxkr&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 9: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_9dwqbthds&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 10: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_10c4qt7bgj&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 11: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_12gf4bhpg6&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 12: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_13vfqr5fg4&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 13: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_14d96vf7g8&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 14: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_15dcthfmf6&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 15: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_16hntpzvck&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 16: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_17hpb78dg4&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 17: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_18d4x99qcj&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 18: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_22f328jndd&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en

Snrm
01-11-2009, 03:27 AM
preety sweet but why dont you put it on google docs and post the link thats what i do with my story

DrunkMiffy
01-11-2009, 05:44 PM
Was that drunken pirate a cheap shot at me O_O?

Snrm
01-11-2009, 08:39 PM
i dont think so Miffy

RAINFIRE
01-11-2009, 08:48 PM
Well we atleast know clank was in there :P hahaha, can't wait to see where he puts me :p, I remeber us doing something like this a while back, It was before the game came out and it was when the beta keys were just starting to come out, so it was a while back if you know what i mean. I laughed my head off at every line in that thing. I hope this one can become just as good if not better.

Cheers!

Snrm
01-11-2009, 08:53 PM
how do you know spambot isnt ME!!!! :P

RockSauron
01-11-2009, 08:54 PM
Well, you'd be thinking of Forsaken's story, Rain. Mine probably wouldn't be as good >_<.

Though this is supposed to be the story version of the RPG I was making, and in that I knew who you'd be :/. See, I had an arcade run by SlappMeDo in there, and you were going to always be in the arcade, cause of your insane arcade thignie.

So, anyway... anyone think this is worth me continuing? >_<

Snrm
01-11-2009, 08:57 PM
yes defianatly!

RockSauron
01-11-2009, 08:58 PM
yes defianatly!

aside from you.

... :(

Thee-Flash
01-11-2009, 09:00 PM
lol cool cool i liked it, good ol' spambot clank lol

Alex™
01-11-2009, 09:07 PM
Well, you'd be thinking of Forsaken's story, Rain. Mine probably wouldn't be as good >_<.

Though this is supposed to be the story version of the RPG I was making, and in that I knew who you'd be :/. See, I had an arcade run by SlappMeDo in there, and you were going to always be in the arcade, cause of your insane arcade thignie.

So, anyway... anyone think this is worth me continuing? >_<

Yeah, tis cool... but i want in!!!

RockSauron
01-11-2009, 09:15 PM
Ok, guess that's good enough for now... am going to start writing Chapter 2 now :/

I'll probably upload them like snrm said, so I'll just change the first post each time then with the link to the next part.

moleynator
01-11-2009, 10:32 PM
I just wanna see what you make me do. :D

RockSauron
01-11-2009, 10:37 PM
Ok, so, managed to update the thing, so just make sure that link works.

moleynator
01-11-2009, 10:38 PM
Ok, so, managed to update the thing, so just make sure that link works.

It works fine.

I love the bit about dorien.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-11-2009, 10:47 PM
Nice stuff, can't wait for Chapter 2...

moleynator
01-11-2009, 10:54 PM
Nice stuff, can't wait for Chapter 2...

Yeah! Hurry up! :p

I made a sprite comic once. I did about 3 chapters and gave up. It was ok while it lasted though.

UmJammerSully
01-11-2009, 11:29 PM
About 1,000 times better than I expected. I mean that in a good way of course.

*waits to see how the rest of the gang are incorporated*

Thee-Flash
01-11-2009, 11:31 PM
*waits to see the rest of the gang are incorporated*

....................lol newb

RockSauron
01-11-2009, 11:49 PM
There ya go, guys- Chapter 2 already :/.

Thee-Flash
01-11-2009, 11:51 PM
There ya go, guys- Chapter 2 already :/.

wooooot *starts reading*

Sage
01-11-2009, 11:53 PM
Nice stuff. Keep writing, i'm off to go hunt some Deku Babas.

moleynator
01-11-2009, 11:59 PM
Ooooohh...

What side will I be on?...

Quite exciting. Spelt took wrong at one point though so I give it -10.

:p

Thee-Flash
01-12-2009, 12:00 AM
a few mistakes but who cares lol

very good keep it up bud

Sage
01-12-2009, 12:03 AM
Berry goowd.

UmJammerSully
01-12-2009, 12:06 AM
Genius, just genius. I laughed and I cried. It was beautiful.

RockSauron
01-12-2009, 12:08 AM
*sniff* any other input besides the aweomse thingies >_

Sage
01-12-2009, 12:09 AM
*sniff* any other input besides the aweomse thingies >_
It sucked, worst thing I ever read. KIDDING! Awesome!

moleynator
01-12-2009, 12:11 AM
*sniff* any other input besides the aweomse thingies >_
As in crit? I dont think you need to change anything. Its only for us, afterall.

RockSauron
01-12-2009, 12:12 AM
As in crit? I dont think you need to change anything. Its only for us, afterall.

fine >_<

So... anyone have any ideas for what they wanna be?

I already have a few that I know who they'll be.... (namely Whaaaale).

Sage
01-12-2009, 12:15 AM
I wanna be Link! :D Epic.

moleynator
01-12-2009, 12:17 AM
I could help break in to kill dorien. Being a mole, I would be blind and can dig out of trouble (or into) or I could escape by other means such as lockpicks and bad acting.

Code1337
01-12-2009, 12:47 AM
I liked it, and I have an idea for Chapter 3...

RockSauron
01-12-2009, 12:48 AM
I liked it, you may continue rock.

If you say it's ok, my master...

RAINFIRE
01-12-2009, 01:09 AM
Bravo! keep it up, put me in wherever you see fit :p

Cheers!

DrunkMiffy
01-12-2009, 06:59 AM
Self proclaimed? I'm disgusted wit choo >.<

And LOL Doriens gunna get P00NED

Thee-Flash
01-12-2009, 07:29 AM
what's the flash going to dooo >.<

Alex™
01-12-2009, 10:38 AM
I think me and Flash should just have a party :D

Stix489
01-12-2009, 11:17 AM
Pretty neat :]

Boomy
01-12-2009, 01:32 PM
Thats awesome :p canibeinitplease :O I'll party with Iron and Flash.

Don Vhalt
01-12-2009, 01:43 PM
fine >_<

So... anyone have any ideas for what they wanna be?

I already have a few that I know who they'll be.... (namely Whaaaale).

can i be the boss of a crime empire who sells weapons to the resistance?

also this story is brilliant please write more:)

RockSauron
01-12-2009, 09:50 PM
Chapter 3- kinda darker in a way, but, :/

Code1337
01-12-2009, 10:06 PM
Nicely done Lord Sauron.

moleynator
01-12-2009, 10:58 PM
OMG you banned giant!

Great chapter! Getmeintharwiththoseguys!

RAINFIRE
01-12-2009, 11:17 PM
We need to pull Clank out of the Spam Can again (LOL) :p

Cheers!

Sonic5411
01-12-2009, 11:19 PM
There is only one thing this story needs............................................. .............A blue hedgehog:hero:

amirite?

moleynator
01-12-2009, 11:24 PM
We need to pull Clank out of the Spam Can again (LOL) :p

Cheers!

Hes safe with Reshin! Silly rain... :p

ClankXIII
01-12-2009, 11:36 PM
I find that any attempt to create a fictional tale with the inclusion of myself is not of any being's sentimental value. Rather than basing the character off of the manner in which I speak and pronounce my thoughts and opinions, it becomes some sort of a personified item of inanimacy. Although I understand the premise of robots and their behavior, and the obvious inclusions of these characteristics, I am not satisfied with the unsucceeding misinterpreted depiction of myself. Far from that, in fact, as I am displeased beyond the point of forgiveness. I was once impressed by that of Forsaken's fables, until all of my lines were later replaced with onomotapias, to further emphasize my inhuman traits, and were used as a means of speech as to avoid more lengthy typing. I can only conclude that I am disappointed with these misjudging character iterations of myself. Until someone applies concentration to the use of their thought process to bestow an accurate perception of who I really am, I award you with a false sense of accomlishment, although having taken the time to read this, you should have hopefully had it taken away.





By the way, RockSauron, what color are my eyes?
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/71/Order_of_the_Arrow_Member.svg/40px-Order_of_the_Arrow_Member.svg.png

Sonic5411
01-12-2009, 11:41 PM
Dont get butthurt its just a story


at least your in it:(

moleynator
01-12-2009, 11:42 PM
Red when you spam Clank. :p

Its not serious Clank. I wouldnt mind if RS announced that I was controlling you all along and that I was the real spambot. :D

RockSauron
01-13-2009, 12:59 AM
Uh, Clank, I said they're normally Blue- it's just that they go red when you enter "SUPER SPAM!" mode >_<

ClankXIII
01-13-2009, 01:11 AM
Uh, Clank, I said they're normally Blue- it's just that they go red when you enter "SUPER SPAM!" mode >_<

Okay, I wasn't even talking about that, but now that you mention it:

I don't have red eyes. I don't get them when I'm angry either. Klunk has red eyes, not me.

Now that we've got that settled: What color are my eyes?

RockSauron
01-13-2009, 01:13 AM
Okay, I wasn't even talking about that, but now that you mention it:

I don't have red eyes. I don't get them when I'm angry either. Klunk has red eyes, not me.

Now that we've got that settled: What color are my eyes?

They are blue normally, it's just that in THIS story, they turn red when you enter your Super Spam mode, ok?!

ClankXIII
01-13-2009, 01:15 AM
They are blue normally, it's just that in THIS story, they turn red when you enter your Super Spam mode, ok?!

How difficult is it to look at my avatar and identify the color? (rhetorical)

What color are my eyes?

RockSauron
01-13-2009, 01:18 AM
How difficult is it to look at my avatar and identify the color? (rhetorical)

What color are my eyes?

greenish?

but that is unimportant, and is not the critisism I need =_=. Besides, you're not Clank from R&C, you're Clank from LBPC >_<.

Sage
01-13-2009, 03:04 AM
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/71/Order_of_the_Arrow_Member.svg/40px-Order_of_the_Arrow_Member.svg.png

You passed go! Collect $200.

Great one again Rock keep 'em coming!

UmJammerSully
01-13-2009, 04:42 AM
*A lone tear rolls down the cheek of Chaz'OSkulls*

Bravo, not quite as funnay as chapter 2 but still nice. I love how they're short and sweet and not dragged on forever.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-13-2009, 05:01 AM
Rofl! These are awesome, off to the banned world he goes... To see his cousin. Man I can't wait till Chapter 4.

Creative
01-13-2009, 10:17 AM
Haha, great stories RockSauron! Keep 'em coming! :)

RockSauron
01-13-2009, 02:34 PM
love google docs- can write wherever, even at school. as such, chapter 4 is up, wrote completely at school, so... read!

wexfordian
01-13-2009, 02:41 PM
love google docs- can write wherever, even at school. as such, chapter 4 is up, wrote completely at school, so... read!


TUT TUT! You should be doing your schoolwork in school! :)

RockSauron
01-13-2009, 07:32 PM
TUT TUT! You should be doing your schoolwork in school! :)

not like I had anything else to do in that class

and I added it that early so that I could have some feedback by the time I get home... guess not.

moleynator
01-13-2009, 08:12 PM
I knew the 'official' story about doriens silencing was made up...

Its getting very interesting now.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-13-2009, 09:19 PM
Man, these stories are coming out fast, and they all look like time was put into them. It's like magic how you can do it so fast...


Awesome 4th Chapter, I wonder when CC will see this and laugh. Lol

moleynator
01-13-2009, 10:45 PM
Its not serious Clank. I wouldnt mind if RS announced that I was controlling you all along and that I was the real spambot. :D

Just do this then Rock, but better.

RockSauron
01-14-2009, 12:59 AM
meh, I'll continue this anyway. it was fun, it's just that he says he hates it, the only reason that he's made fun of alot- the reason for that being that he's such a prominent user and such and thus has a history and such, plus... yeah :/. But there were other people who are being made fun of (CC's made into some evil twisted warlord of ultimate evil o_0), so, um, yeah :/.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-14-2009, 01:00 AM
meh, I'll continue this anyway. it was fun, it's just that he says he hates it, the only reason that he's made fun of alot- the reason for that being that he's such a prominent user and such and thus has a history and such, plus... yeah :/. But there were other people who are being made fun of (CC's made into some evil twisted warlord of ultimate evil o_0), so, um, yeah :/.

Well yeah, I guess he just got tired of being called a Spam Bot, which is understandable... Just continue I guess...

You're really good at making stories btw... It took you like what? 2 days to make 5 Chapters?

Code1337
01-14-2009, 01:07 AM
I loved it Rock, keep this up. I'm sorry you had to deal with that.

RockSauron
01-14-2009, 01:10 AM
Well yeah, I guess he just got tired of being called a Spam Bot, which is understandable... Just continue I guess...

You're really good at making stories btw... It took you like what? 2 days to make 5 Chapters?

Well, I'm going for one chapter a day hopefully so that's four for the last 4 days, but...

See, I kinda just sit down and type. After an hour or so, I finally finish, and publish it. And people say it's awesome. No editting or anything :/.

That's pretty much it, really. I write down, and don't edit it, but for some reason everyone says I'm eally good >_<. Although I didn't exactly maker the basic premise up, I give the credit for that to muttjones (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showpost.php?p=61707&postcount=22= original credit :/). But I made up pretty much all characters and stuff not in that psot, so, uh,...

... Yep.

UmJammerSully
01-14-2009, 01:13 AM
Freaking awesome. I just got infracted. So, now that your mission of getting me infracted has been achieved, now will you fix my screwed up character?

You're just digging the grave deeper, Clank. Let it go. You were obviously infracted for a reason.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-14-2009, 01:14 AM
Woah... Seriously? You just sit there and type? You don't even edit the grammar mistakes and stuff?


That's amazing... I frankly, suck at writing stories... I'm imaginative, I just can't put it into a story... My story would pretty much be along these lines.


"And Killer, LBG, and Jack went to fight the two guards, they killed them. But somehow LBG died, no one knows why, and I'm too tired and suck at telling stories to tell you how."


Yup, that's my story.

RockSauron
01-14-2009, 01:19 AM
Yes, Clank. In case you haven't noticed, I'm kinda making fun of everyone here. Like, Dorien and DrunkMiffy are just deadbeat drunks who can't do anything. Code, for some reason, is a pure evil creature who lives to torture. LittleBigMe was just some fairy guy who is eventually squashed by LBG, who dies BTW. HamSalad is just there to be eaten. And, though it's not in the story yet, Whaaaaale, despite being one of our best users and so forth or something, is going to be a random generic whale that attacks a ship.

I make fun of everyone, hence the point. It's merely that you're so prominent that there's enough to make you a major character :/.

EDIT: Oh, and Whaaale, yep, don't fix grammer or nothin.

I must say that writing is quite free- absolutely no restrictions as in other creative medium. So, for instance, while creating a giant three headed dragon in a movie would cost millions, in a book, "A Giant 3 Headed Dragon approached!"

There really is no limit to what you can write- except paper, which is cheap, and not a problem to a digital form like this- though server space may prove a problem, but I'm trusting Google Docs to be large enough for this >_<.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-14-2009, 01:20 AM
yes, clank. In case you haven't noticed, i'm kinda making fun of everyone here. Like, dorien and drunkmiffy are just deadbeat drunks who can't do anything. Code, for some reason, is a pure evil creature who lives to torture. Littlebigme was just some fairy guy who is eventually squashed by lbg, who dies btw. Hamsalad is just there to be eaten. and, though it's not in the story yet, whaaaaale, despite being one of our best users and so forth or something, is going to be a random generic whale that attacks a ship.

i make fun of everyone, hence the point. It's merely that you're so prominent that there's enough to make you a major character :/.

Omg no spoilerz omg nooooooooo!

ClankXIII
01-14-2009, 01:22 AM
Did you read my original post about my character? I don't like the fact that I'm not treated as an actualy person. I'd rather be taken out of the story right now. In fact, just change all of the "Clank"s to "A blender" or something. I don't like it, and yet it continues to go on.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-14-2009, 01:31 AM
Yes, Clank. In case you haven't noticed, I'm kinda making fun of everyone here. Like, Dorien and DrunkMiffy are just deadbeat drunks who can't do anything. Code, for some reason, is a pure evil creature who lives to torture. LittleBigMe was just some fairy guy who is eventually squashed by LBG, who dies BTW. HamSalad is just there to be eaten. And, though it's not in the story yet, Whaaaaale, despite being one of our best users and so forth or something, is going to be a random generic whale that attacks a ship.

I make fun of everyone, hence the point. It's merely that you're so prominent that there's enough to make you a major character :/.

EDIT: Oh, and Whaaale, yep, don't fix grammer or nothin.

I must say that writing is quite free- absolutely no restrictions as in other creative medium. So, for instance, while creating a giant three headed dragon in a movie would cost millions, in a book, "A Giant 3 Headed Dragon approached!"

There really is no limit to what you can write- except paper, which is cheap, and not a problem to a digital form like this- though server space may prove a problem, but I'm trusting Google Docs to be large enough for this >_<.


I'm pretty sure you'll be able to fit a few Chapters into Google Docs, if space becomes a problem just start emailing them to everyone.

Lolz, I joke.

Sonic5411
01-14-2009, 01:43 AM
btw i give you complete creative freedom for my character:)

( but i know youll make me an awsome blue hedgehog that saves everyone ):p

ConfusedCartman
01-14-2009, 01:46 AM
I think it's hysterical that I'm an evil overlord with minions. I was literally laughing out loud reading Chapter 2.

Mark D. Stroyer
01-14-2009, 04:10 AM
This...is very, very good. You're very prolific, Sauron. This should shape up quite nicely, as long as it actually does actually continue to shape. That's always the hardest part: Making sure it keeps going.

Do you still have hanging around that character sheet of me and/or other people from back when the RPG was the idea in the works? Or did you clean it out?

RockSauron
01-14-2009, 11:58 AM
This...is very, very good. You're very prolific, Sauron. This should shape up quite nicely, as long as it actually does actually continue to shape. That's always the hardest part: Making sure it keeps going.

Do you still have hanging around that character sheet of me and/or other people from back when the RPG was the idea in the works? Or did you clean it out?

I erased my pms, but I still remember your role completely.

And yep, CC. Thanks for being such a good sport about being evil. Yep.

moleynator
01-14-2009, 07:41 PM
I... can...not... wait... for... the... next... part... and... I... dont... want... Rocksauron... to... double... post...

:)

Alex™
01-14-2009, 09:04 PM
Did you read my original post about my character? I don't like the fact that I'm not treated as an actualy person. I'd rather be taken out of the story right now. In fact, just change all of the "Clank"s to "A blender" or something. I don't like it, and yet it continues to go on.

If Clank doesnt like it, as he obviously doesnt, then just take him out. It will make him happy and preserve the peace. Until whaaaale attacks the ship or whatever... but yeah, if he doesnt want to be in it, then, i guess you should take him out, before the thread collapses :(

RockSauron
01-14-2009, 11:37 PM
uploaded with today's chapter.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-15-2009, 12:20 AM
Loved it, with only one small suggestion. It seems a bit blank at one part.


Where moley bites Quozl.


Quozl seemed to have no reaction, he just didn't care. It felt really blank and missing, I know you don't like to edit your stuff, I don't really care if you don't. But I'm just giving you a suggestion so you don't do it again.

I believe something like this would fit in if you add it...

Quozl looked at moley and said "I'll deal with you later, pet..."


"Anyways, blah blah blah blah blah die Jack blah blah blah"

The last quote can and probably should be ignored, but yeah... Just a suggestion. xD

I love this story dude, I don't know why, it all seems to fit together. Everyone has an epic part in the story, it's really cool how you're fitting everyone together. Good job!

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 12:30 AM
Loved it, with only one small suggestion. It seems a bit blank at one part.


Where moley bites Quozl.


Quozl seemed to have no reaction, he just didn't care. It felt really blank and missing, I know you don't like to edit your stuff, I don't really care if you don't. But I'm just giving you a suggestion so you don't do it again.

I believe something like this would fit in if you add it...

Quozl looked at moley and said "I'll deal with you later, pet..."


"Anyways, blah blah blah blah blah die Jack blah blah blah"

The last quote can and probably should be ignored, but yeah... Just a suggestion. xD

I love this story dude, I don't know why, it all seems to fit together. Everyone has an epic part in the story, it's really cool how you're fitting everyone together. Good job!

That would be a good idea... Yep, probably should... Heheheh... Though I kinda thought that, when you said feedback, it would be more then Quozl being an emotionally void character... which he kind is, since he's the only mod who had no input on his character, which is why he's first :/.

Anywho... I love putting everyone together like this! Though I am working through it as I go along... there were a few roles I was sure of, like the mods and such (if any news mods are added during the course of the story, I'll simpally add them as new mods- though it'd be kinda be weird if they're already dead/ members of the resistance).

But most of the story I'm working out as I go. For instance, I had no idea what Vhalt was going to be, nor that he was going to be a major character (surely you guys managed to figure that out by his scene, so it's not spoilers...?).

Anywho... GAH! Didn't do that joke about me again >_<. Next chapter, next chapter...

Code1337
01-15-2009, 12:39 AM
Another great chapter Rock. ;)

(if any news mods are added during the course of the story, I'll simpally add them as new mods- though it'd be kinda be weird if they're already dead/ members of the resistance).

For that, you can always pull the Darth Vader card.

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 01:05 AM
LOL keep it up xD

Great stuff..!

UmJammerSully
01-15-2009, 01:15 AM
Really enjoyable as always, I love how you picked up on the "Cheers, Quozl!" thing. I laughed hard at that.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but Killer is sort of...You? Right? Just the fact that he came from the deadly abyss known as GameFAQS and some other things lead me to believe this.

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 01:16 AM
Really enjoyable as always, I love how you picked up on the "Cheers, Quozl!" thing. I laughed hard at that.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but Killer is sort of...You? Right? Just the fact that he came from the deadly abyss known as GameFAQS and some other things lead me to believe this.

Nope, Killer isn't me. Killer is a random user I made up to not make any one person THE main character.

Though I'm curious, what else makes you think of Killer as me besides the Gamefaqs thing?

Sonic5411
01-15-2009, 01:17 AM
Still not in the story yet. >_>

This better not be like the end of the Subspace Emissary in Super Smash Bros. Brawl where I show up at the end with about 20 seconds of screen time (even though I did whoop Taboo's butt and save the day XD).

Crap double posted by accident

Sage
01-15-2009, 01:42 AM
Still not in the story yet. >_>

This better not be like the end of the Subspace Emissary in Super Smash Bros. Brawl where I show up at the end with about 20 seconds of screen time (even though I did whoop Taboo's butt and save the day XD).

Crap double posted by accident

Even better. It's the one where you don't come in at all. :)

But seriously, he probably won't put you in because of how not so well known you are.

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 01:45 AM
i'm the only member with 3000+ posts who's not been put in xD i don't mind keep it up rocky there GREAT

Sonic5411
01-15-2009, 01:45 AM
******

*goes and starts posting like crazy*

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 01:48 AM
******

*goes and starts posting like crazy*

I'll add you in, somewhere...

I mean, I added in three random guys in the first chaptr who probably won't return, so yeah :/

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 01:49 AM
let's keep this on topic xD sonic otherwise i will start and then stix will come and before we know it the thread will be at page 20...

EDIT: good save rocky xD

Sonic5411
01-15-2009, 01:49 AM
Sweet now i can sleep

Sage
01-15-2009, 01:49 AM
It just keeps getting better and better! Keep it going Rock! :p

Code1337
01-15-2009, 01:57 AM
He'll put you in eventually though, Sage hasn't even been put in yet.

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 02:01 AM
He'll put you in eventually though, Sage hasn't even been put in yet.

Nor, has stix or creative ...

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 02:02 AM
Nor, has stix or creative ...

Creative was in last chapter =_=

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 02:04 AM
Creative was in last chapter =_=

i'm still reading it >.< lol i read the 3-4 chapters then but then my eyes started to hurt from the screen so i took a break xD

Stix489
01-15-2009, 02:05 AM
Rock doesn't think I'm worthy anymore.

Sage
01-15-2009, 02:06 AM
He'll put you in eventually though, Sage hasn't even been put in yet.

And surprisingly i'm okay with it. :) Just keep it cool!

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 02:07 AM
Rock doesn't think I'm worthy anymore.

Your too worthy my shiny golden buddy...

Stix489
01-15-2009, 02:07 AM
Your too worthy my shiny golden buddy...

HE doesn't think so D:

Thanks Hero xD

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 02:11 AM
HE doesn't think so D:

Thanks Hero xD

We got to wait our turn lol xD

Code1337
01-15-2009, 02:31 AM
HE doesn't think so D:

Thanks Hero xD


We got to wait our turn lol xD

I bet you two will come in when the Resistance has to conquer the spam can. That's also probably when I will be banned/die.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-15-2009, 02:43 AM
I bet you two will come in when the Resistance has to conquer the spam can. That's also probably when I will be banned/die.

Lulz... I found that funny.

LittleBigMe
01-15-2009, 02:45 AM
Sweet story but.. Am I in it :[?

Thee-Flash
01-15-2009, 02:47 AM
Sweet story but.. Am I in it :[?

Your all over it.......

Code1337
01-15-2009, 02:50 AM
Sweet story but.. Am I in it :[?
You die in the first/second chapter. XD

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 11:59 AM
Yes, LittleBigMe. You are killed in the third chapter =D.

You're squished.

And Flash, because of your overwelming greed in being put in, I shan't include you in the next few chapters and instead only randomally include you- randomally =D. Oh, you too Stix, though you weren't going to be in yet anyway :/.

Creative
01-15-2009, 02:20 PM
Haha, awesome! kmills and I will fight teh POWA! :D

moleynator
01-15-2009, 05:33 PM
OMG! Im so sorry Quozl!!!

I dont wanna hurtz anybodyz... :cry:

:p

DrunkMiffy
01-15-2009, 05:45 PM
I seem pathetic compared to the other mods xD

They all have cool sneaky voices..



AND WTF DORIEN DEAD?

Revenge plz?

UmJammerSully
01-15-2009, 06:34 PM
When can we expect Chaz'OSkulls Chapter 6?

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 07:22 PM
If all goes well, you should hope to recieve Chapter 6 sometime today, if my 1-chapter-a-day plan goes well...

And yes DrunkMiffy, you are the pathetic drunken mod- though supersickie hasn't been introduced yet, so he may just be sick or something :/.

DrunkMiffy
01-15-2009, 07:42 PM
Guhhrreeeaaaaaaattt xD

Least I has my booze.. And invincibility.. Right?

RockSauron
01-15-2009, 11:33 PM
late and short chapter, but enjoy.

Stix489
01-15-2009, 11:35 PM
Yes, LittleBigMe. You are killed in the third chapter =D.

You're squished.

And Flash, because of your overwelming greed in being put in, I shan't include you in the next few chapters and instead only randomally include you- randomally =D. Oh, you too Stix, though you weren't going to be in yet anyway :/.

Whatever :rolleyes:

:rolleyes:

Code1337
01-15-2009, 11:40 PM
This chapter was more heartfelt than other chapters have been, but it's a good transition. Now we can finally get the Quozl fight.

Lol @ Rabid Coot as a bird. >_<

Mark D. Stroyer
01-16-2009, 12:05 AM
"...But now, for a word from our sponsors!"

Sage
01-16-2009, 12:19 AM
This last one was pretty short...

But still awesome! :p How long is this story?

RockSauron
01-16-2009, 12:54 AM
This last one was pretty short...

But still awesome! :p How long is this story?

I'm just goin with the flow, babe.

... translate that to: "I have no idea, it'll be as many chapters as it takes".

I'm just writing it one chapter at a time, really :/. Though I do already know what the finale is... I even have the last line in my head XD.

Tomo009
01-16-2009, 01:24 AM
I'm just goin with the flow, babe.

... translate that to: "I have no idea, it'll be as many chapters as it takes".

I'm just writing it one chapter at a time, really :/. Though I do already know what the finale is... I even have the last line in my head XD.


I hope it's not "and then he woke up and realised it was all a dream" >.<

RAINFIRE
01-16-2009, 11:39 PM
I hope it's not "and then he woke up and realised it was all a dream" >.<

AHAHAHAHA. That made my day, i do not think it will be that... it better not be that... Please Rock i am begging you, DO NOT USE A TYPICAL AND IDIOTIC LINE LIKE THAT, no really, it would be a shame to end a great piece with a dum line like that.

Oh and are you skipping the one for today, or are you posting it right now... what's the deal?

Cheers!

RockSauron
01-16-2009, 11:46 PM
Gee, SORRY it took so long >_<. It's a long chapter, plus I had to keep checking on the forums every five seconds >_<.

Anyway, important chapter here, don't miss it. Tell me what you think- oh, and also tell me how you like the humor :/.

Sage
01-17-2009, 12:08 AM
Dun Dun Dunnnnnnn

Story Spoiler!
RockSauron the evil overlord?!?!? Never would have guessed :rolleyes:

RockSauron
01-17-2009, 12:09 AM
Dun Dun Dunnnnnnn

RockSauron the evil overlord?!?!? Never would have guessed :rolleyes:

I had to throw me in there somewhere :/. So, I thought, why not as ME, as the guy I am- forcing you all to do such stupid things :/.

moleynator
01-17-2009, 12:10 AM
Yay! Im a heroic fighter!

You could use the fact that moles are blind (Or partially sighted to explain how I have been seeing) in the next chapter.

Sage
01-17-2009, 12:13 AM
The Master Sword shall rip through all evil! :D Or not... >_<

moleynator
01-17-2009, 12:15 AM
I loved the humor by the way. The ways that you incorporate people are fantastic.

RAINFIRE
01-17-2009, 12:27 AM
The humor was fantastic my friend keep up the good work.

Cheers!

dorien
01-17-2009, 12:40 AM
I'm loving the ramblings of Mr. Sauron :)


The story is coming along nicely my friend.

Just keep doing what your doing and it will be fine:D

Thee-Flash
01-17-2009, 01:08 AM
"...But now, for a word from our sponsors!"

and HE says he never spams....

Mark D. Stroyer
01-17-2009, 03:15 AM
That was a comment concerning the Chapter six. Because of the way it ended, the "Find out what happens next, on LBPC story!" style, it seemed appropriate to put some random ads in. I was hoping someone else would pick it up.

No, it wasn't spam. It was more loaded than it appeared.

RAINFIRE
01-17-2009, 03:46 AM
*sigh* MDS, you and your big words, hidden meanings, and highly noble proper speak. :p, but hey we love you for it. :p

Cheers!

Don Vhalt
01-17-2009, 10:34 AM
lol at the peanuts bit it was funny xd

Creative
01-17-2009, 03:09 PM
Oh wow xD You're a very talented write RockSauron... I was laughing my head off at the last two chapters :p Keep 'em coming!

Don Vhalt
01-17-2009, 03:23 PM
we want more more more! seriously i can't wait for the next chapter

Code1337
01-17-2009, 09:05 PM
I wonder how Stix will feel about this latest chapter. I know I liked it.

Did you get the idea of Stix chocking Quozl with his chains from Star Wars?

RAINFIRE
01-17-2009, 09:18 PM
I honestly do not know where Stix's chains came from, anyone want to point out the thread?

Cheers!

RockSauron
01-17-2009, 09:46 PM
I wonder how Stix will feel about this latest chapter. I know I liked it.

Did you get the idea of Stix chocking Quozl with his chains from Star Wars?

No, I got it from...


I honestly do not know where Stix's chains came from, anyone want to point out the thread?

Cheers!

code said something about him thinking stix is quozl's slave somehow :/. So I added him in as Quozl's slave, and... ok, I gave him chains because I'd think it'd be funny >_<. No real reason.

Code1337
01-17-2009, 11:14 PM
Chapter 8 is up! I'm going to read it... now.

DrunkMiffy
01-17-2009, 11:45 PM
Story ending is near guys, cause I cant die!

Don Vhalt
01-18-2009, 12:13 AM
i'm the second most feared user cool
the resistance may defeat CC but they'll never beat me ( hopefully) and

moleynator
01-18-2009, 12:31 AM
Was I sleeping? :p

I liked the last part.

RockSauron
01-18-2009, 12:53 AM
Nah, Moley- you were just not at that meeting :/.

OK, now then, let's start a discussion...

... Who's your favorite character in my story so far? =D

Favorite joke as well?

moleynator
01-18-2009, 12:57 AM
Me! :p

Nah, I like all characters and jokes. Its the way they interact with eachother.

Code1337
01-18-2009, 01:03 AM
I'd have to say QuozL. Not counting myself, of course.

moleynator
01-18-2009, 01:05 AM
I'd have to say QuozL. Not counting myself, of course.

QuozL is dead. No more banning. Unless...

Two accounts! Illegal!

RockSauron
01-18-2009, 01:06 AM
GAH! I forgot to say Quozl's ultimate fate...

... being stuck in a state of purgatory, where he is forced to exist in a closed room with Stuff (aka spam) and listen to the worst spam for EVER!

moleynator
01-18-2009, 01:08 AM
Noooo! That would have been great. He could of escaped...

BloodFlameX
01-18-2009, 01:15 AM
The Index:

Chapter 1: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_0d44wk2g6
Chapter 2: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_1kmhgr5gc&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 3: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_2gw29d23p&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 4: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_3c88wjsdg
Chapter 5: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_4g26nxjhb
Chapter 6: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_5cs2qp5fj&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 7: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_6hpdrwbs6&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 8: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds3929t_7dd7txxkr&pageview=1&hgd=1&hl=en


I have read this whole story and I must say, It is epic! If only I was in it, It would be the best story evar! :p

Code1337
01-18-2009, 01:16 AM
GAH! I forgot to say Quozl's ultimate fate...

... being stuck in a state of purgatory, where he is forced to exist in a closed room with Stuff (aka spam) and listen to the worst spam for EVER!
Just add it in during the epilogue.

RockSauron
01-18-2009, 01:16 AM
Just add it in during the epilogue.

Hm... maybe...

Anyway, BloodFlame... I have a SPECIAL role for you... muhahahahahahahahahahaha...

BloodFlameX
01-18-2009, 01:18 AM
Hm... maybe...

Anyway, BloodFlame... I have a SPECIAL role for you... muhahahahahahahahahahaha...


Your gonna end up killing me, huh? >_>

RAINFIRE
01-18-2009, 02:05 AM
hehehehe, sooner or later you will be killed, because he already has the epic finaly worked out and who is in it. so we will all most likely be killed somehow, Oh and i think Quozles fate is Hillarious, although i would suggest looking at a shotgun disarm and like crazy movie disarms and make that part a lot cooler.

Cheers!

Lil-Pingin
01-18-2009, 04:44 AM
Originally Posted by RockSauron View Post
The Index:

Chapter 1: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_0d44wk2g6
Chapter 2: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds...=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 3: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds...=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 4: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_3c88wjsdg
Chapter 5: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=ds3929t_4g26nxjhb
Chapter 6: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds...=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 7: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds...=1&hgd=1&hl=en
Chapter 8: http://docs.google.com/View?docid=ds...=1&hgd=1&hl=en

wow.....i read the whole story and was pretty impressed cant wait for more to be added so i can read it as well, curious to see who all will be added to the next chapters of your story and how they will get destroyed as well....nice job keep up the good work....;)

Don Vhalt
01-18-2009, 09:43 AM
Nah, Moley- you were just not at that meeting :/.

OK, now then, let's start a discussion...

... Who's your favorite character in my story so far? =D

Favorite joke as well?

my favourite characters are CC, Reshin, Dorien and me.
favourite joke is too hard to decide there all brilliant.:)

UmJammerSully
01-18-2009, 09:56 AM
favourite joke is too hard to decide there all brilliant.:)

"That was a stroke of good luck"

Easily the best.

Stix489
01-18-2009, 10:10 AM
"That was a stroke of good luck"

Easily the best.

I got hit in the head over that. :(

Reshin
01-18-2009, 08:36 PM
Jack walked straight up to Killer25, and grabbed his hand. "Welcome to the forums. Enjoy your stay."


Nostalgia FTW

RockSauron
01-18-2009, 08:52 PM
Jack walked straight up to Killer25, and grabbed his hand. "Welcome to the forums. Enjoy your stay."


Nostalgia FTW

Glad to see you liked that throwback. Though did you like the story altogether?

Anyway, today's chapter is up :/. READ, guys! =D.

moleynator
01-18-2009, 08:57 PM
Great chapter Rocky. Ryryans part was too long though.

DrunkMiffy
01-18-2009, 08:58 PM
I love Code <3

Code1337
01-18-2009, 08:58 PM
"i like pie! Spam spam! Rate me on a scale of one to ten! Spam spam spam spam rep me spam spam rep rep spam spam hi i'm cool spam spam spam!"

I started crying because of this.

I love Code <3
Welcome to my signature.

Don Vhalt
01-18-2009, 09:12 PM
"i like pie! Spam spam! Rate me on a scale of one to ten! Spam spam spam spam rep me spam spam rep rep spam spam hi i'm cool spam spam spam!"

I started crying because of this.

Welcome to my signature.

this and ryryryan's bit were so funny i was LOLing so hard this story is getting better and better:)

ryryryan
01-18-2009, 09:15 PM
Oh man, i literally laughed out loud... which i rarely do on the internet. +REP'd for the giggles. I also noticed it's now put you to two green blobs. Congrats!

Reshin
01-18-2009, 09:28 PM
Glad to see you liked that throwback. Though did you like the story altogether?

Anyway, today's chapter is up :/. READ, guys! =D.

Like it? I LOVE it, a fine good work.

Lil-Pingin
01-18-2009, 09:35 PM
wow....what can i say i loved it cant wait for the next chapter to come out, it just keeps getting better and better...;)

RAINFIRE
01-18-2009, 10:10 PM
OMG Clank, Miffy, Ryryryan, and Code HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH i was laughing sooooooo hard. i am still laughing as i am writing this, man this was a funny as hell chapter, it was.

Cheers!

Sage
01-18-2009, 10:31 PM
Chapter 9 was hilarious! Keep it up! I love it. :p

moleynator
01-18-2009, 10:33 PM
Clank is gonna be really annoyed at everyone when he comes back...

:p

Code1337
01-19-2009, 01:49 AM
Looks like you have to make Elbee into a villain now.

RAINFIRE
01-19-2009, 02:12 AM
Clank is gonna be really annoyed at everyone when he comes back...

:p

Oh yeah, I am going to laugh SOO hard when i see his reaction when he gets back, oh it will be priceless. But Clank i am sorry it has to be this way buddy, but hey atleast you are one of the best rolls, the comic relief (one of the best, comic relief ftw)


Looks like you have to make Elbee into a villain now.

Yep, i think that is decided due to misoir's new modship, Good luck with that one Elbee. Oh and Code i laughed the first time i saw your new avatar (lolz) :p

Cheers!

BloodFlameX
01-19-2009, 03:49 AM
"Maybe it's because RockSauron is typing this?"

Epic line XD PEANUT!

RockSauron
01-19-2009, 03:09 PM
Today's chapter is up :/

... Meyep.

Lil-Pingin
01-19-2009, 03:36 PM
the 10th chapter was really good keep up the good imaginative skills and keep the chapters coming i know look forward to reading them to see what happens to who next and who is going to appear next....great job....:D

moleynator
01-19-2009, 05:25 PM
Nice, getting elbee in that fast. You need EvilTikiGod as a temp though.

Good chapter.

Code1337
01-19-2009, 05:31 PM
"Soon they came up to a map, which had a very nice view of the entire fortress. They figured that Clank was being tested on in the Robotics Lab, and so went there first of all."

>_<

Creative
01-19-2009, 05:33 PM
I dungeddit Code.

RAINFIRE
01-20-2009, 01:48 AM
HAHAHA, Elbee... that part about you was Hillarious. Great work Rock Sauron on another fun chapter :p

Cheers!

UmJammerSully
01-20-2009, 09:45 PM
It seems Miffy's Fortress has suspiciously bad design for keeping out unwated guests. It's less of a fortress and more of a house slightly larger than average. ^_^

Nice one Rocky, I wait avidly for the upcoming chapters.

RockSauron
01-20-2009, 09:51 PM
You didn't have to wait long ;).

Chapter 11, UP!

... Must say it's kinda important, but meh :/.

Lil-Pingin
01-20-2009, 10:00 PM
well done on chapter 11, cant wait for 12 to be ready to read, hoping it will have more excitement to it, good job.......:D

Code1337
01-20-2009, 10:04 PM
I actually felt bad for Miffy. ;_;

Whalio Cappuccino
01-20-2009, 10:04 PM
Me too, the way he sobbed about dorien... :( Oh WELL! Bring on the next chapter my friend.

RockSauron
01-20-2009, 10:07 PM
I guess I feel bad for Miffy's pathetic portrayel in this and his pathetic death as well :(.

DrunkMiffy
01-20-2009, 10:18 PM
Yeah, I feel bad for Miffy too >.>

Maybe Miffy should clamp down massively on everyone on LBPC before this story ever happened, so everyone fears Miffy?

xD

moleynator
01-20-2009, 10:45 PM
Am I stolen? Darn that scientifically modified clank!

Whalio Cappuccino
01-20-2009, 10:46 PM
Am I stolen? Darn that scientifically modified clank!

Ugh.... Spoiler? :eek:

moleynator
01-20-2009, 10:51 PM
Ugh.... Spoiler? :eek:

Thats nothing compared to what everyone else was posting...

I'll edit it now anyway.

RAINFIRE
01-20-2009, 11:51 PM
Yeah i am sorry to say that i felt bad for Miffy too the way he was horrifically saddened by Dorians loss. I suggest counciling :p (JK)

Exciting end to the chapter though and i can not wait for Chapter 12

Cheers!

UmJammerSully
01-21-2009, 12:21 AM
The very quick HamSalad reference made me chortle. They're eating other users! OMG.

RAINFIRE
01-21-2009, 04:51 AM
wait so are the main characters good or not, THEY ATE HAMSALAD, (lolz).

Cheers!

P.S. Coming up on my 1000th post of grandness and awesomeness.

Cheers!

Alex™
01-21-2009, 05:57 AM
rofl, that was awesome. but where is the new one!i i want it now! ;)

Don Vhalt
01-21-2009, 02:29 PM
The very quick HamSalad reference made me chortle. They're eating other users! OMG.

yeah i lol'd at that

Yarbone
01-21-2009, 03:46 PM
Uhm i haven't actually read this yet, but... Am I in this story too?

Creative
01-21-2009, 03:47 PM
Nope ...

Yarbone
01-21-2009, 03:48 PM
Ok that was a short answer, lol xD

I'm gonna reed it :3

UmJammerSully
01-21-2009, 05:55 PM
Uhm i haven't actually read this yet, but... Am I in this story too?

I think Rocky is just writing it as he goes so maybe you will be in the future. It's quite possible that he doesn't even know.

Yarbone
01-21-2009, 05:59 PM
I think Rocky is just writing it as he goes so maybe you will be in the future. It's quite possible that he doesn't even know.

well, yeah... i've got 800 posts or something :(

RockSauron
01-22-2009, 12:16 AM
Today's chapter is up...

... Kinda... weird considering what just happened, but :/.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-22-2009, 12:21 AM
Oh wow... I kind of feel bad for Clank now... Like seriously...

RockSauron
01-22-2009, 12:23 AM
Oh wow... I kind of feel bad for Clank now... Like seriously...

I feel bad too... I was planning it since the RPG days, but I was wrong in my assumption that Clank was a good sport or something...?

Still, I had to include it anyway, since it was one of my favorite parts... But, uh... what did everyone think...? :(

Whalio Cappuccino
01-22-2009, 12:24 AM
I feel bad too... I was planning it since the RPG days, but I was wrong in my assumption that Clank was a good sport or something...?

Still, I had to include it anyway, since it was one of my favorite parts... But, uh... what did everyone think...? :(

It's opening up to be a really good story, filled with some heroic moments, and some sad ( Like today's chapter :( )

But yeah, it was good.

Reshin
01-22-2009, 12:29 AM
lol, Clank will be pisst off when he comes back.

back to feedbacks..

well, that made me shed a tear, so sad how he was unable to be saved, quite an emotional turn for a crack story....also since the home village is under attack...

please tell me you won't go the "wise old man dies fighting to let the others go free route", I mean come-on its been done from LOTR,to Starwars to Eragon....but if I'm going to die make it an epic one please.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-22-2009, 12:31 AM
My generic whale attack better be epic as well. Or I might cry. :p

RAINFIRE
01-22-2009, 01:55 AM
Well yeah today's story has been a sad one... :( but emmotional parts are pretty good in my opinion, because you need to balance out the story to make it even better. But i wonder who is attacking the town.

Cheers!

Sage
01-22-2009, 02:06 AM
Quite an emotional chapter there, but good! I liked it keep up the nice balance of serious and funny.

Boomy
01-22-2009, 07:39 AM
*Sniff* Poor clank :(



P.s: Put me in please :p

Creative
01-22-2009, 08:07 AM
That last chapter... it... it touched me :( Nice work RockSauron...

RockSauron
01-22-2009, 07:35 PM
So, uh... was everyone here upset for Clank and not Moley? o_0

Sorry Moley, you're not important enough for their symphathy- instead they feel sorry for the guy who kidnapped you and did unspeakable things to you :/.

moleynator
01-22-2009, 08:12 PM
So, uh... was everyone here upset for Clank and not Moley? o_0

Sorry Moley, you're not important enough for their symphathy- instead they feel sorry for the guy who kidnapped you and did unspeakable things to you :/.

Hes a robot. I forgive him. :p

Don Vhalt
01-22-2009, 08:44 PM
So, uh... was everyone here upset for Clank and not Moley? o_0

Sorry Moley, you're not important enough for their symphathy- instead they feel sorry for the guy who kidnapped you and did unspeakable things to you :/.

How clanks death happened was sad not the death so much

Hamsalad
01-22-2009, 09:07 PM
lol after a campfire meal of hamsalad!

RockSauron
01-22-2009, 11:18 PM
Today's chapter = up

Mark D. Stroyer
01-22-2009, 11:47 PM
Hahahaha... Very good chapter. And yes, aside from the fact that I featured prominently. Although it is nice to be the first mod/Boss who isn't a complete pushover. And actually has quite a wake of wanton destruction. Hence the name.

RockSauron
01-23-2009, 12:12 AM
Hahahaha... Very good chapter. And yes, aside from the fact that I featured prominently. Although it is nice to be the first mod/Boss who isn't a complete pushover. And actually has quite a wake of wanton destruction. Hence the name.

Meyess... Gracias.

Also, this topic has a new home!

Artwork and Creativity. :) Yep, I changed this forum into ALL art, not just visual, so... :/

Anyway... Yep, NEEDZ FEEDBACK to push me on!

Mark D. Stroyer
01-23-2009, 12:33 AM
Feedback (http://www.bhphotovideo.com/c/shop/1762/Feedback_Controllers.html). ...Oh, wait. Wrong thing.

Hamsalad
01-23-2009, 01:06 AM
I enjoy being the meal ahhaa, maybe give me a more uber role :P

Code1337
01-23-2009, 01:57 AM
Looks who's next fellas.

Sage
01-23-2009, 02:02 AM
*ear to ear grin* : D

Reshin
01-23-2009, 02:03 AM
Nice update, I was pretty sure I was going to die under the "wise old man always dies" rule, guess I'm safe until the next invasion...wait 4?....Clank, Stix, Creative...Kmill is banned, mole is kidnapped and Clank was destroyed....oh come on!!!!

Sage
01-23-2009, 02:09 AM
I'M SO EXCITED! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!:D:D:D I am happy.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-23-2009, 02:12 AM
Good chapter, you are so up to date with everything, *points to the part on Creative's name change*

Well done Rock.

Sage
01-23-2009, 02:13 AM
Good chapter, you are so up to date with everything, *points to the part on Creative's name change*

Well done Rock.

Aren't you excited!?!?! I AM!

Back on-topic... Great chapter! (Also great cliffhanger! ;))

Thee-Flash
01-23-2009, 02:17 AM
i thought i was one of the "three heros"

Code1337
01-23-2009, 03:12 AM
i thought i was one of the "three heros"
You'll probably be introduced as a hero later on. Just give him time.

RAINFIRE
01-23-2009, 04:45 AM
a green swordsman... hmmmm i wonder who that could be...

"And... cue Sage stage... a forget it just get him up here! He will be on a a couple of moments!... (manager comes up and whispers in his ear)... I do not care if his make-up and hair are not done yet! Finish him up NOW and get him up here!" (this is why he ends up having that giant caulick on the front of his head and why why his skin does not look very 3 dimmesional)

*winks to Sage*

Cheers!

RockSauron
01-23-2009, 11:09 PM
considering all that's happened today... not too sure if I feel comfortable writing one today...

So probably no chapter today :/.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-23-2009, 11:13 PM
considering all that's happened today... not too sure if I feel comfortable writing one today...

So probably no chapter today :/.

Probably a good idea, rest up and think of an awesome chapter. And btw, SilentPredator is back to Creative, so think of a snazzy way of bringing him back to his original, and you might want to make him sign a contract stating he can no longer change it... :p

Thee-Flash
01-23-2009, 11:14 PM
we understand mate

RockSauron
01-23-2009, 11:16 PM
Probably a good idea, rest up and think of an awesome chapter. And btw, SilentPredator is back to Creative, so think of a snazzy way of bringing him back to his original, and you might want to make him sign a contract stating he can no longer change it... :p

Well, I know he changed it, but he also said he's leaving or something so I'll just wait till tomorrow to see what's going on with him :/.

If he DID leave somehow... I'll probably just kill him off or something :/.

(Yes, I think of stuff like that on the fly. Clank was supposed to die MUCH later on, but he was upset so I built up to him dieing earlier, then he as banned so it worked out :/).

But yeah, not in the mood tonight >_<.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-23-2009, 11:17 PM
Well, I know he changed it, but he also said he's leaving or something so I'll just wait till tomorrow to see what's going on with him :/.

If he DID leave somehow... I'll probably just kill him off or something :/.

(Yes, I think of stuff like that on the fly. Clank was supposed to die MUCH later on, but he was upset so I built up to him dieing earlier, then he as banned so it worked out :/).

But yeah, not in the mood tonight >_<.

Haha nice nice, dorien might leave too, oh wait he's already dead. :p

Thee-Flash
01-23-2009, 11:19 PM
atomic bomb hits lbpc and kills Creative, Dorien and others >.> lol

Hamsalad
01-23-2009, 11:24 PM
what dorien died...i really need to read those; i wasnt able to at home last night and cant really enjoy them at work D: i can just try to squeeze posts in.

im sure everyone understands you need some down time anyway but im sure you'r glad to see everyone excited for your awesome work! keep up the good job man.

RAINFIRE
01-24-2009, 01:10 AM
can not wait for today's (now tomorrow's) chapter.

Cheers!

Sonic5411
01-24-2009, 01:21 AM
i feel the presence of a blue hedgehog in the next chapter:p

RAINFIRE
01-24-2009, 05:39 AM
naaa, i think it is a green swordsman *winks at Sage*

Cheers!

Code1337
01-24-2009, 05:39 AM
So the green swordsman was mentioned right before my city... interesting... :3

Sage
01-24-2009, 02:48 PM
So the green swordsman was mentioned right before my city... interesting... :3

Quite... ...

RockSauron
01-24-2009, 07:40 PM
Chapter 14 is up

Code1337
01-24-2009, 07:51 PM
Very nice chapter... the Creative joke was hilarious.

Hamsalad
01-24-2009, 08:25 PM
very nice addition rock......you rock

ya that was pretty sad creative had to die D:

Whalio Cappuccino
01-24-2009, 08:32 PM
RockSauron is awesome, and awesomer than awesome and omg that chapter was so awesome and omg omg omg omg omg omg yeaahhhh I love how cool Sage was in that chapter, and I love how Creative dies... :( No not really...

Sage
01-24-2009, 09:54 PM
That was awesome! One of your best chapters yet! (And not just because I was in it. ;)) I love how I was such a Lone Wolf there (hence my new title)
But Creative will probably be hating on me now for ending his epic role in the story. >_<

Great Chapter! Hope i'm sighted again! :p

Whalio Cappuccino
01-24-2009, 10:03 PM
That was awesome! One of your best chapters yet! (And not just because I was in it. ;)) I love how I was such a Lone Wolf there (hence my new title)
But Creative will probably be hating on me now for ending his epic role in the story. >_<

Great Chapter! Hope i'm sighted again! :p

Pretty sure it'll happen, let's just hope you aren't sighted with a sword going through your stomach. :eek:

Sage
01-24-2009, 10:11 PM
Pretty sure it'll happen, let's just hope you aren't sighted with a sword going through your stomach. :eek:

Heh. I hope not... It would be cool if I was one of the helpers fighting CC! :p

qrtda235566
01-24-2009, 10:17 PM
lol, the Creative joke was awesome