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R1ch6r5
10-06-2012, 07:34 AM
Hi there,
I would like to introduce you to my first play "Underwater Race :)".
These are my first level created in the editor.
I like to Listen every advice and criticism.

Queue:
http://vita.lbp.me/v/8et06
Picture:
http://i46.tinypic.com/34j6fsz.jpg

PS: Please excuse my English

frosty_greenacre
10-06-2012, 01:41 PM
What there is, is a nice level. However it's a little short and a little under decorated.If you could extend it with some more individual puzzle pieces and decorate those and what you've already done, this could turn out to be a very nice level.

R1ch6r5
10-06-2012, 01:54 PM
Initially, the level should be much longer but I feel that race should be rather short. At the end I probably shortened too much.
I did not know what to use to decorate the underwater level. Grass under water is probably crap ...
I'll try to add anything else out there and more to decorate

Thanks for the advice :)

PS: excuse my english please... im use translator

WESFUN
10-07-2012, 08:17 AM
the level looks nice from the screen shots qued :)

frosty_greenacre
10-07-2012, 09:15 AM
Where are you from, R1ch6r5? :)

R1ch6r5
10-07-2012, 09:40 AM
I'm from Slovakia

frosty_greenacre
10-07-2012, 10:49 AM
Ahh cool :) Are there any good slovakian little big planet level-list websites I should know about?

R1ch6r5
10-07-2012, 11:05 AM
Unfortunately, none at all. Just a few "dead" blogs where still nothing.

frosty_greenacre
10-07-2012, 01:40 PM
Ahh :/ I can't wait for lots of new levels. I'm playing them faster than they are being made now :(