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11-10-2012, 11:18 PM
Hello everyone! i'm gonna show my latest level named "Noir"
LBP.ME link: http://vita.lbp.me/v/e507g

It's an short platforming level, the title Noir refers as the game goes on a Black-White fashion. I would love some feedback (i'm kinda of a noobie, so take it easy.) and here are some pics:

Level Description: Adventure through an eletrified old house and try to find an exit. Will you come out alive? Yet another short platformer level, hope you guys enjoy it!


Thanks <3

11-11-2012, 02:18 AM
I told you at the LBL but again, will play it

11-15-2012, 07:22 PM
Well your level shows no signs of any n00biness, lol! I really enjoyed playing it. It was nicely designed, made good use of all the layers and you created some interesting electrified obstacles. It was a little on the short side; I felt it was just getting into its stride when suddenly I was at the scoreboard!

The black and white style was very cool and gave the level a different feel but it created a couple of very minor problems. It may have been deliberate but there were a couple of places where I couldn't tell that there was a bouncepad set into the floor. The main example is at the start of the level where you pull a switch and it's not at all clear what has happened as a result. It was only by exploring that I realised that one of the tiles was a bouncepad that had now been activated. Its only a minor issue though and the gameplay was fun with a nice bit of challenge to it and I look forward to playing your next level. Great job! :)

11-15-2012, 07:48 PM
The Setting is cool and the atmosphere (which is somewhat linked with the setting^^) is great , too. Too bad it's pretty short but the gameplay was really fun!