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s3v3nt33n
11-11-2012, 03:29 AM
Alright guys my first every track in LBPK is finished!!! I worked so so so hard on this track, I really did I spent a total of 9 hour on this track possible more lol. I had to make all the props, it crazy compared to Modnation we were given props to work with, kudos to the creators who worked with the tilt glitch in Modnation.:)

I think the hardest part was coming up with a catchy name! This track is a nice quick track! I really hope you guys enjoy this track as much as I enjoyed making it, I swear it won't disappoint!! :)

https://karting.lbp.me/v/tm9

Chazprime
11-11-2012, 03:54 AM
You need to change your privacy settings so that other people can see your levels.

s3v3nt33n
11-11-2012, 04:28 AM
You need to change your privacy settings so that other people can see your levels.

Sorry about that it updated enjoy!!!

fireblitz95
11-11-2012, 07:06 AM
Thank you, queued and ready to play. :)

WESFUN
11-11-2012, 09:15 AM
qued it up and ready to play tomorrow :D

s3v3nt33n
11-11-2012, 02:03 PM
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Schark94
11-11-2012, 03:08 PM
The page says: "We're Sorry! The page you requested is no longer here"

I've been searching for this level, but can't find it anywhere. Anyone else having this problem?

s3v3nt33n
11-11-2012, 03:29 PM
https://karting.lbp.me/v/tm9

Hmm thats weird I wonder if it is like that for everyone else then, please let me no if this persist thanks!!

EDIT:


The page says: "We're Sorry! The page you requested is no longer here"

I've been searching for this level, but can't find it anywhere. Anyone else having this problem?
that should do i reposted the link!

Lady_Luck__777
11-11-2012, 03:32 PM
https://karting.lbp.me/v/tm9

Hmm thats weird I wonder if it is like that for everyone else then, please let me no if this persist thanks!!

The link in this post is not the same as in your first post.
This one shows for me. The first does not.
You might want to edit the first one with this link. :)

s3v3nt33n
11-11-2012, 04:19 PM
The link in this post is not the same as in your first post.
This one shows for me. The first does not.
You might want to edit the first one with this link. :)

Done!! :)
Thanks for the advice! I hope you enjoy the level!

Schark94
11-11-2012, 04:30 PM
https://karting.lbp.me/v/tm9

Hmm thats weird I wonder if it is like that for everyone else then, please let me no if this persist thanks!!
Thanks man! The screenshots look great. Tomorow I'm getting LBPK, so I'm going to play your level when I get time. C:

Plokster
11-12-2012, 03:08 AM
Beautiful track! I love tracks with strong themes, and you definitely hit the tomb theme. Way to go!

VintageOctopus
11-13-2012, 02:12 AM
I thought this was a lovely track, but that stomper towards the end in the temple was extremely hard to avoid- In future tracks, I'd say put those in places that I won't be hitting every lap. Otherwise, a stellar track indeed.

s3v3nt33n
11-13-2012, 03:04 AM
Thank man, yeah some sackfolks said that part is a little difficult, Im going to update this track soon. I was messing around with the editor and I made the karts smaller, and it changed that area significantly!

rialrees
11-13-2012, 02:29 PM
Just wanted to leave a note to say I really enjoyed your track :)

The shift from day time to night time especially was a lovely "ooh" moment - the way it changed the scenery was really well done.

the track itself was pretty nifty too - loved the transition from outside to inside the tomb - I look forward to seeing more of your work!

s3v3nt33n
11-13-2012, 05:29 PM
Rialrees, thank you so much!! I think its awesome that you enjoyed the track, I truly did work hard on it! The funny thing is I watched more tutorials and figured out more thing that I wanted to do to the track lol XD

I Think I made a nice debut with my track, I just wished more people noticed it, but that comes with time and word of mouth haha
Again thanks I've been waiting for a game like this to be made! I swear I will not fail the community with my creations!

englishnick
11-13-2012, 07:41 PM
Really well made track. You can tell a lot of work went into the making of it. i didn't have any trouble with the stomper thingo like others... i just lost the track a couple of times... but thats just because i'm rubbish :)

s3v3nt33n
11-13-2012, 11:41 PM
Thank you much man ! Im glad your enjoying the track. I have a longer one in the works right now. working on more complex stuff. Im gonna keep it in the same theme as Aren't Tomb Many, I wanna finish that theme with a bang :)

Manlius10A
11-19-2012, 03:38 AM
I really liked this track. Short and very enjoyable! I loved the feel of the race, it felt right! Great job!!

s3v3nt33n
11-19-2012, 12:16 PM
Im really you guys are enjoying the track! The comments push me to make a better track for you guys :)

Schark94
11-20-2012, 06:23 AM
Congrats on the Team Pick s3v3n, great job. :D

I still didn't get the chance to play this, cause I don't have the game yet, but I think I'm gonna get it this week (I hope).

s3v3nt33n
11-20-2012, 12:06 PM
Yeah thanks, I wasnt expecting to get team picked!!! It was a huge shock lol. Your gonna love this game when you get, apparently its gonna be pretty cheap this friday!

Again you guys thanks it means a lot!

Meribald
11-20-2012, 01:11 PM
Congratulations on the pick. I played your level today and it was funny. The setting is different to other Levels and looks nice.

Arastoph
11-20-2012, 02:27 PM
congrats on the pick! i may just have to give this one a go! :) glad you enjoyed my level as well!

amazingflyingpoo
11-20-2012, 10:09 PM
Congratulations on the Team Pick! I had this level queue'd for a while but I just finally had the chance to give it a play.

This is currently my favorite level in LBPK. I really like the atmosphere, how it changed from day to night, the custom objects, the layout of the course... I guess I like everything. Fantastic job creating this race :) I look forward to your future stuff!

s3v3nt33n
11-21-2012, 12:22 AM
Congratulations on the Team Pick! I had this level queue'd for a while but I just finally had the chance to give it a play.

This is currently my favorite level in LBPK. I really like the atmosphere, how it changed from day to night, the custom objects, the layout of the course... I guess I like everything. Fantastic job creating this race :) I look forward to your future stuff!

Thank you for the kind words, Comments like these push me to make even more :) to be honest this level wasnt even finished, I only published so I could get a critique on the track because I was going crazy play testing by myself. then it slowly started to get plays and I didnt want to republish the track because those first 5 plays didnt come easy lol and it also discouraging because I felt nobody was even playing, because I worked really hard on it. and by the time it had 30 like and what not I was just going to leave it as it was because, but I did make a modified version of this track I had to shrink the carts so that players could have a easier time navigating the track! But I am extremely happy that it got this far!!

This is just a beginning for me and creating haha I am also doing my best to get around and play evryones track! and leaving comments because I really want this karting community to take off!

JustinArt
11-24-2012, 01:39 AM
Awesome level. The ruins themed design looks really awesome. The fireball obstacles adds more dangerous but exciting fun to this track. Nothing much to say, but awesome job and congrats on Team pick.
VISUALS: 5/5
SOUND: 5/5
GAMEPLAY: 5/5
OVERALL: A yay and heart

TheAdipose
11-24-2012, 05:37 AM
Enjoyed the visuals a lot. It was nice to see a few hard right angle turns and ramps that lifted the player up to show off the level. With the name 'tomb' I was expecting something underground but I see what you were going for with the Egyptian theme. I agree that the final flaming whomp thing is pretty hard to avoid - I was often in midair before I even saw it, but with 5 laps I could try and compensate by the last couple.