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Mdoodle22
11-13-2012, 09:54 PM
Race on a small-medium sized track with 40 second lap times for those of you who like shorter sized tracks, and now with jumping, grappling, cinematics, and more! All while racing on a fun track with swampy scenery! And play with your friends or against AI, thanks and please play it! Here's a link: https://karting.lbp.me/v/157b

fireblitz95
11-14-2012, 12:12 AM
Hey thanks for the link, got it queued up and ready to play.

WESFUN
11-14-2012, 01:43 AM
Thanks for putting the time and putting your link up qued :D

VintageOctopus
11-14-2012, 03:21 AM
I thought it was a lovely first level- I noticed you were tinkering around with the game camera and the grappling hooks. It definitely shows promise for future tracks from you, I can already tell you're getting a handle on the editor. As a track, though, it felt like it was still under construction. You kind of used the same few props all over the place and there weren't any weaponators and I don't think I remember any terraforming. The track was also kind of uninteresting other than the grappling hooks. A great starting place, but definitely be sure to add a lot more detail and some more factors to gameplay in the next track you make. Grappling hooks are great, jumps are good, maybe add some shortcuts/alternate paths, and maybe add some kind of dynamic objects that are dangerous to the player. I'm excited to see what you come up with next!

Chup
11-15-2012, 07:53 PM
I like the "setting" of the track, and it was fun to race! But it needs more weaponators and there could be a bit more variation in decorations and stuff, but on the whole you did a great job, i like your tracks :D