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cakito123
12-08-2012, 05:54 AM
Hello people!
Finally I published my level!
It's a series. I made only one level for now. Before I make the second level, I would like you guys play it and review it. :)

Here it is the synopsis:

''Two planets are going to compete in a Tournament. But this isn't a normal Tournament! What's going on?!''

I think you all will like it. If not, could you write a feedback?
Here it is the level link: http://vita.lbp.me/v/epbmt

Thanks :D

Rough-Tea
12-08-2012, 12:13 PM
Cool Level mate, i enjoyed playing it... some nice ideas in there.... its a bit hectic, cause u have to touch and jump and avoid things all the time haha ^^ but its still some nice platformer for sure....

Im just wondering if it really is possible to ace this lol? I played it with a friend and we were constantly dieing... at the end its gets very hectic.... but was fun. Im allways enjoying some good platformers... allthough im not the biggest fun of touching all time whilst playing lol... its kinda annyoing tbh... but yeah... still was fun some neat ideas...

The Intro was cool too.... i liked it, could u make it skipable? Or didnt u want to do that? ^^ (cause the first time loading your level my vita hung up and than when i loaded it the 2nd time i had to rewatch it... so it would have been cool to be able to skip it)

I just have to say, the icon seems unfortunately chosen... it looks like its some bad level, but it isnt... the Description and name is confusing too...

I will play the 2nd Chapter.. as i had fun playing this one.

Skalio-
12-08-2012, 04:43 PM
queuing now, will give feedback in a while

A really fun, and equally frustrating maze race!
I must have died hundreds of times, but i found the puzzles clever and fun aswell as tough. If the cheese had been any slower it would have been boring, any faster and it would have been impossible.

Nice work :)

cakito123
12-08-2012, 05:26 PM
OMGGGGGGG My first feedback XD XD Thanks!!!
Can I ask you a question?

What do you think of the history for now? You understood everything?
Don't forget to put the SPOILER advice.

Sorry for my bad english :)

EDIT:


Cool Level mate, i enjoyed playing it... some nice ideas in there.... its a bit hectic, cause u have to touch and jump and avoid things all the time haha ^^ but its still some nice platformer for sure....

Im just wondering if it really is possible to ace this lol? I played it with a friend and we were constantly dieing... at the end its gets very hectic.... but was fun. Im allways enjoying some good platformers... allthough im not the biggest fun of touching all time whilst playing lol... its kinda annyoing tbh... but yeah... still was fun some neat ideas...

The Intro was cool too.... i liked it, could u make it skipable? Or didnt u want to do that? ^^ (cause the first time loading your level my vita hung up and than when i loaded it the 2nd time i had to rewatch it... so it would have been cool to be able to skip it)

I just have to say, the icon seems unfortunately chosen... it looks like its some bad level, but it isnt... the Description and name is confusing too...

I will play the 2nd Chapter.. as i had fun playing this one.

=P
Thanks for your Feedback!!
Yeah. I'm terrible in writing synopsis...
I think I'll slow down the speed of the cheese... Everyone says it is hard!!
About the cutscene... In the second chapter I'll try to make the cutscenes skippable. In this one, I really want everyone to see it.

Rough-Tea
12-08-2012, 05:53 PM
Yeah, better slow it down a bit, it still will be hard, but not that hard.

U should search for some better Icon and maybe make Screenshots and upload them, so people know what to excpect.... cause i think more people should play that level...


What do you think of the history for now? You understood everything?
Don't forget to put the SPOILER advice.

hehe.. since i think the intro was well made, i think i remembered it, as follow:

The Leader of the Kiwi Planet got mad somehow, the Leader of the Orange Planet used that to have some Competition, but i dont know why lol, probably to steal resources, and the only non mad person left on kiwi is some brave science girl or something and tries to stop it all ^^ hehe something like that

cakito123
12-08-2012, 06:02 PM
Yeah, better slow it down a bit, it still will be hard, but not that hard.

U should search for some better Icon and maybe make Screenshots and upload them, so people know what to excpect.... cause i think more people should play that level...



hehe.. since i think the intro was well made, i think i remembered it, as follow:

The Leader of the Kiwi Planet got mad somehow, the Leader of the Orange Planet used that to have some Competition, but i dont know why lol, probably to steal resources, and the only non mad person left on kiwi is some brave science girl or something and tries to stop it all ^^ hehe something like that

Will be revealed in the next chapters ;)

Just one another thing... The girl (Kathryn) is just the most inteligent woman in the world, she isn't the only non mad person in the world. lol.

Skalio-
12-08-2012, 06:10 PM
Oh yeah , i also found the intro a little bit odd, the level didnt seem to have a lot to do with that story after the cut scene was finished?

I also wanna say i thought the bit where kathryn turned into my sackboy was really cool. so simple, but i really liked it and it tied the intro into the level a bit more.

Rough-Tea
12-08-2012, 06:26 PM
Hehe Skalio is kinda right... didnt get it either...

Cakito i can see your Spoiler hehe, u warned us to not spoiler things, but u do it yourself haha ^^

@Skalio: I found it kinda odd that my SackBOY talked like a girl than haha ^^ still funny tho

cakito123
12-08-2012, 06:58 PM
Hehe Skalio is kinda right... didnt get it either...

Cakito i can see your Spoiler hehe, u warned us to not spoiler things, but u do it yourself haha ^^

@Skalio: I found it kinda odd that my SackBOY talked like a girl than haha ^^ still funny tho

But... '-'
lol, sry, the Spoiler thing does not works!!

Yeah, I think I need to explain better next time... But for you two, the level was a digital area for testing!! Kathryn (your sackboy) is in the Aliens's spaceship yet.

xero
12-08-2012, 07:21 PM
Queued--I'll give it a try in the near future.

nysudyrgh
12-26-2012, 02:38 PM
COngrats on your spotlight, Cakito! This sounds like a hilarious level, Queue'd 'er up and will check it out soon! C: