My Level - The Defence Station

[briggsy]

Hi, i'm new here but not a complete beginner with forums, I've put F4F on the prefix so any feedback would be apprieciated and i'll give you feedback to, :)

Here's a youtube video of my level, only pictures though, :(
YouTube - The Defence Station - LBP

Thanks and by the way its not finished if your wondering why theres no ending, :p

[talmasca]

at risk of recieving a bad review from u, im gonna comment anyway

as i enter the level at the start i predict a good level, but when i exit its so dark i cant see anything!! even though there are lights everywhere i cant see where im going and i got stuck behind several walls and stuff...

the music playing at the start seems out of place, try a more actiony song

im not saying its bad, im sure this level could be awesome but its too dark to see how good it is

if u fix the lighting can u message me so i can try it again, cause im hoping its great and deserves a proper review :p

oh my level is

silent hill REBORN ( parts 1 and 2 )

if u wanna give it a go :*)

[briggsy]

thanks i'll give feedback its just i'm not on much so i'll fix it now, =]
i'll try your level aswell, =P

I think that your Silent Hill levels were brill!

[Zommy]

both of you this is so you dont get warnings dont double post delete the 2nd one and edit your first one E.G for briggsby both
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thanks i'll give feedback its just i'm not on much so i'll fix it now, =]
i'll try your level aswell, =P


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I think that your Silent Hill levels were brill!


should both be reformatted to be

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thanks i'll give feedback its just i'm not on much so i'll fix it now, =]
i'll try your level aswell, =P

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I think that your Silent Hill levels were brill!

same goes for you Talmasca.
i point this out so you dont get warnings, so please change ASAP

[Ozwald_the_cat]

Hey Briggsy,

I tried your level and it's really hard to review it since I couldn't see much of the level. The start was neat how the path lit up as you followed it, but when I fell into the big spinning wheel the first time there were a bunch of pretty lights but none showing me where to go, so when I went down further all I found was a sign saying you made the level and a then further down a circle set on fire and no further path.
If you are gonna leave people in the dark make sure their path is lit at all times, if not 90% will just leave your level and hate on it. There was probably a lot of stuff in your level I never got a chance to try since I didnt know how to get to it.

Hope this helps,

[briggsy]

Thats the level so after the spinning wheel the'll be another ship where you try to escape but then crash... and so on