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Protoraptor
12-29-2012, 07:27 PM
I made my first track on LBPK, it's called 'Hoard, Sweet Raceway'.

Hope you like it. :p


Also, space.

Rogar
12-29-2012, 08:08 PM
You might want to include a link to the level so people can queue it, like this: https://karting.lbp.me/v/572t

Protoraptor
12-29-2012, 09:11 PM
Thanks.
I shall remember that in future. :)

WESFUN
12-29-2012, 09:53 PM
qued the icon looks great love it :)

JudgeSpear
12-30-2012, 04:36 PM
Just finished playing it. First off, the lighting and atmosphere are just what you'd find in the actual Hoard world's only level. It feels like this level belongs in that world. It's a short but sweet race track.

The biggest glaring problem I can find in gameplay is the none of the weaponators give me anything. It is essentially a weaponless race. I am guessing you put in a specific weaponator in your level before you put in a random weaponator. This results in a well-known bug that permanently screws up your level's weapon distribution. Since you put in a specific weaponator before a random one, you've just erased the entire default weapon distribution, resulting in no weapons at all. You have no choice but to recreate the entire weapon distribution yourself.

When making jumps, be sure you have a decent amount of straightaway at the landing so that players won't drive into a wall or curve. This was one thing I got criticized on even in my team-picked levels, and now I make every effort to ensure that I do not make that oversight.

This level would benefit from a bit more eye candy and scenery. There is a lot of trash objects you can use to place around your level so players will see more than hills that are supposed to represent piles of trash.

Overall, this is a decent first level. With more tweaking and fixing the weapon distribution, this level can be a very fun one. Keep it up!

Protoraptor
12-30-2012, 09:04 PM
Thank you!

I shall look into that weaponator bug...

*shakes fist* Darn bugs!

fireblitz95
12-31-2012, 02:53 AM
Queued! Thanks Rogar for getting the link. :)