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Ben21
01-03-2013, 09:02 PM
Atlantis The Beginning

Hello everyone i will leave pictures out of the question for a more WOW factor of the level. I hope you enjoy this work as much as me and my friends have creating it.

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Level Description:
It is a sequel of Poseidon's Temple which is one of my long gone levels. But now will possibly be a sequel in a sense inside itself.
You play as an adventure that was banished to Atlantis due to a bad offering to Poseidon. You must find your way out of the collapsing eroded place. Much machinery and creatures work and walk the area. There are three secret tridents hidden in the level you must find for a better score. I am very inspired by Greek mythology and Greek things in general due to my family background. The ruins and their secrets lie in your hands can you listen and escape. Find out in my brand new level Atlantis The Platformer.
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Level Facts:
It took a little over a year to complete.
Sequel to a deleted level
Took about 4-5 friends who helped.
Inspired by Atlantis myths.

Level Link:
http://lbp.me/v/btns2v

Please go play i know you will love it,
Ben21
http://lbp.me/v/btns2v

biorogue
01-04-2013, 05:52 AM
sweet! got it queued.

yoghurt2000
01-04-2013, 10:56 AM
F4F, for Scorch the Cardboard: I think the level was okay, but it lacks details and some gameplay mechanics didn't play so well. It has potential to be a good level but needs some extra work. Thanks

Ben21
01-04-2013, 07:48 PM
which game-play mechanics did not work well? What details should be added? Keep in mind this is a sequel and the story-line is hinted in the descrip.

avundcv
01-05-2013, 01:06 AM
Its a very nice level with solid gameplay and nice visuals. The story is fine.
And it works with 3 players :D (you recommend one player)

Very enjoyable level! Good job! :)

Ben21
01-05-2013, 03:05 AM
Thanks so much avundcv and the reason it is 1 player recommended is due to when me and others play on it it generally causes lag and when that happens cheap deaths occur and things break. The main bug i have is the rock towards the end switching lanes if there is more than one player and without that rock you can't complete the level. But thank you for pushing the limits and letting me know it is ok.

LBPSneakPeeks
01-05-2013, 05:13 PM
#Promoted :)

Ben21
01-12-2013, 04:35 PM
Thanks i need all the publicity i can get its good people like you and the showcase crew exist.

EDIT:

Started on the series let me know if anyone wants to help me.

EDIT:

Hey i know this isnt an F4F forum and all but i do give feedback for feedback on this forum. Just let me know what level you want me to review and i will get on it as soon as possible.
Thanks everyone,
Ben21
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Lady_Luck__777
01-12-2013, 04:56 PM
Changed to F4F per OP request

TheOfficialKing
01-12-2013, 05:57 PM
Seems nice,I'll definetly give it a try.

Ben21
01-12-2013, 11:03 PM
would anyone mind devoting some time to help me build the next level in the series today or any day for that matter. Please let me know soon!
Preferably today or when im available.



Edit: By the way i have added a new and hopefully final update on the game and now am starting the sequel levels.

vusco
01-13-2013, 10:45 PM
the description sound fantastic in march played this level and write a review ok _:D I hope you play my level for the F4F

level: http://lbp.me/v/f93h4n

Ben21
01-14-2013, 03:40 AM
i will get to level asap school this week so probably this weekend. By march what do you mean you will write a review in march or what?
Your confused creator,
Ben21

vusco
01-14-2013, 02:10 PM
sorry my English is horrible, I'm Spanish, in March I will be able to play your level and write a comment about the level :).
I hope you understand now

Ben21
01-14-2013, 10:00 PM
I do thanks that is cool i kno a little Spanish. Neat easy language.

biorogue
01-17-2013, 02:07 AM
ok, playing the level as I type. I like the opening, it's pretty cool, though that "loading" thing last a little too long. Shorten it by 5 - 10 seconds would be my choice. The sackbot is electrocuted by the water. Mmm, I don't know. maybe have it go off screen and put a destroyer on it to disappear before the water reaches it? Would be cleaner. These little structures, the columns and such look pretty cool.
Hmm, this don't look right.

http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/30db98980b2d2c2f451aed7b4a6cb0e7005c62e7.jpg

are these supposed to be stone? Material change them to stone. Do you have the sticker cutter tool? It would clean up those lines around the sticker.
This part really bugged me, I don't know why. The water, is higher than the ground and you have to jump over the water to go by.
http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/01f4a33c940cfbfe8866021bf4a82da8f4922b65.jpg

just past this section, the floor turns to spikes. cool. I died. then I had to watch the sequence again. I died again after this by a lightning bolt and had to watch the floor sequence again. Maybe put a counter set to 1 so that it only shows this one time.
Well I made it through the rest of it without too much trouble. That checkpoint just before the rotating blocks in front of the water fall didn't trigger when walking past it and I died and had to go way, way back. Maybe a player sensor on it so that it triggers when in range. All in all, not too bad, a few adjustments here and there. Good work on it.

Ben21
01-26-2013, 03:57 AM
Bio i think you will be glad to know i have fixed all the things you pointed out. I have recently begun on Atlantis: Deeper Within and Poseidon still needs his royal subjects who get the special treatment in the Atlantis Levels i will accept 10 subjects let me know if you would like to become one and why you are worthy.

Lumina
01-28-2013, 12:19 PM
Hi there ^^

I've played your level as well - and I liked it pretty much (beautiful design / nice gameplay ideas).
But unfortunately we couldn't finish the level:

http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/f953dde99294b0e4e6629189ea5eb22626d4d198.jpg

It said "Quickly grab the vase" - but nothing happened...
Did we miss something - or is/was that a bug?

Thx, Lumina

Ben21
01-31-2013, 01:42 AM
it is a bug if you play with two people the stone does not roll by and tht is what causes the vase to fall i suggest playing again with 1player.

Luke
02-01-2013, 08:38 AM
Got it queued to give it a go tonight. I'm coming back with some feedback. ;)

Ben21
02-07-2013, 02:13 AM
Hmm never got feedback luke what happened and lumina did you play again with one player and did it work i need to know if i need to fix something.
I STILL NEED POSEIDON'S SUBJECTS THIS WILL PROVIDE GREAT ADVANTAGES IN MORE GAMES! let me know if you would like to become one there is currently 1 subject (ME)

choeb
02-11-2013, 10:44 PM
Looks interesting, queued it. :)

Lumina
02-14-2013, 03:58 PM
Hmm never got feedback luke what happened and lumina did you play again with one player and did it work i need to know if i need to fix something.
I STILL NEED POSEIDON'S SUBJECTS THIS WILL PROVIDE GREAT ADVANTAGES IN MORE GAMES! let me know if you would like to become one there is currently 1 subject (ME)

Sorry for the late answer (I couldn't find your level in the showcase area - where I thought it would be). ^^
And yes - I gave it another try - alone. And it worked. But it took quite some time for the stone to show up. I even went back to see, where it was. ^^

But to be honest - I didn't get a sense of being rewarded, for doing it all over again. ^^
Because nobody mentioned, that this was actually the ending. LOL
I thought the level would continue much further from there.

One more thing; The part where you have to grap those spinning "wheels" can lead to frustration. I recommend to increase the spinning speed of the first wheel, since it took me like forever to progress from there.

Ben21
02-15-2013, 02:24 AM
o but it does progress the level just overheated so i am working on the next one.