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Dentonik
01-19-2013, 12:52 PM
Hy guys! this is my first level on psvita!
It is a story level of a man with its dog.
Are you ready for the Tower?

http://littlesigplanet.com/vita/v/-d0m7/sites_lbpicks/mini/sig.png (http://vita.lbp.me/v/-d0m7)

I hope you will like it! :) COMMENT PLEASE!
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Wolfdre
01-19-2013, 01:07 PM
Hey Dentonik! Welcome to LBPC!
Thanks for entering your level in the showcase, ill be sure to queue it up.
By entering your creations here you also become eligible for spotlighting!
Also it seems some users are adopting a [F4F] feedback 4 feedback system. Consider trying it :D

Rough-Tea
01-19-2013, 01:14 PM
Hi, Dentonik, i recently played it... like 10 minutes ago haha... i like it, its a cool concept.. i didnt get very far, since i had some badluck... i think the presentation and the style is somehow pretty cool, allthough u got some problems to express yourself in english, i guess?

I had some problems with the wheel... its like.. it takes pretty long tbh... i would rather throw some dices or something... and it shows "too slow" everytime i turn it... but.. its still cool... i like the soundeffect of it... the sound goes up and down in speed with the wheel thats cool... and i like u gave me some minus points for grabbing the block u arnt supposed too.. haha...

There are some bugs and issues in it... but its still a nice (first) level.


It is a story level of a man with its dog.

What? ^^

Dentonik
01-19-2013, 01:28 PM
thanks! yes I think I have a bad english
also in the game there are english mistake?

Shade_seeker
01-19-2013, 04:09 PM
Hi:)
Yeah, there are some pretty easy problems to fix with this level.... The writing that comes up explaining how to play lasts for like 2 seconds.... That needs to be onscreen for far longer.
The wheel is a nice idea but just to hard to use. I kept spinnin it and it was 'too slow' and then you have to wait ages before you can turn it again...dentonics idea about dice is a good idea, but means you have to redo everything... The easier option would be to make it slow donwn very quickly if you don't spin in fast enough.
The first time I played, I got to the second part, but died, so when I retried, every time I clicked on the second lock it replayed the first level, even though it said 'I had won'. Having to replay the wheel over and over was real frustrating, no idea why the second part wouldn't play?

Didn't really see what the 'story about a man and his dog' had to do with the game, but the intro was cool. Not really sure what the level was about lol. Seemed like a game of chance, and not any skill envolved in progressing, though would liked to have seen more of he game to see if the game play evolved :)
Nice looking level, just not sure about the game Play ? Keep us posted if you plan to make any changes, I'd be happy to re give I a go !

Oh and almost forgot, there was one part of of the tutorial when you click on thman for a brief tutorial : 'tipe III touch the blue block and try and 2 action will be do.try!' perhaps say ' touch the block to perform two Radom actions'?

steakmo
01-20-2013, 10:40 PM
I liked the artwork and thought that the animations were really cool. The touch wheel and the other touch meter had difficulties and I don't know if they were working correctly. There were several english grammatical errors but I don't think that was a bid deal.