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Mrklaw
01-27-2013, 04:15 PM
Hi

Here is my first track. I based it on the suzuka Grand Prix track because it is one of my favourite circuits. Hopefully the layout is similar along with some scenery (eg the famous Ferris wheel), but I added a bunch of hazards etc to spice things up a it :)

If you get a chance, please take a look and let me know what you think. Thanks!

Link is https://karting.lbp.me/v/806n

Some pics:

Waterfall
http://i.imgur.com/fBBrMDM.png

Mt. Fuji
http://i.imgur.com/x1kzgvO.png

My Fan boost power up (available as a prize)
http://i.imgur.com/y6C2bmD.png

chronos453
01-28-2013, 05:29 AM
There's lots of good stuff waiting in this level. Queued it up, and I'll let you know what I think.

Schark94
01-28-2013, 01:49 PM
Added to queue.

fireblitz95
01-28-2013, 02:21 PM
Queued. :3

TheAdipose
01-29-2013, 06:19 PM
You've clearly put a lot of work into this - there are a lot of objects around and the background scenery is always interesting. I thought the waterfall and skyscraper placement in the background was especially effective. I liked the GP feel to the course and the use of chicanes and course sandtraps worked nicely.
The overuse of premade objects hurt it a little and I'd love to see what you can do with the custom objects on your next track. I also got caught a bunch of times on the edges of fences with hurt my race flow. You can edit them with the custom path tool and I suggest you tuck them in so the player doesnt get caught on it.
Lastly, did you adjust the default speed? If so, I might be tempted to turn it down just a wee bit.

Overall a nice track that shows a lot of potential for your future creations. Rated Up.

Adi

Mrklaw
01-29-2013, 07:24 PM
Appreciate the comments, thanks. Your tutorials were priceless for getting to grips with create mode.

I wanted to make more custom objects but the tools are tricky - definitely need more practice with that. No change to the default seed but I'll try tweaking it.

TheAdipose
01-29-2013, 08:22 PM
ah no leave it then. The reason I asked is cos the GP race on lbpk puts it up a bit and I was struggling to hold the line on some of your corners. Maybe I'm just a bit sucky at racing :D

chronos453
01-30-2013, 04:31 AM
That was really cool. There wasn't too much, yet not too little which I like. Nice touch having alternate paths for the weaponators, that's a wonderful idea! Though not being much of a critic myself, I couldn't really find anything I could talk about that needs improvement, sorry. The track had was really easy and enjoyable, so I was able to traverse this track swimmingly.

Hearted. Keep it up.