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neoseikant
03-18-2013, 11:33 AM
Hi guys.

This is my first post in this forum. I want to say hi and show my first level. Im enyoing this game and i hope you can enjoy my level.

I really need advices and tipes to improve my level editing. I hope that is not really bad for being my first level. Thanks ^^

https://karting.lbp.me/v/a99w

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The level is some kind of Paris with some parts from the film Metropolis, by Fritz Lang.

(Sorry for my grammar errors and so, my english is not perfect).

Pd: I usually play this game with my girlfriend many times a week. If you wanna play with me you are free to add me as a friend.

fireblitz95
03-22-2013, 12:33 AM
Queued! :D

neoseikant
03-30-2013, 06:37 PM
Queued! :D

Thanks, its almost impossible for me that someone play my level. I post it 2 weeks ago and no one plays :(

Thanks again. ^^:):)

MagicalHamster
04-08-2013, 10:04 PM
I played this level with some friends...They thought it showed a lot of promise for a first track; especially the visuals. : )

EinRobot
04-09-2013, 09:48 PM
Just played it, for your first level it is good. I think as you become more familier with building, the levels you make will become more fluid and cohesive.

neoseikant
04-13-2013, 08:37 AM
Wow, thanks for the feedback. This encourages me to make more levels.