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Sirr
09-19-2013, 01:05 AM
:star:https://karting.lbp.me/v/luym:star:



http://youtu.be/St-J7eSvbnA

Mysteriously appearing in Hatshepsutopia. Sackthing meets the Marvelous Bastia Hatshepsut . She lost the sacred yarn of the ancients. Sackthing must Bastia or is that Tomb Much. I also created the team picked: Arent Tomb Many.
Yes I did create Arent Tomb Many, but this is what I envisioned, when I made this track last I did it own a whim no creative insight. So I'm extremley happy with the way this came out, I took me forever figure out the cameras. I was determined to make a detailed opening cutscene it literally took forever to do but in the end it definitley was worth every sec haha,

As for the story I wouldn't mind it, I sort of made it up as I went along with it, but what you guys don't see are the characters I create like my sackboys and sackgirls, but every level I published is gonna revolve my characters craftverse/imagesphere, Every world will have there own Creator Curators like LBP1, heck I'm also going to feature some of the LBP1 Curators. :)

A lot of time and effort went into this track. I enjoyed making it. Like, comment, enjoy. Any problems, bugs or suggestions play feel free to tell me. I want to improve hahaha.

As for the video I tried my best to record, its in 720p, FYI its a little loud for those with headphones on! I'll be getting a HDPVR in the coming weeks!

:star:https://karting.lbp.me/v/luym:star:
Again Enjoy:)<3

gipsy
09-19-2013, 07:39 AM
Great, i queued it :)

hyperdude95
09-19-2013, 12:17 PM
Awesome, queued it up! :)

-hyper

StJimmysAdiction
09-19-2013, 05:21 PM
Great! I loved the tongue-in-cheek narration, and the style of the track was pretty well put together. I had some trouble with the handling: some turns were too tight or in too quick succession to match the kart's handling setting; kept running into walls and corners. The track itself is fairly short, was finished before I realized. I also didn't see much correlation between the intro and the race, other than style. It would have been nice to have had an objective within the race related to the narration. But still a fun little track!

fireblitz95
09-19-2013, 07:00 PM
Queued! :D