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Whalio Cappuccino
01-29-2009, 09:17 PM
Closed!

Welcome to Whaaaaale''s Feedback Thread.

I created this thread, as a way of helping out for the community. I haven't been able to continue with my level in LBP for a long time, and I won't until the bugs are fixed, but in the meantime I might as well do something around here. :) So this is what I decided to do! Note: This has nothing to do with the review threads at all! I am strictly leaving extensive feedback on levels, I am not reviewing them.


Rules:

1 - Only one submission per person. Once your level is finished, you may request feedback for another one.

2 - You must post your level, in the format I provide. If you don't it will be ignored until you repost with the proper format.


Level Title : *Title should be written exactly the same as the level.*
PSN : *Please leave your PSN, do not forget because I will ignore the request if you do.*
Forum Username : *Pretty self-explanatory*
Simple Description : *Anything that you want me to know about the level, for example, "Yes, it looks a bit plain at the moment but it is in it's beta stage." This way, I'll know what to suggest and what not to suggest.*
Link : *This is optional, if you want your feedback to be left on your thread, this will be needed. Otherwise, leave it blank and the information will be PM'ed to you.*
PM or Thread? : *This determines whether not I PM the feedback to you, or leave it on your thread.*
By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.

*Delete everything that is in red, and replace it with your information.*

A little about how I will leave the feedback.

The feedback I leave, will go in this order, always;


Ideas going through my head as level begins
The Positive
Suggestions/Feedback
Overall


If anyone wants to know, I always leave positive/constructive feedback, I was once apart of the Spotlight Team, but I left. I simply left because I didn't have the time needed to constantly play levels. With this though, I move at my own pace ( which will be quick, no need to worry ;) ) And I will be able to keep up with everything going on in my life, without having to worry about CC being on my case ( I joke, I joke :) )


So... Without further ado!

Request your levels!
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Queue List:

SEMINAL GEMINI (2 players ONLY)*
Quest for the Talisman, Part One: Fury of the Dragon
Hard Simplicity
Heart of the Flip-Side
R.I.P. Again (BETA)
The Forgotten Relics of the Sack
H.A.T.E_2
Metal Gear Karas
Kid Rocket's Revenge
WONDERLOO PARKOUR MADNESS
Operation: Nuclear Nuisance
The Forgotten Relics of the Sack
Hobo Warrior
Mission 1: The Bank Robbery

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Finished Levels:

Curiosity Killed the Sack http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7569
Holan Wars Part 2: Fort Plasma http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8213
Welcome to the Flip-Side
Savage Skies http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7775
A Hero's Duty http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8083
Little Big Cube http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...828#post136828
The Bearer - Part II: The Ring http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7586
HEIST 2: Rising Sunn http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8174
W&B - You had to think? http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8190
218 http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8345
Factory of Mystery Part 2: Heart of the Factory http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7723

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*Might be delayed, because of it's uniqueness.

Doctor Ramatool
01-29-2009, 09:23 PM
Level Title : Curiosity Killed the Sack
PSN : DoctorRamatool
Forum Username : Doctor Ramatool
Simple Description : It's done... but it really doesn't feel like it... I'm horrible with detailing.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7569
PM or Thread? : You can put it in the thread if you want.

Thanks by the way, nice of you to go out of your way and do this for members.

Hamsalad
01-29-2009, 09:32 PM
kudos to you posting this whaaaale, great job and nice initiative. I was about to post one of mine but i think you've played them both. But pretty sure you completed / enjoyed them both.

also btw idk if you hearted my zomg zombiez but i think you hearted my other one for sure zombie onslaught. and i ended up deleting the original and republishing to fix an exploit and modded it out a little bit so if you want give it a whirl again; i just added a special effect for at night time XD (AKA kind of fishing for another heart from you :P)

Whalio Cappuccino
01-29-2009, 09:33 PM
kudos to you posting this whaaaale, great job and nice initiative. I was about to post one of mine but i think you've played them both. But pretty sure you completed / enjoyed them both

That I did my friend, that I did. And Doctor_Ramatool, give me about 30 minutes or so and I'll have your feedback up on your thread, I'm about to go eat.

jjdragon
01-29-2009, 10:15 PM
ok i got one then :)

Level Title : Holan Wars Part 2: Fort Plasma
PSN : SolidTilt
Forum Username : jjdragon
Simple Description : 2nd part of my ongoing storyline, includes a boss, you are in a base trying to make it to the captain, bigger description in the real level, if u want the story to make more sense i'd recommend playing Holan Wars Part 1 too
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8213
PM or Thread? : on thread
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Trindall
01-29-2009, 10:30 PM
I'd appreciate feedback on my level:

Level Title : Welcome to the Flip-Side
PSN : Trindall
Forum Username : Trindall
Simple Description : Platforming level intended to be easy to moderate and is the first of three Flip-World levels. (Progressing in complexity in each succeeding level.) Play through the top of the level until the titular flip which, well, flips the level 180 degrees and then play to the finish line along the distinctly different bottom of the level. The level has gone through a lot of updating from previous input and it in a final state. (I'm fixing any issues raised but not adding more content.)
Link : No link yet on this forum and I thought it may be bad form to post a link to another LBP forum. I'm also waiting for Sheep-Lord to finish making the movie of the level and posting it to YouTube before I make a Level Showcase post.
PM or Thread? : PM please. I will add it after I make a post in this forum in the appropriate section.

By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations

Thanks again.

Neverynnal
01-29-2009, 10:34 PM
Great idea whaaaale :) I'd be happy to get some good feedback on the level NinjaMicWZ and I made.

Level Title : SEMINAL GEMINI (2 players ONLY)
PSN : NinjaMicWZ
Forum Username : Neverynnal
Simple Description : A fully polished level made for 2 players only! It's no problem if there is a bit of a delay on feedback because of it's unique quality.
Link : Thread for the level found in Signature,
PM or Thread? : Thread

Nukemgreen
01-29-2009, 10:54 PM
Level Title : Savage Skies
PSN : Nukemgreen
Forum Username : Nukemgreen
Simple Description : Built heavily around the jet fighter. There's a few glitches that may or may not be worked out, as I haven't tested since the last edit. Anyway, everything else is on the thread.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7775
PM or Thread? : Thread
By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.

TheJollyRajah
01-29-2009, 10:59 PM
Hey, it would be great if you could give me some feedback.

Level Title: A Hero's Duty
PSN: TheJollyRajah
Forum Username: TheJollyRajah
Simple Description: A short level. You are a hero and your job is to save a castle from invaders. Some paintinator gameplay, some platforming.
Link: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8083
PM or Thread?: Thread

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Thanks for the offer.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-29-2009, 11:11 PM
My God! I just finished Doctor Ramatools, check it out in his link if you want to see how I give feedback. I'll get started on the others when I have time.



Hey, it would be great if you could give me some feedback.

Level Title: A Hero's Duty
PSN: TheJollyRajah
Forum Username: TheJollyRajah
Simple Description: A short level. You are a hero and your job is to save a castle from invaders. Some paintinator gameplay, some platforming.
PM or Thread?: Thread

By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.

Thanks for the offer.

I need the LINK to your level if you want me to post the feedback on your thread.


Holan Wars Feedback has been put up, check it out jjdragon, nice series by the way!

TheJollyRajah
01-30-2009, 12:47 AM
I am very sorry about that! XD

Here is the link.
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8083

Thank you for devoting your time to this.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-30-2009, 12:47 AM
I am very sorry about that! XD

Here is the link.
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8083

Thank you for devoting your time to this.

No problem! Glad to see you've started up one yourself, good job!

Pancakesaregood
01-30-2009, 03:44 AM
Level Title : Little Big Cube
PSN : Pancakesaregood
Forum Username : Pancakesaregood
Simple Description : This is the final product, I just would like to know your opinion on it, and if theres anything you think really needs changes, and just what you think of it overall. Any constructive criticism is appreciated :)
Link :http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?p=136828#post136828
PM or Thread? : Thread

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Whalio Cappuccino
01-30-2009, 06:21 AM
Level Title : Little Big Cube
PSN : Pancakesaregood
Forum Username : Pancakesaregood
Simple Description : This is the final product, I just would like to know your opinion on it, and if theres anything you think really needs changes, and just what you think of it overall. Any constructive criticism is appreciated :)
Link :http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?p=136828#post136828
PM or Thread? : Thread

By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.

I'll do the other 3 single player levels tomorrow, it's pretty late where I live, and as for your level Neverynnal and Ninja, I need to find a partner who will continously stop playing, so I can add my thoughts in the "Ideas going through my head" section. So, bear with me. :)

NinjaMicWZ
01-30-2009, 07:33 AM
I don't expect a great review on this level, it was the first one I ever made, but I'm curious to see the "what's going through my mind" take...

Level Title : Alien Escape (I don't know how to type the two double arrow symbols around the word "mini-level" on the title)
PSN : NinjaMicWZ
Forum Username : unknown
Simple Description : Never was sure what to do with this mini-game sort of level... it's brutally chaotic, and would be too difficult an intro or sequeway in a full level but I have tons of therm left. I've tried to tone down the movements but there is no inbetween - it's either a bucking bronco or a calm ripple. Make sure you use R1 to grab on your way down.
Link : N/A no thread
PM or Thread? : thread

Whalio Cappuccino
01-30-2009, 05:41 PM
I don't expect a great review on this level, it was the first one I ever made, but I'm curious to see the "what's going through my mind" take...

Level Title : Alien Escape (I don't know how to type the two double arrow symbols around the word "mini-level" on the title)
PSN : NinjaMicWZ
Forum Username : unknown
Simple Description : Never was sure what to do with this mini-game sort of level... it's brutally chaotic, and would be too difficult an intro or sequeway in a full level but I have tons of therm left. I've tried to tone down the movements but there is no inbetween - it's either a bucking bronco or a calm ripple. Make sure you use R1 to grab on your way down.
Link : N/A no thread
PM or Thread? : thread

I don't get what you're asking, do you want me to review this level? Is it yours? Why didn't you fill in the Forum Username section, if it's your level wouldn't it be your username as well?

And if there isn't a thread, how can I leave the feedback on your thread?

NinjaMicWZ
01-30-2009, 06:22 PM
I'm going to go ahead and cancel my request.

Whalio Cappuccino
01-30-2009, 09:18 PM
I'm going to go ahead and cancel my request.

Alright, hope it wasn't anything I said...

Takelow
01-31-2009, 05:26 AM
Level Title : The Bearer - Part II: The Ring
PSN : Takelow
Forum Username : Takelow
Simple Description : First true level of "The Bearer series", the part II introduce the global concept: You will need to bear the ring in order to progress...
Link : Thread (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7586)
PM or Thread? : Thread
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Thank you by advance ;)

blizzard_cool
01-31-2009, 04:15 PM
Hey are u giving feedback to projects? If soˇˇ

Level Title : Sack Black - testing
PSN : blizzard_cool
Forum Username : blizzard_cool
Simple Description : A sneaking/secret agent stage that is still in development.
Link : link (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8190)
PM or Thread? : Thread

Whalio Cappuccino
01-31-2009, 08:49 PM
Alright, truly am sorry I can't get to these today or tomorrow, but Monday. I'll finish all of them up, except for Gemini, I have a friend over, maybe he can play it with me.

Maybe, I can get a few done today. But I'm not promising anything, and yes I do feedback on anything.

Mrgenji
02-01-2009, 11:25 AM
If your still taking levels you can do mine - I'm in no hurry though if you have more important things to do:

Level Title : HEIST 2: Rising Sunn
PSN : Mrgenji
Forum Username : Mrgenji (I dont really get this field...it seems kind of - redundant)
Simple Description : Work your way through the worlds most profitable casino, avoiding security, finding shortcuts and collecting trophy's. Featuring A boss battle where your whole future is put on the spin of the wheel.
Link : In my sig, I'll get the link in a second
PM or Thread? : thread

Whalio Cappuccino
02-01-2009, 10:03 PM
If your still taking levels you can do mine - I'm in no hurry though if you have more important things to do:

Level Title : HEIST 2: Rising Sunn
PSN : Mrgenji
Forum Username : Mrgenji (I dont really get this field...it seems kind of - redundant)
Simple Description : Work your way through the worlds most profitable casino, avoiding security, finding shortcuts and collecting trophy's. Featuring A boss battle where your whole future is put on the spin of the wheel.
Link : In my sig, I'll get the link in a second
PM or Thread? : thread

Nah, I'll do your level too, all on Monday.

As for the Forum Username field, not everyone has the same PSN as their forum name, I just don't want to get confused you know?

OCK
02-04-2009, 04:43 AM
Seeing as how you were a playtester/supporter of 218 from the very beginning I would love to have your thoughts on the final result.


Level Title : 218
PSN : OCK
Forum Username : OCK
Simple Description : I have already recieved some great suggestions but I know you always leave great feedback so perhaps you will spot things others may have missed. At the very least I hope you notice all the small details I put into the level and let me know what you think.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8345
PM or Thread? : Thread
By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.


I know you are busy with school etc so take your time. Thanks in advance and thanks again for being so supportive of this project :)

Whalio Cappuccino
02-04-2009, 04:46 AM
Seeing as how you were a playtester/supporter of 218 from the very beginning I would love to have your thoughts on the final result.


Level Title : 218
PSN : OCK
Forum Username : OCK
Simple Description : I have already recieved some great suggestions but I know you always leave great feedback so perhaps you will spot things others may have missed. At the very least I hope you notice all the small details I put into the level and let me know what you think.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8345
PM or Thread? : Thread
By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.


I know you are busy with school etc so take your time. Thanks in advance and thanks again for being so supportive of this project :)

Will do.

I know I promised I would have all of them done Monday, but I forgot my second semister started that day, just give me sometime to settle down in my new classes, and I'll have these done in a jiffy, I haven't forgotten.

gameguy888
02-04-2009, 04:58 AM
If it's not too much trouble, I'd like a review of my level as well please.

Level Title : Factory of Mystery Part 2: Heart of the Factory
PSN : gameguy888
Forum Username : gameguy888
Simple Description : While I'm not asking you to review it, you might want to play part 1 for the full effect if you haven't already. You don't have to, but some of the story present in the level might make more sense if you play the first one before.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7723
PM or Thread? : Leaving it in the thread is fine.
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Whalio Cappuccino
02-04-2009, 05:08 AM
If it's not too much trouble, I'd like a review of my level as well please.

Level Title : Factory of Mystery Part 2: Heart of the Factory
PSN : gameguy888
Forum Username : gameguy888
Simple Description : While I'm not asking you to review it, you might want to play part 1 for the full effect if you haven't already. You don't have to, but some of the story present in the level might make more sense if you play the first one before.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7723
PM or Thread? : Leaving it in the thread is fine.
By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.

Will do.

No trouble at all, just keep the level requests coming. I don't have a lot of time right now, but give me till Friday to settle down, and I'll be flying through these levels.

Mrgenji
02-04-2009, 11:46 AM
haha no rush mate

CowTip
02-07-2009, 04:38 PM
I know the list is piling up, but if you get time please check out my level too~

Level Title : Quest for the Talisman, Part One: Fury of the Dragon (There's a part two as well if for some reason you feel like playing both =P)
PSN : CowTip
Forum Username : CowTip
Simple Description : Light platforming with a simple, but hopefully fun story. Nothing special you need to be looking out for.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8515
PM or Thread? : Thread is ok.
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ThommyTheThird
02-07-2009, 06:19 PM
Level Title : Hard Simplicity
PSN : ThommyTheThird
Forum Username : ThommyTheThird
Simple Description : A level full of secrets, and with quite some artwork.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8525
PM or Thread? : Thread please.

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Whalio Cappuccino
02-08-2009, 12:25 AM
Got three done today.


Savage Skies
A Hero's Duty
Little Big Cube


I'll try to get a few more done today, but my friends over so don't expect anything, check out the feedback guys. And I have a bit more time now a days, so expect faster feedback.

Anyways, yeah. Three done, blah blah blah...

Trindall
02-10-2009, 07:57 PM
I'd like to add another level to your list if there is space and time. This is the follow-up level to one that you've already looked over.

Level Title : Heart of the Flip-Side
PSN : Trindall
Forum Username : Trindall
Simple Description : Play through the eight faces of a rotating 'plus' shaped level. Moderate to difficult run and jump style game with an unlockable bonus area filled with behind-the-scenes look into the making of the level.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8656
PM or Thread? : Thread

By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations

I appreciate your time on this.

Whalio Cappuccino
02-11-2009, 05:29 AM
I'd like to add another level to your list if there is space and time. This is the follow-up level to one that you've already looked over.

Level Title : Heart of the Flip-Side
PSN : Trindall
Forum Username : Trindall
Simple Description : Play through the eight faces of a rotating 'plus' shaped level. Moderate to difficult run and jump style game with an unlockable bonus area filled with behind-the-scenes look into the making of the level.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8656
PM or Thread? : Thread

By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations

I appreciate your time on this.


Alright, I added yours to the queue, I'll get a few done tomorrow, maybe a lot. Depends on my mood, but expect at least 3.

MatthijsNL
02-11-2009, 04:24 PM
Level Title : R.I.P. again (BETA)
PSN : MatthijsNL (I think I'm already in your friends list)
Forum Username : MatthijsNL
Simple Description : The focus is at the difficulty setting at the moment. Is the entire level at the same difficulty or ar some parts too hard or easy? Anything else would also be welcome
Link :
PM or Thread? : PM it please
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really apreciate it.

dkjestrup
02-13-2009, 07:12 AM
The Forgotten Relics of the Sack...

PSN:dkjestrup

Much appreciated. PM me or post in my F4F when you're done (if you have the time) please!

Whalio Cappuccino
02-13-2009, 07:34 AM
Since I've gotten back into LBP, I will try (keyword here is try!) To finish all of them tomorrow, yes I said all of them. But we'll see. But I PROMISE YOU I will have at least 5 done by tomorrow.

Sorry for the delays.

Voltiare
02-13-2009, 07:34 AM
H.A.T.E._2 would be a big help. Go to http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8037&page=5 to find out how to get the key.

Whalio Cappuccino
02-13-2009, 07:35 AM
H.A.T.E._2 would be a big help. Go to http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8037&page=5 to find out how to get the key.

Ohh definately, I loved H.A.T.E, so the second should be just as awesome if not better. I'll add it to my list.

graygoose
02-18-2009, 10:24 AM
lol.. im an idiot, i completely ignored the rules. sorry man, here's my edit:

hello Orca! ill put my best level on the spot.. its a Metal Gear Solid themed level. ive put in 100+ hrs into this and still updating it regularly.

perhaps you can give it a shot?

Level Title : Metal Gear Karas
PSN : graygoose
Forum Username : graygoose
Simple Description :the level is meant to be played like a real Metal Gear Solid game so theres gonna be stealth and action, also it wont be a metal gear solid without a metal gear in it, and there's one waiting for you in the end.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8909
PM or Thread? : thread please

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LuckyShot
02-18-2009, 10:29 AM
Level Title : Kid Rocket's Revenge
PSN : LuckyShot
Forum Username : LuckyShot
Simple Description : Final Chapter of a trilogy. Basic story up to this level... Mad scientist takes over a space station, tries to blow up the planet, you stop him in the first level - his wife starts pumping out rocket powered robots and seak revenge out of the family robot factory, and you stop her in the second level... now the kid in the family is sending the earth into an ice age by blocking out the sun, and you have to try to finally stop this crazy family once and for all.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?p=149679#post149679
PM or Thread? : on thread
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TheJollyRajah
02-18-2009, 11:06 AM
Whaaaaale is awesome and smart and cool. And he writes good reviews.

Thanks for reviewing my level Shamu!

misterwonderloo
02-18-2009, 11:23 AM
Level Title : WONDERLOO PARKOUR MADNESS
PSN : misterwonderloo
Forum Username : misterwonderloo
Simple Description : parkour hyper realistic race in some rusty industrial facility
Link : not yet.... i'm working on that
PM or Thread? : Thread please.

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Whalio Cappuccino
02-18-2009, 11:13 PM
I finished writing up on...


The Bearer - Part II
HEIST 2: Rising Sunn


Not sure if I'll get to do anymore today, but I'll make sure to keep you guys up to date. Great levels by the way guys!

And I'll add the new ones to the queue.

Wow, blizzard_cool didn't tell me that he had changed his levels name from Sack Black to W&B - You had to think? So I had tried to find his level, and I couldn't now that I found out, I played that and wrote on his thread. Soooo I also finished...


W&B - You had to think?

Takelow
02-19-2009, 06:19 AM
Thank you Whaaaale for the great review ;)
If you want to review Part II of the Bearer, feel free :)

Whalio Cappuccino
02-19-2009, 06:22 AM
Thank you Whaaaale for the great review ;)
If you want to review Part II of the Bearer, feel free :)

Do you mean part III? And do you want me to? I'd love to do it, I just want to know if YOU want me to.

RickTheRipper
02-19-2009, 12:05 PM
Level Title : Operation: Nuclear Nuisance
PSN : RickTheRipper
Forum Username : RickTheRipper
Simple Description : The level is done but I'm open to suggestions. The thermometer is on the verge of overheating (literally adding anything overheats it), so I can't add anything, but I can change/remove things. Also, after over 200 plays, no one has beaten it, (no scores on scoreboard) so be ready for a challenge.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8917
PM or Thread? : Thread

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dkjestrup
02-20-2009, 05:16 AM
Level Title : The forgotten relics of the sack...
PSN : dkjestrup
Forum Username : dkjestrup
Simple Description : This level is egyptian themed. My PS3 is broken, so any feedback will take a while. No comments on the bridge or spike wall; I already know about this problem.
Link : No thanks
PM or Thread? : PM please
By posting this form I certify that I have read the rules including the limitations.

EDIT: I have some finishing to do (namely a boss) but my PS3 is broken. Please do not comment on length! :)

t20thoughts
02-21-2009, 03:18 PM
Level Title : Hobo Warrior
PSN : t20thoughts
Forum Username : t20thoughts
Simple Description : Sequel level to "Hobo Wizard", so the story will make more sense if you've played that first. Anyway, this is a fairly challenging, pure-platforming-plus-some-winch-swinging level set in vaguely trippy environments. The level's designed first and foremost for one player.
Link :
PM or Thread? : PM
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brnxblze
02-21-2009, 05:00 PM
Level Title : Mission 1: The Bank Robbery
PSN : brnxblze
Forum Username : brnxblze
Simple Description : Part 1 of a 3 part series
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=9083
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Whalio Cappuccino
02-21-2009, 06:42 PM
Wow, that's a lot of requests. I'll get started right away.

Okay, I got 218 and Factory of Mystery Part 2 done. Only two yes, but I have visitors coming in about 20 minutes, and I don't want to be rude. Plus these levels were HUGE, took a lot of it out of me. Not in a bad way either.

Good stuff guys, keep them comin!

Shiwayari
02-25-2009, 07:42 PM
Just noticed this thread, I see you're pretty busy, but take your time :)

Level Title : Expedition Yagon, Part 1: Crystals open the Gate to Darkness?
PSN : Shiwayari
Forum Username : Shiwayari
Simple Description : A lot of people say it's really hard, so I warn you that it probably is. It was meant to be not that easy though. It's also quite long, around 20 minutes. And I'm not too good at making things look stunning, I hope it's ok though. Designed for 1 player.
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7291
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Miglioshin
02-25-2009, 08:20 PM
Level Title :Miglioshin's Fantasy Adventure (ch.2)
PSN : Miglioshin
Forum Username : Miglioshin
Simple Description : Second chapter of a saga, you had just met the demon who has escaped throug the catacombs toward the cursed town
It was a lot harder than it is now and I received a lot of feedback, fixing this and that, but I'm not yet satisfied.
Warning: it may happen that a crystal randomly glues itself in certain points and I can't figure out how to solve this!
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leadheavy52
02-25-2009, 09:04 PM
I'd like some feedback too, thanks.

Level Title : Sack'n Through Time!
PSN : Momma913
Forum Username : leadheavy52
Simple Description : It's an expeimental journey through time. You'll visit five different ages of history, each of which you must master before moving on.
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uzman
03-11-2009, 10:13 AM
Level Title : Escape the Factory
PSN : Uzman2
Forum Username : uzman
Simple Description : This is what supposedly the final product of the level. I had a couple of playtesters and fixed the problems. But i would like feedback from someone as well-known as you. Thanks!
Link : http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=9498
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Thanks by the way!:p:p:p

Whalio Cappuccino
03-11-2009, 11:19 PM
Oh crap! Totally forgot about this thread!

Guys I will get to your levels sooner or later, but right now I have let my friend borrow LBP for a while, it might be a week or two until I get it back, so you'll just have to wait. Sorry! Everyone who has requested there level to be played, will get it reviewed soon, again sorry for not telling you guys!


I'm going to close the Queue for now!


Closed!