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nggana25
07-29-2014, 06:32 PM
Hey everyone!

Presenting my first published level! Just a simple(-ish) platformer with a few puzzles. Any feedback would be awesome and much appreciated. Will try to post pictures as soon as I have the time/figure it out! :p Hope you guys enjoy it! :)

EDIT: Placed an updated link + pics below.


http://id.lbp.me/img/bl/b9dac27cda5dd730524bf55e167325bcd979d750.png
Through the Inferno (https://lbp.me/v/qsp9m2m)

A warphole has sent you to the utopian city of Ever-Bright. Run by the Warp Shaft conglomerate, its people are no strangers to... well, strangers. Forbidding Gehenna Nova awaits those that wish to return home - yet there is more to fear than just the fire and brimstone...

http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/9272e970bdc8e6ec9719d32b252b14158a725250.jpg

http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/bcf05f7e03db45575d8a84a4b0f063c148ed0f53.jpg

http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/c0c83b481b5693b4ae0ad04a2b0e5ddd61d2fe03.jpg

http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/17ac16eaf5df2b30a9505805fcd868276bc908e4.jpg

actio1_618
07-29-2014, 06:34 PM
Here's the lbp.me link to your level. https://lbp.me/v/qsp9m2m Queued.

nggana25
07-29-2014, 06:36 PM
Added the url to the original post. Thanks a bunch!

P-I-M-P-I
07-30-2014, 12:27 AM
I'll be glad to check out your first level, it's always nice to see new people joining the LBP community! :D

one-mad-bunny
07-30-2014, 02:03 AM
Queued by me. :-)

Greensmurfy
07-30-2014, 02:22 AM
And me :)

biorogue
07-30-2014, 04:54 AM
adding to my queue.

ForcesWerwolf
07-30-2014, 05:23 AM
first level? good job! can*t wait to see what you'll create when a bit time passes. my first level was not half that good. okay my first level was in lbp1 heh.

Bryan_Zuckerberg
07-30-2014, 06:26 AM
Wow, nice level! I'm always excited to try out a new level and provide feedback, so Consider it Queued!!! :)

Greensmurfy
07-30-2014, 07:02 AM
Great job! Even if this wasn't your first level I would be impressed. My first level was turrible. You have a great boss fight at the end with excellent platforming before that. Some areas seem a little rough around the edges, but I am super impressed. A job well done :)

CuriousSack
07-30-2014, 04:43 PM
I love your pics, with all the skulls, scary! :) I will have to play this! :)

RV-2013
07-30-2014, 08:33 PM
Queueing it....Now! :)

Kato
07-31-2014, 01:49 PM
Yeah, the giant robot was pretty neat. Not bad at all for your first. Keep building!

AstroVita
07-31-2014, 01:59 PM
Queud
:hero:
EDIT : Nice for your 1st level.

hyperdude95
08-01-2014, 08:15 PM
Queued! :)

-hyper

Mr_Fusion
08-02-2014, 02:57 AM
Nice first level!

There are a few sections where the way forward becomes a little convoluted though. Like where you have to hum into the spinning object and use the bounce pad to hit the switch.

I like the idea here, it becomes a central point that changes a few times, but it seems a bit cramped, and I sort of felt like I was doing what needed to be done, but it was not flowing properly.

Like I was not playing a platformer, but more like I was using exploits to sort of wiggle through the section.

Also, I am sure you would have been having some thermo issues with all those extra edges on everything. You could clean up a few of those sections and they would still look pretty decent, but be much more thermo friendly.

nggana25
09-01-2014, 04:53 PM
@Mr_Fusion

I agree with you about the spinning wheel. It does feel VERY cramped. Problem was I only realized it after finishing that whole segment. I felt it would have been too much trouble to change everything. :p

And really, really perceptive on your part! I wasn't originally planning on using the bounce pads to hit the switch, but rather something above the bounce pads (in the same layer). I only realized the "glitch" when I played through the section. I kinda liked it, so I kept it, but I understand that that part in particular can be particularly buggy. My bad.

And thanks for the tip re: edges! Unfortunately for me, I only discovered the magical item that is the corner editor a bit too late to make much use of it here. :p

Thanks a bunch for the feedback! :) (and I hope this reply doesn't count as a bump, haha)

Biv
09-01-2014, 05:00 PM
Qued. I'll check it out today.

avundcv
09-02-2014, 04:21 PM
Great work. Very good level!

http://i9.lbp.me/img/ft/9e96ac34b32b7611fbcecad85efc76222739cf65.jpg

Timthegamer12
09-02-2014, 07:06 PM
Hey everyone!

Presenting my first published level! Just a simple(-ish) platformer with a few puzzles. Any feedback would be awesome and much appreciated. Will try to post pictures as soon as I have the time/figure it out! :p Hope you guys enjoy it! :)

EDIT: Placed an updated link + pics below.


http://id.lbp.me/img/bl/b9dac27cda5dd730524bf55e167325bcd979d750.png
Through the Inferno (https://lbp.me/v/qsp9m2m)

A warphole has sent you to the utopian city of Ever-Bright. Run by the Warp Shaft conglomerate, its people are no strangers to... well, strangers. Forbidding Gehenna Nova awaits those that wish to return home - yet there is more to fear than just the fire and brimstone...

http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/9272e970bdc8e6ec9719d32b252b14158a725250.jpg

http://if.lbp.me/img/ft/bcf05f7e03db45575d8a84a4b0f063c148ed0f53.jpg

http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/c0c83b481b5693b4ae0ad04a2b0e5ddd61d2fe03.jpg

http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/17ac16eaf5df2b30a9505805fcd868276bc908e4.jpg

Very fun keep making more like It :)

BasketSnake
09-02-2014, 09:09 PM
Congratulations

LittleBigDes
09-05-2014, 02:46 PM
Not again. Less then 100 plays, that just won't do. Let me increase that, I'll play it later when I can.

DreadRandal
09-05-2014, 02:54 PM
Lots of buzzing going on. I will have to try to remember to cue this later.