View Full Version : Poem i wrote

02-25-2009, 03:47 PM
i wrote a poem and i submitted it to one site and i guess it got put onto another site :D.


Once your done reading it can you leave a comment at the bottom cause that helps people notice it with a number of comments i have.. and another great thing you could do is tap the " Like it button"

thank you :)

02-25-2009, 04:01 PM
I like it.

02-25-2009, 04:28 PM
thanks reaper but it would help too if you left a comment too?

02-25-2009, 04:52 PM
It gave a good view of the world IMO :)
NIce words, try some really obscure ones next time - people will think you're mega-smart :P

Good poem though

02-27-2009, 09:33 PM
HEy man, really nice poem you got there :)
And i like it...

and you're 12 O_O you're goooood