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Verschleppen
11-01-2014, 12:54 PM
Hey guys! This is my first level, which is called Crystal Cavern. It's a short level that tours you in an underground cave. There are also hidden bubbles scattered throughout the level.




http://i8.lbp.me/img/bl/278fa7f302ba140713fd6ad4e782c6161748e28b.png
Crystal Cavern (http://lbp.me/v/qtqf0pw)



Here's some pictures to give you an idea of it:




http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/8fdf1e4a665f878f6bbc04e6e8fa059cfad689fe.jpg

http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/f4e5a0fe497dbccec97cc82e0d476d30ebb1db30.jpg



I'd love to get some feedback and constructive criticism to help me improve on my future levels. Hope you have a great time playing it! :)

DT-KAOSU
11-01-2014, 02:11 PM
Looks cool!
Queued :)
HUgssz~

Mr_Fusion
11-09-2014, 03:11 AM
As a first level this is very well done. However stylistically I felt that it was a bit unfinished due to lack of point bubbles.

Scattering some bubbles about the place would help with guiding the player about where to go next. Some sections felt like I had ended up somewhere by accident. Dropping down onto a platform and getting some points would help with knowing I was going in the right direction.

Verschleppen
11-09-2014, 07:42 AM
As a first level this is very well done. However stylistically I felt that it was a bit unfinished due to lack of point bubbles.

Scattering some bubbles about the place would help with guiding the player about where to go next. Some sections felt like I had ended up somewhere by accident. Dropping down onto a platform and getting some points would help with knowing I was going in the right direction.

I'd keep that in mind. :)

TenebrisNemo
11-16-2014, 07:11 PM
Queued! I like caverns! And levels. And crystal... and bubbles... and cool levels... This must be cool