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himoks
08-18-2015, 07:29 PM
Have fun platforming your way trough the cardboard pillars. The level is challenging, there is a boss battle, city to explore, 2 easter eggs and much score bubbles! I hope you enjoy it.
Difficulty: Medium\Hard

https://lbp.me/v/qxc-fhv/trailer?p=1&l=12
http://lbp.me/v/qxcfhv

SakuraLBP
08-20-2015, 03:35 AM
Nice! :) Queued it up! =3

Kato
08-20-2015, 06:56 PM
Boss battles are always a plus. I have it queued!

EDIT:

I assume Solid Snake was one of the Easter eggs. Played it, couldn't complete it. The Watchtower stumped me. It looked like it was meant to be a 2 player puzzle. One switch opens the lower platforms, the other switch raises upper platforms that you have no chance of reaching anyway. You might want to include some hints for that area if you'd like players to finish. Also your wormhole up there was one-way. Once I was at the watchtower, there was no way back.

Making EVERYTHING in cardboard was slightly a mistake. It took me forever to find that handbag because it looked like part of the scenery. Many of the camera angles on the platforming part weren't very helpful, and all the mini-cutscenes made the level drag. If I collect a Red bubble, just give it to me. Don't make me sit through 5-10 seconds of lighting changes before I can move again. And that first extending catwalk that took forever.... It wasn't funny, it was teeth-grinding.Just get rid of that, and make it pop out already!

The level is in desperate need of some stickers, but otherwise the look is good. You were able to do a lot with cardboard!

himoks
08-23-2015, 09:11 PM
Boss battles are always a plus. I have it queued!

EDIT:

I assume Solid Snake was one of the Easter eggs. Played it, couldn't complete it. The Watchtower stumped me. It looked like it was meant to be a 2 player puzzle. One switch opens the lower platforms, the other switch raises upper platforms that you have no chance of reaching anyway. You might want to include some hints for that area if you'd like players to finish. Also your wormhole up there was one-way. Once I was at the watchtower, there was no way back.

Making EVERYTHING in cardboard was slightly a mistake. It took me forever to find that handbag because it looked like part of the scenery. Many of the camera angles on the platforming part weren't very helpful, and all the mini-cutscenes made the level drag. If I collect a Red bubble, just give it to me. Don't make me sit through 5-10 seconds of lighting changes before I can move again. And that first extending catwalk that took forever.... It wasn't funny, it was teeth-grinding.Just get rid of that, and make it pop out already!

The level is in desperate need of some stickers, but otherwise the look is good. You were able to do a lot with cardboard!

In the watchtower there is a black floor that you can grab up in the middle layer, it spawns two boxes.
You can make the side quests active so it shows where the item is what you are looking for.
When you collect the red bubbles, you can move.