OK thanks, your always a big help, :3 yeah I'm sure if you became a writer it be fun. but i think also you should think about it first for a while like you said. *mew
I might think about that actually, if to start with I just use characters that I create then I won't have difficulty understanding other characters I have to include because I won't have to to include them. I've also posted back as well, if anyone wants help with the story structure or woudl like me to rewrite it wtih better structure I've offered my services
OK i just told catlover to rewrite, you can look what i said on topic. I'll add you as co editor for now on the list. if you ever want to also be a writer just message me. *mew
Oh and just send me a VM when someone's posted so I can check it out and make sure it's okay, the other two writers look fine I don't very often come on here to see that thread active so unless you tell me that something needs looking at then I probably won't know anything been added
I don't mind it'll give me something to read, I'm about the only one writing on LBN at the moment so I'm not getting the luxury of being able to read stuff by other forum members. I see where the story is going now and seems good so far then. That just got me a bit confused, I guess that's why the other two writers are using their own individual characters. Sounds quite interesting and I'm sure it'll only get better as those people keep writing it as long as they keep up with the stories and don't give up on it
I've also posted in that section as well if you want more details on what was wrong with the last section but it's easily best put that the story was not very well structured
well everyone is suppose to write their own characters, up to 3 max and it's suppose to be we all have are chao all slowly come together to go on an adventure. this is just the start so we are still just getting to know the main cast. but yeah sounds like there's a problem with the last person. I'll tell them the problems and to rewrite it. also this is all i wanted you to do and to tell other people when something is going wrong with the story if and when it does. so would ya like to do this? being Co-editor?
Okay, yeah I've actually just realised they've posted in the thread and I do actually have a few things to say Firstly should be they scripting it rather than writing it as a story? Secondly: Should they all be having their own characters? Every chapter I've looked at has a completely different setup of characters, sorry not chapters their sections. This takes so long to wait for the edit to come up Thirdly: The last one that posted did about three days in one bit, which looked rather, put it this way I wouldn't write a story like that I would have taken the action in quicker rather than stalling the story very slowly with unimportant things but that's just my opinion. That's about the best I can put it I'm afraid I do hope that helps The story surely has me confused with them all using their own different characters but maybe that's how it's meant to be
LOL well i was asking for you if they've kept to the story, not asking you to edit things out. just to tell me about it and what's wrong, and or help people with their writing if they need it. but if you don't want to, that's fine.
Well I could if I understand the story but I wouldn't want to edit one and check it and give the go ahead and it doesn't quite fit the story because I don't fully understand it myself but if you're sure they've kept to the story and just want me to edit it out for any mistakes then fine I don't mind but please don't ask me to check that they're sticking to how the story should be because I don't fully understand it myself. I'll probably understand it once afew chapters have come out so and I can see where the story is going.
