Hey Sozo, just wondering if you've seen my latest blog entry about the story I'm going to write, just wondering what you kind of think of it
No I'm fine about it, it's just your story so I'll just read what they put and get back to you so that you can decide whether it's okay or not I'm glad you're happy with it though since catlover had to rewrite it to better structure it
OK was just reading over it. it seems fine. seems she is using a lot of the same kind of jokes from my story part. Darklord on TV. Chao that act very childish, Making her main chao speak bad English. hmm i wonder if she knew that chao don't have to and that was just a problem mine had? Tho i did LOL at the unicorns. really evil unicorns?? xD little random, but I'll let it go. anyways i don't think she needs to rewrite it. but you can give her some advice if you want.
Well most likely she is young she her writing most likely will feel like it. i'll go give t a look. but remember you are Co editor so if you have a problem unless it's to small, you can talk to them about it, long as it's nice and not to pushy. but i'm sure your not. :3 and thanks~ *mew
Happy Birthday Sozo, hope you have a wonderful day
BTW I checked edited version of what catlover wrote, it's better structure but it seems to have a very childish affect like they're taking notice of what a dark lord on the Television is saying and here's something else that seems rather weird as well "Pip looked at the tv and the credits for Darklord Misadventure was on she got so angry she kicked the bucket of soapy water but all it did was hurt her foot, then she tripped over the mop and fell on the floor." These are weird kinda childish things to me but if it's okay with you then it's fine. Your story so it's entirely your decision but it does concern me that these are quite childish.
LOL. sure sounds funny.
Sure I'll give it a read and just wondering because I'm really thinking about a story and I got a good idea for one but I'm not sure how much interest it'll take and I won't be able to write one with very few characters and I'm sure you won't mind but I'll ask first anyway would be all right for me to put you in the story as the dragon overlord?
OK Catlover has edited her post in my chao topic with the new version, give it a look for me ok?
Lol it's easier to deal with online people because you can just ignore them not so easy if you know people in real life that are annoying And hey I think Morgana's noticed me a bit around the forum, I must be being noticed to be noticed by someone as popular as her, she must be very busy on the forum
