JonnysToyRobot

I'm in the process of making a level that, in my opinion, might well turn out to be pretty awesome. Anyway, the problem is that there are plenty of things that could go wrong and since I'm making it so therefore know exactly what to do and I don't know anyone outside of this forum who plays LBP2, could one or two of you just play through the minute or so I put up to see if there are any glaring flaws that I've missed?

Here's the link

Thanks (: