RockSauron
RAWK YOU

i loved the last chapter the bit about peanuts was hilarious.

"Talk about a stroke of good luck!"
"PEANUT!"

Yes I am. About 650 X pees to go.

I don't wanna be in your lame story anyhow! (I lol'd by the way)

at first i kinda skimmed but i plan on rading the whole story as soon as my toothache stops ruining my concentration, lol

"LittleBigGiant and then Killer soon also jumped out from behind the bushes (the question of how Giant was able to hide behind bushes withdrawn)"

"GIANT!"

"Killer rushed to the Giant, frightened that he was going to die...

"Heh... Kid, don't... don't worry. Soon... I will be able to at last join my cousin in the land of the banned..."

Giant sighed. "LittleBigMidget. A troublemaker if I ever saw one. But... he's the only family I have left..."

"But... How can he be the only family you have left if he's dead himself?"

"A quiet silence followed, broken only by the battle in the background. Giant soon raised his giant hand, and slapped Killer in the face. "Don't you EVER mess up someone's dying speech!"

"Giant smiled. "Good..." And, with that, LBG let go, and slipped into the realm of the banned."

THAT IS AWESOME!!!! thank you. it was a very respectable, honorable, and hilarious sendoff, I really did Love it.

HAHAHA thanks, its fine if i am not in it any time soon. Introduce me when the story will accept it and when every you feel like adding a new character. Oh and i thought of a concept for my role in the story(you most likely already thought of this but i will say it anyway) Either, Boomy and I are like a team and we go way back, or we are mortal enemies, or to make it even juicier we were a team a long time ago so we know how each other thinks and now we are on different sides of this fight and are mortal enemies due to something that happened in our past. Just a thought or 2

Cheers!

id be happy to look

True, its just so good, i come home each day looking forward to a new chapter. Was just curious to see if you were publishing one today ^.^

Cheers!

also your LBP wiki idea is cool