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Hi all. I'm finally back from vacation and getting on top of work issues. I've even manged to squeeze in some LBP and bake up a new batch of haiku (careful they're still hot!). I have a bit more travel coming up so may be spotting over the next month, but there are always more user generated levels, so there will always be more haiku.
>>note: I'm editing the initial post to include all new haiku<<
Tiger Woods Mini-Golf by CuzFeeshe
Oops! Missed the windmill.
Dang! That sphinx is hard to hit!
Best golf game out there.
Chromastone Chronicles Parts 1-4 by Morgana25
I am the “hemmed hero”
who recovered all four stones!
Would that there were more.
The Mental Institution Part 1 by Ygg_Barasil
While it may be true
that it’s sad sackboy went nutz
this dream is worth it.
HyperSphere by MrsSpookyBuz
So crisply designed
And so tightly constructed
Oh! Geometry!
Light by Coxy224
It’s merely a test.
Only a minute or two.
But what a minute!
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Man, it must be tricky trying to get these things to fit into 17 syllables. I'm impressed.
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I just noticed this thread... I like it. MOR HAIKU...
If only I could get away with feedback this short in the showcase thread :D
So who's going to start doing audio rap reviews?
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You are! NinjaMic-Mic-Mic-Mic-WZZZZZZ! (imagine record scratching sounds during the "Mic" parts)
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Genius cub, I can't wait for your review thread!
And wow, thanks for reviewing my level AAAlone - very kind..... syllables!
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So here's my problem. While I'm at the office (and the boss isn't looking) I jot down a few levels that I'll play at home once the kids are asleep (I try to keep a running list). But I forget to bring the note home and don't get to it. Then I finally take the list home, and play... jot down some notes for my haiku review and then I forget to bring the note to work so I can publish the reviews (again while the boss isn't looking). I suppose I should just log on and post from home, but... well I'm a complicated guy. In any case I finally completed a the circle for a few more haiku. Enjoy!
The Tribe by Phife211
So enjoyable!
Subterranean puzzles
and a cool end boss.
Zilla's Neighborhood 2 by Godzillionaire
Game play is okay,
but the atmosphere is great!
very spooky woods.
Lone Ninja (series 1-4) by Coyote_blue
Hiyaaa! Ya! Take that!
Grappling hook and katana!
I am a ninja!
Robot Town 2 by Jump_Button
10 LOAD 'Robot Town'
20 EXECUTE 'Have Fun'
30 GOTO 10
Uh oh! Here comes the boss! I'd better get back to work!
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Another great list! Problem, though... I tried entering the "Robot Town 2" code, but realized I don't have my version of DOS with gwbasic, so it doesn't work. The .NET framework Visual Basic doesn't contain the keyword "Goto" anymore.
Well, guess I'll have to "Have Fun" some other night....
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Haha some great stuff - keep it up mate ^^
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Everyone, look here
It's not on topic
It's a game haiku!
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/3...iorpghaiku.png
Bowser in his stress
Anyone remember this?
Twas before Smithy.
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Just a quick post to demonstrat that I'm still alive. Have been avoiding LBP lately because I'm completely blocked in creation of Moving Parts 2, and can't stand to see it stagnating. May be over the hump now... hopefully...
Anyway, I've got one new haiku today (added to first post as well).
Royal Love Letter (pts 1 & 2) by Luke/Mammett-box
Neither poison gas
nor a slithering snake boss
will stop this postman
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Sorry for double post...
Fresh Haiku for the hopper--
The Miracle of Life By Poms
Ah, reproduction!
Neither as cute nor icky
As this great level.
Tribal Ruins by jackofcourse
Who’s added one more
Five-star level to the game?
Why Jack, Of course!
Ancient Land of Dinosaurs by Art_of_Tyler
Deep in the jungle
Amidst some great dinosaurs
I found all the eggs!
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