Really, really thanks for the good feedback and for take a time to play my level. And sorry for posting late my thanks, it´s just that I´ve been very busy at the school (I´m making a RC amphibious vehicle :p). Also, I´ve working in the concepts and ideas for my next level, and I think that I have the main story and some gameplay concepts (my next level will be very, very artistic, well, I hope so:blush:). Thanks to Salieri, Dominik12, PaddyJ, Fastbro, tominater12, Taffey (OMG! ;)), and the always great amazingflyingpoo.
@Salieri Thanks man, it´s nice to read good comments from an excellent creator on LBPC. I´m glad to see that you have enjoyed my level.
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Although I have to agree about the difficulty of the skull. I didn't do too badly on the chase section, but the part where you have to kill it was insanely difficult. I died pretty much every time I went for one of the brains - this was a bit frustrating.
I know now. Thanks to all the constructive feedback on LBPC I can say that I´ve learned a lot from your comments and I´m working to make of my next level, a better one.
@Dominik12.
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Hi, rOckalOvEer x73! I just finish your level and must way, that you did great level. All this different areas with its own specific gameplay looked great. Your humour is great. All things that you did with materials are perfect and looked very cool and create good atmosphere. And of course level's main idea is absolutely genius. I loved you level and your way to create environments. So here are my 5 stars and heart for level and heart of creator for you. And I will look for some your new level.
Thank you Dominik12, I can see that you have enjoyed very much of my level, thats nice!! :p. Thanks for the comments about the "good athmosphere", because that was my principal goal at the "real world" scenarios.
@PaddyJ.
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Great level. Loved the graphics and it's actually suprisingly long. Improve(all to do with the computer section): 1. On the skull that moves side to side, shrink it a bit, it's too hard to avoid 2. On the skull boss, unlethalise the bit where the brains are attached to(it's really frustrating cuz you can die when you kill a brain). Instead, give it a different attack(fireballs, gas etc.)
Than you for the good advice about my level, you can be assured that I´m going to take this into account in my future projects.;).
@Fastbro.
Hey fastbro!! First of all I must say that you personal image its crazzy and funny :p. Soory, but I must say that. Ok, now lets check your comments.
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I don't have the time or the patience to write a full review. But I'll say it was brilliant. The computer section had some fun platforming but could've used a little more scenery like jeffcu28 mentioned. The part in the living room was fun. I loved the way you used the remote and the DVD player. Lastly the T.V Quiz was great. I can see your a fan Lleonard! I got a bit confused on the question though, when it said about him visiting the sea I though about "The Shipwreak of Captain Skull" My final suggestion is the skull boss. I'm afraid to say it was way to hard. It seemed almost impossible to kill it without dying yourself. All in all I rated 5 star and hearted it! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Uhhhmmmm, thanks for the forced comments about my level!!!:p. Its a joke.
And yes, I must admit that I really like the Lleonard levels. But unfortunately, I haven´t seen him for a while in LBPC.
Thanks Fastbro, I´m also waiting for your next level.:)
@Tominater12. (Nice nick man :p).
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This is was an amazing level with tons of fun little segments and quizzes. Now I loved the way you used every day objects like a dvd player and computer to get into your levels. I also loved the way everything looked and just how cluttered it was. Now there were some issues I had with the computer section. First off the 1 spring was a little to underpowered and took me a while for me to finally bounce up. Then there was the flaming skull chase scene. I felt it was just cheap how 1 in every 3 tries the numbers would be right so you could jump through. I really did love the rest of the level and these are just minor flaws in your great level. 5 stars and a heart.
Great!! Thanks for a nice feedback and I´m glad to see that you´ve enjoyed the most of my level. Also, for posting some problems that you had with the level, thats a good learning for my future levels.;).
@Taffey.
Great!!!, the amazing creatur of the Spase Corrps siriez haz left me a gud feedvak. (I´m sorry, I could not resist:blush:).
Well, aside my bad jokes about grammar I must say that it is a very good motivation for me read good comments and constructive criticism from my favourite creators (guys like you, Jeffcu and poo).
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Great level you have here. The visuals are fantastic, and I love how varied and interesting the different areas are. The real world areas, computer world, and game show all have their own unique look and feel, and the transitions from one area to the next are very cool. My favorite things about the level are all the little details you included everywhere. The computer has little icons and windows, the bookshelf is cluttered with books and other stuff, the living room has all the comforts of home (including a remote - I love that), and the game show environment is appropriately bright and colorful. Your dialog is funny and it's obvious you have a good sense of humor. I know some people thought the computer world was a little plain, but I thought it was perfect. The zeroes and ones are perfectly proportioned, and I laughed when I saw the "virus" stickers start showing up. This level is a visual treat from start to finish.
Thats fantastic, the most of the time that I spent on this level was decorating it.
The bookshelf is based in my own one, and the rest of the decoratings were coming to mi mind one to one.
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You do have some problems here, mostly related to gameplay. I spent quite a bit of time wandering around the desk at the very beginning - it just isn't clear what you're supposed to do. I wasn't even sure what to do on my second play through... Are you supposed to grab the mouse or something or does the gas just kill you automatically? The next issue I had was already mentioned: the springy "1" isn't bouncy enough and it's difficult to make the jump to the right. And that skull boss..... Way too lethal. I woudn't say it's a difficult fight, but it's annoying to die over and over. That outside layer shouldn't be gas - maybe flaming material instead. I had the most problems in the living room though. I got completely stuck there and had no idea what to do until I read this thread. Of course the answer is obvious now, but it just wasn't intuitive. A quick speech bubble or arrow that says you need to grab the popcorn is all you need. The rest of this area is fine and well constructed - love the DVD player!
Ha! the idea of DVD player suddenly appeared in my mind and I loved it from that point:p.
The other things you mentioned. The first mechanism was made to transport you to the computer when you grab the mouse. About the skulls, that was my error. It just was not my best idea.
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This is a great concept and very well executed overall. I'm glad to have you here on the boards and I can't wait to play your next creation. 5 stars, a heart, and a creator heart as well. Thanks for a really fun level!
Thanks Taffey, it's great to read this from someone like you ;).
@amazingflyingpoo.
Hello again Poo.
Uhhmmm. I dont know what to say now :eek:.
First of all, as I told to Taffey, it´s great to read some feedback from you.
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Then I got to the part with the numbers. I got a huge kick out of the binary (1's and 0's) since I assume that I was inside the computer. Soon after I got in there, though, I got very very very annoyed. The skull was annoying to me at first, but that alone wasn't bad enough to get me all bothered. My biggest problem was that not only was some skull chasing me around, but there was also some platforming I had to do (between the 1 and 0 that move up and down), and there must have been some black smoke there that was killing me, but the smoke was impossible to see because it was up against a black background! Man, I must have died here 20 times! To be completely honest with you, I would have quit the level at this point if it wasn't made by someone that I know on the forums. I finally passed this part, and the next thing I run into is another skull with bubbles on the side, but the skull moves so fast that it is hard to hit the bubbles, and even if you hit them, you are basically guaranteed to die from the red smoke behind the skull I just wasn't a big fan of these skulls altogether.
An apology for this section, Im sorry you have not enjoyed it as much as the rest of the level and thanks for be patient and finish my level :p.
I´ve learned from my mistakes at creating enemies and hope my next level could fix this issue.
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In my opinion it just plain needs fixing, but it is your call completely Either way, awesome idea for a level, and I LOVED about 75% of it
The true its that I dont have too much time to republish this level, because I want to put all my effort on my next project. But thanks for the comments, but you can be sure that I´ll have in mind these tips on my next project.
And I'm very happy to see that there were many parts that you really like.:p.
Thanks guys, all of you are awesome.:p.
