(My 1st Level) Skyla - the floating islands

Skyla - the floating islands by sorrowthedark
my first level i have ever created on lbp, a small level

This is my first ever level, I have created ever on little big planet. I started off by creating a tim burton style level, but i searched and found loads. so i changed it and come up with Skyla. please could you give me some feedback. i would appreciate it, i understand the level is short but i hope to fix that when i get better at creating levels.


Skyla Trailer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JY3svI59Uts

Skyla Images
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v8...k/APhoto_6.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v8...k/APhoto_5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v8...k/APhoto_4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v8...k/APhoto_3.jpg

Wow that was a sweet trailer! I was going to pass on this just looking at the pics but I watched the trailer and was like wow I wana try this out lol so off I go to play it.

Ok so I am back!!! I played the level and this is what I have to say.

For your very first level this was very nice. I love the lights in the level they look nice and add charm to the level.Your use of stickers for detail are very nice and fit the level well giving it a fantasy feel. The jump pad part up to the boss could use a little fixing up to look nicer but the pads them self are ok and work fine. The boss looks really cool but does not give much challenge once you get past the cloud you just have to stand and shoot him. So maybe have the boss like hovering in the air like he is flying that would look cool and give him a few attacks to use.

So for your very first level this was very nice I liked it and gave it a 4 out of 5 stars with a beautiful tag and a heart :) keep working and I am sure you will become a very good level builder.

I played this level and i really enjoyed it, especially for your first level so well done.

thank you both for the feedback, as it will help me to move forward :) and create better levels