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Watsitooya and The Not-So-Confusing Cave by Play_the_Nerd
An adventure inside a cave to save a friend. With help from a guy named Watsitooya.
After a horrifying car crash, Sackboy must help his badly injured friend. You must get help from the nearest town, but you must go through a mysterious cave first. Your only help - a guy named Watsitooya.
The completed version is now published, but if you see any bugs or problems just report it here. Thanks, TheNerd
I'll check out this level when I can.
fun, very well corner-edited but i was missing a chunk of the story and any form of music
LOL! TheNerd, listen to your own advise! :pQuote:
Originally Posted by TheNerd
I didn't quite put much dialog in there, but I'll be sure to add it all in. I don't really put music in any of my levels but sure I'll put some in.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lilman1101
XD I don't quite pay attention to what I'm doing.Quote:
Originally Posted by CyberSora
Hi, TheNerd. Nice level. If you add more story line, more decorations and will do more interesting backtracking parts your will have great level. Right now I can give you 3.5 stars for this Beta. Good Luck!
You got it. So far I'm making it longer by adding a different story line. I do not really decorate much with stickers. Not that I don't like stickers, but I felt no need for them in this level. I'll see what I can do though. Backtracking, there will definitely be more of that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Domik12
Hey TheNerd
I think that you got a really nice level here, i like your art design that you used throughout, the visuals are really good, I agree with Domik12 you could put some storyline and MUSIC i love music, i gave you 4 stars i would like try it again, when you complete it.
Thanks memorex, still choosing which music would best fit the level, but I'll get it sooner or later. For the storyline, I got one. It'll make the level lag a bit, but not anything too laggy. I'll probably finish before the week ends. So don't worry :DQuote:
Originally Posted by memorex
Hello TheNerd. You´re doing a nice job here, but you still having some problems and as this is a beta, I´ll try to give you some suggestions. First, the place where a giant fire rock is chasing you it´s a little fast, because this fall down too fast and you don´t have time to run, and then, you just reappear at the checkpoint. Maybe you can fix this by changing the place of the prox. sensor and then you´ll have a little more time to have a propper reaction.
Then, your background is too simple. Yeah, I know that this is just a cave, but maybe you can add some scratched walls or some stalactites or things like that.
And finally I hope you can add more sections to your level because its a little short.
Well, afterall you´re making a really good job, there are only some details that can be improved. I´ll be waiting for the complete version.;)
Yeah I thought that was gonna be a problem but don't worry I fixed that.Quote:
Originally Posted by rOckalOvEer x73
Hmm maybe I'll add some stickers to lighten the mood of people's hunger for decorations.Quote:
Then, your background is too simple. Yeah, I know that this is just a cave, but maybe you can add some scratched walls or some stalactites or things like that.
Don't worry I added a storyline so there will be more stuff in there. I just have to put music, checkpoints, bubbles, and stickers then I'm done. Thanks for playing the BETA though. I hope you will enjoy the completed version, hopefully.Quote:
And finally I hope you can add more sections to your level because its a little short.
Well, after all you´re making a really good job, there are only some details that can be improved. I´ll be waiting for the complete version.;)
Well, here you go guys the completed version is up now. Now with a storyline! Tell me what you think.
Just played the not-beta version and couldn't finish. :-( I ended up stuck doing the grip-jumping over the grey gas in the second part of the cave. No matter what I did I could not jump to the fourth block. It was really great up to that point! I wanna see the end.
I knew that would be a problem. I'll try fixing it. I only have some plays for it so I don't mind re-publishing. But, if you can keep trying a bit more maybe you can make it. Try holding your analog stick the the right while pressing the "R" button repeatedly. If it does not work then it's re-publishing time. I just noticed my BETA has more plays than my completed version.Quote:
Originally Posted by Xacktar
Hey there The Nerd,
I just finished your completed version. I like that you added a reason for going through your level. It made it seem like Watsitooya was just some crazy guy who made people jump through hoops to go through his cave. Also the bright green detailed setting for the beginning and ending contrasted well with the barren cavern which itself was very intricate. I appreciated the clever designs as a creator. Some of the back and forth got to a bit much due to the fact that it was so close together and many times in would be on flat ground. Something like interesting terrain to transverse , an obstacle or a swing would make it feel less repetitive. I did have a little trouble with the grip section that Xacktar mentioned. When I treated like it was a single strip going across the ceiling it was easy. But I can see it confusing a number of players. The only other thing I wanted to mention was the speech bubble at the beginning by the tire. You placed it on the tire so it looked like the tire was talking. Moving it to just before the tire on background and then setting a more sensitive trigger would make it seem like the bubble was coming from the sacks mouth. Playing with the camera angles helps sell it as well.
Fun level with cool mechanics. four stars & a heart.
i quite enjoyed this level. u captured the magic of the cave rly well. plus i just love flicking switches >D
good job nerd :3
HI the nerd :cool:
Good improvements for the final version, I enjoyed playing your level, i gave you 5 stars this time :)
So I was playing through this level and found it just empty. I liked the way you did puzzles and the way you used space but I think you needed a little bit more corner editing and some stickers. Also I would really suggest adding arms to your people in the level. I gave it 3 stars.
I will fix the grip climbing section and add more stickers and fix up some more things. Thanks for all the feedback. I count this as my first official level, so I still have to get used to fixing problems in the level. I will re-publish as soon as I can.
And here's a little announcement for everyone:
I decided I am moving to the PS3 version of the game. I will still make few levels for the PSP, but more levels on PS3. I will start creating on PS3, at the middle point of May. But, I will finish my newest project, "The Great Flood"