Your level was amazingly disturbing :D
I loved the fact that you used the gas at its full potential, moving decos were really clever and of course it felt like a unique experience in terms of visuals.
:star::star::star::star: Sequel much?
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Your level was amazingly disturbing :D
I loved the fact that you used the gas at its full potential, moving decos were really clever and of course it felt like a unique experience in terms of visuals.
:star::star::star::star: Sequel much?
Thank you very much. Yeah, I had a great time manipulating the Gas effects. So much of this level was beta testing different effects. You'll never know how much got thrown away. Whew!Quote:
Originally Posted by Chuck_18mp
I planned a sequel from the start - but I thought I would get much further in the story in the first one.
After my level glitched, I wasn't able to get magic mouths working right (reliably), so I wasn't able to tweak it. But I will explain (briefly), in the beginning of the next one why sackboy was sent on his quest, and why Lord Visionary sees him as such as threat. (Hint; Sackboy was drawn into the Dream World awake - one cannot die in their dreams, so basically - he is immortal. Plus, he has few more abilities that will show his powers.)
I've also got some great effects completed (from my previous beta testing), that should be quite a sight to behold - or at least fun to play around in (like the ghosting effect). :)
GREAT level if I do say so myself. ^_^
Thank you very much. I appreciate it!Quote:
Originally Posted by -DR-
Also, I'm glad you posted, I didn't know where my thread had gone! :blush: :D
Hey Cymbol! Great Level! :)
I really liked the visual effects you used especially the parts involving lighting. One of the most trippy levels i've played! :p
There were some great uses of stickers on the characters near the beginning of the level.
The story was interesting and I could tell that you'd put some thought into it.
There were points where there pieces of dark matter showing right in plain sight. No matter how small it is, it still sticks out like a sore thumb!
Your use of the layer glitch wasn't great. The transition between glitched layers and normal layers felt a little awkward at times so I feel you need to improve on this aspect.
As for messing up the pod, this was a coincidence. This has happened to me once or twice in the past but your level had nothing to do with it. :)
I gave the level :star::star::star::star: and a heart!
I'd really appreciate it if you could give my level some feedback! (The link is in my sig)
That was an fantastic level you made. The breath-taking visuals are an masterpiece and it has an great use of decorations especially the spinning X parts as they gave you an dreaming tour and it's creepy to see the skeleton heads watching you. It is also a great use of an horrible gas wall as they really give you an dimensional tour. I also liked the idea of putting in different environments to this level. One minor issue in this level is that the slippery wobbling platform could have been more balanced and the rolling skeleton heads should be a little tad easier. I like to see this level get spotlighted next weekend.
Great glitches, great visuals, great gameplay, and an artistic idealist. :star::star::star::star::star:
Since this is an F4F level showcase, you should check out my levels and give me feedbacks after you played them. "The Hero Quest" level series has 10 different levels with different gameplay and visuals and "Future City Los Angeles" has a variety of gameplay and great visuals.
Thank you very much for your kind words. Looking forward to trying your levels soon.Quote:
Originally Posted by JustinArt
EDIT: Sorry, I was going to ask for clarification - but I understand (about the rolling heads).
Thank you very much for the feedback.
@ Everyone - I am getting a little behind my F4F plays (I've done all but 3 and posted F4F on each so far) - unfortunately, have had a medical issue come up with my son.
I will play your levels in turn as soon as I am able. Same with anyone else who posts in here - I will make a list and go through each level.
Thanks to all for your detailed feedback. It's been great to have other creators/players have a look and give honest feedback and encouragement. :) :) :)
Hi, I played your level this morning. I found it visualy awesome. Nevertheless I got stuck, so I could not finish the level. Anyway I gave you 5* as I think the level is really original. Little bit more into detail
GOOD:
- the visuals of the level are awesome. Especially the rotating things
- it's really abstract and weird. This is good in general, but can also be a bit confusing for the player
THINGS THAT COULD BE IMPROVED:
- As I said, I got stuck. Exactly in the red zone, when you have to jump to grab something, and there is something like a tree. I could not find the way to climb the tree to reach the other side of the hole.
- Perhaps there are too many areas where you just have to go forward.
- Regarding the gameplay, I found the level rather empty. I mean, it's full visually, but not so full in challenges
- the challenges are too hard. For example in the first race (pink area) with so many electric things falling...
As I said the level is great visually, but in my opinion little bit more platforms/creatures could be added to improve the gameplay.
Could you, whenever you have time, take a look at the F4F level in my signature? Thanks
I notice a lot of people get confused here. Others have critiqued me for giving "hit you over the head" clues - but for some reason - people do get stuck or can not figure some things out. This one is simple, but understandably easy to miss. Simply jump up on the background wall and climb up till you can jump up on the tree. Easy! :) There were two main areas of gameplay - the spinning heads and the underground caverns. I've been trying to balance my gameplay - a lot of people have complained my levels are too hard, so I'm trying not to chase players away this time. :DQuote:
Originally Posted by onturenio
Just FYI, incase you decide to complete it one day. Thank you for playing and your feedback.
Look forward to playing your Tank level!!!
Ok, of course I'll play again :p
Thanks, very nice of you.Quote:
Originally Posted by onturenio
Btw, can does anyone know who "allcreator" is? They left a comment on my level and said they would feature my level in Episode 20 of their LBP Adventures (LBPA) series.
I've actually just started to get on LBP sites (like this one) - so forgive me if this is common knowledge - or, if this was just someone leaving a vague, but nice comment.
Thanks to anyone who can answer.
Nevermind - found out who "allcreator" is. He does youtube video reviews and wanted to showcase my level. Cool deal.
Anyway, just wanted you all to know - I have gotten behind on my F4F's - I'd say I've done more than half of you on my list. However, due to a medical emergency that happened with my son, I have been out and will now be gone at least a week.
When I return, hopefully, everything will be good and I'll have some time to return the F4F's. I'll still check this website while I'm away and see if I need to add to the list for F4F's. Some of the levels look like great fun and I can't wait to give them a try. I will get them done.
Thanks for all the feedback, I have made some modifications based on the feedback - but due to my level glitching, I'm afraid to make many more changes.
Currently working on The Dream Catcher II - should be bigger and better than this one was.
Thanks everyone!
Hi, I played the level again. You was right, it was really easy :p. I got confused because I thought that back layer was a thin one... well, I finished the level now. On thing: at the very end, the angel says something (I think regarding the thermometer) but I had not time to read it, since I was slipping too fast. You could try to fix that also.
I really hope everything is alright with your son, CYMBOL.
I had great time in this level:
Bad:
-Few parts were little laggy.
Good:
+Unique and fun: something weird that hasn't been made before.
+Characters were all very nice and not copied from story characters.
+Visuals, as well as gameplay was unique and weird.
Critic: :star::star::star::star: but I decided to not give a <3 because level wasn't my style and I actually didn't find anything inspirating from it. It was a good and unique but idea was alternative. You used materials also well.
Thanks Xeo. We've been treating our kid for back pain for a couple of years - a couple of weeks ago they found a tumor on his spine - and now we're at MD Anderson in Houston (Cancer Research Center) - he's having surgery this Tuesday to have it removed. All happened very fast.Quote:
Originally Posted by obsoleteXeo
Thank you very much for the play through and critique. I understand if the level wasn't "your style" - but I'm not sure if I understand your statement that you "didn't find anything inspiring? from it".Quote:
Originally Posted by FreeAim
Btw, is there any particular level of yours you want me to provide F4F on? I won't be home for another week, but as I said, I will catch up then - and complete F4F's on all levels I did not get to before leaving, as well as any new posts such as this one that come up while I'm away.
Thanks all!
Yes, The Cellar. I didn't find anything that gives me ideas or plans for my future levels, that's what I ment with "didn't find anything inspirating from it".Quote:
Originally Posted by CYMBOL
Ah, ok - I see. I've never heard of that as being a reason to give or not to give a heart. But I understand.Quote:
Originally Posted by FreeAim
Thanks again for playing the level. I'll get to yours when I get back home. :)
Well sorry but that is the way I give hearts.