it should be concrete right now and just keep adding onto it...i loved the story...nothing i could ever think up...which is very impressive :)
i hope to see much MUCH more soon :)
the only thing that kinda has me thinking is the "robot" curse...which is weird as how would anything with meat and bones in their body suddenly turn into a robot?
maybe have a suit of robotic armor to TRAP Ahi in there...but as for a robot curse....meh im not so sure...but thats just a quick thought...so its not something that i find much problem with...but thought id point it out to see what you thought about it

