LBLHS-Sewage Mayhem

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Hello everyone here is my new level call Sewage Mayhem. This level is a score challenge level and it is for the Little Big Land Create and play contest. Collect as many score bubble as you can before time run out and here are some pics of the level :p

Insider tips: Grab the black octopus and you get a prize

Little Big Land Logo
http://i49.tinypic.com/2uorlgk.jpg
Sewage of the level :p
http://i47.tinypic.com/2rrkzld.jpg
The Logic in the level :boo:
http://i49.tinypic.com/2l2ez9.jpg

Update: I know the level is repetitive and lacking danger that is because of the glitch that happed to me with the emitter of the level. The score bubble just stop coming I wound put danger into it but like this is a contest level they say I cant re-publish the level :(

Bad news guys I loose the contest :( but dont worry because im entering another contest :D

Is it up? Also, I see no pics. I shall investigate!

edit: I'll put up a vid for ya soon. as a matter of fact, here it is!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vnd8DE0pJz0

Thanks memodrix also I will fix that problem with the picture :p

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Originally Posted by Memodrix

Is it up? Also, I see no pics. I shall investigate!

edit: I'll put up a vid for ya soon.

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I like it, but the starting point could be closer to the challenge. Once you get to where you need to, there's not really much to it. Maybe you should add obstacles of some kind? I dont have the pack that lets me use water so i dont know what works, but maybe some balls that float up that are dangerous that you have to avoid. The movement in water is slow as well, so maybe a few more places point bubbles could spawn would make it more fun. The level looks very nice though, good work on the visual design :)
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Thanks dude for all your suggestion but I have a big problem I think the rules say that I cant re-publish my level once is publish I think I will check on that. Thanks again dude for all you suggestion also I forgot to tell you something wend I was creating the level there is this glitch the score bubble and the other emitters stop spawning the item so I wish I could put a danger in the level but I cant :)

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Originally Posted by DMacK

I like it, but the starting point could be closer to the challenge. Once you get to where you need to, there's not really much to it. Maybe you should add obstacles of some kind? I dont have the pack that lets me use water so i dont know what works, but maybe some balls that float up that are dangerous that you have to avoid. The movement in water is slow as well, so maybe a few more places point bubbles could spawn would make it more fun. The level looks very nice though, good work on the visual design :)
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I played your level few hours ago now :)
Level looked pretty good, lots of stuff here and there, but you could add some lights, because it was pretty dark and I didn't see a much.
It wasn't very challenging, just collect bubbles before time runs out. You could add some obstacles going up or down or both, why not sideways?
I wish there would happen little more, otherwise good level and gave it :star::star::star::star: :)
F4F: Check out my level Lighthouse when you have the time and give me some feedback, thanks!

Thats you for the feed back but I think I cant put some dangerous objects because there was a strange glitch wail I was creating the level. here look at this thread it explains the problem with the glitch http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...bubble-problem!

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Originally Posted by Crazu

I played your level few hours ago now :)
Level looked pretty good, lots of stuff here and there, but you could add some lights, because it was pretty dark and I didn't see a much.
It wasn't very challenging, just collect bubbles before time runs out. You could add some obstacles going up or down or both, why not sideways?
I wish there would happen little more, otherwise good level and gave it :star::star::star::star: :)
F4F: Check out my level Lighthouse when you have the time and give me some feedback, thanks!

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Hey Arnaldo!! :)

I played your score challenge level and I enjoyed it very much. It was very relaxing and beautiful. I had a good time swimming in the environment you created and chaining together bubble combos under the water was a blast. I loved the sunken boat in the background and the little fishes at the beginning were a nice touch. I hope you make more levels soon, just PM me and I will gladly give them some plays. :D

I gave you five stars and a heart and a heart for creator too. <3

Great job Buddy!! :)

-VJ

Overall, I'd rate it three stars. Although it was fun, and your timer was VERY impressive, I wish there could have been more danger or obstacles. It seemed a bit too easy for me, and repetitive. But if you added a few things going up or down every so often, like mines or pufferfish, or some sewage-related things, it'd be fantastic! It could also use some lights, maybe green or glowing. Overall, it's good, though. :)

Sorry for the late reply, my mom kicked me off of the computer to do some stuff. >_>

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Originally Posted by VelcroJonze

Hey Arnaldo!! :)

I played your score challenge level and I enjoyed it very much. It was very relaxing and beautiful. I had a good time swimming in the environment you created and chaining together bubble combos under the water was a blast. I loved the sunken boat in the background and the little fishes at the beginning were a nice touch. I hope you make more levels soon, just PM me and I will gladly give them some plays. :D

I gave you five stars and a heart and a heart for creator too. <3

Great job Buddy!! :)

-VJ

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Overall, I'd rate it three stars. Although it was fun, and your timer was VERY impressive, I wish there could have been more danger or obstacles. It seemed a bit too easy for me, and repetitive. But if you added a few things going up or down every so often, like mines or pufferfish, or some sewage-related things, it'd be fantastic! It could also use some lights, maybe green or glowing. Overall, it's good, though.

Sorry for the late reply, my mom kicked me off of the computer to do some stuff. >_>

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Thanks 4 the feedback guys thanks a lot :p Also I check the Little Big Planet Website and they say you cant republish you level anymore :(

Wish me luck guys I need to win that price :p

Wow, I'd like to see the logic behind that timer! But I will try to play this soon. Judging by the video, I agree with TheZimInvader, that the level seems repetitive and lacking danger.

F4F: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...ombie-Takeover!

Dude I know the level is repetitive and lacking danger that is because of the glitch that happed to me with the emitter of the level. The score bubble just stop coming I wound put danger into it but like this is a contest level they say I cant re-publish the level :(

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Originally Posted by LilNeL

Wow, I'd like to see the logic behind that timer! But I will try to play this soon. Judging by the video, I agree with TheZimInvader, that the level seems repetitive and lacking danger.

F4F: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...ombie-Takeover!

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Dude!! I cant believe this! I was on LBP right now and i went to this thread to see which level u wanted me to play... and me and my cousin have already played this... about 10 times! lol! Sooo yeah... sorry took so long to give you feedback.

I think its really fun. It is a nice simple timed challenge, and that is good. It isnt confusing so people can get in there and play right away! I love the scenery, especially the broken ship in the back. It gives it a great feel. and the sewage pipes are great too.
I gave it 4 stars and a heart!!

Btw I beat my cousin... Hahaha

Oh, and out of all the LBLHS levels i played, yours was the best!

thanks 4 the feedback dude and it doesn't matter if it toke you a long time. Thanks again and lol you beat your cousin :p

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Originally Posted by Shhabbazz

Dude!! I cant believe this! I was on LBP right now and i went to this thread to see which level u wanted me to play... and me and my cousin have already played this... about 10 times! lol! Sooo yeah... sorry took so long to give you feedback.

I think its really fun. It is a nice simple timed challenge, and that is good. It isnt confusing so people can get in there and play right away! I love the scenery, especially the broken ship in the back. It gives it a great feel. and the sewage pipes are great too.
I gave it 4 stars and a heart!!

Btw I beat my cousin... Hahaha

Oh, and out of all the LBLHS levels i played, yours was the best!

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hey arnaldo. Thanks for your feedback on my Troy level. Here's your F4F!

Really neat underwater score challenge! Visually the level was awesome. It looked great! The concept was simple and fun. I thought the game should change some though as time moves on. maybe introduce some hazards later on in the challenge. Or if you want to avoid using hazards, have different types of bubbles appear (Ie one of the pipes suddenly springs a leak for a few seconds, and bubbles coming out increase. or use the prize bubbles, which are worth more points) I noticed the black things that you could grab for a large point boost but there were only 3 of those in the entire duration of the challenge. a little added variety could really make this level shine.

Overall I think it was a great score challenge, and was very relaxing to play through. I rated it 4 stars and tagged beautiful. thanks!

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Originally Posted by Duffluc

hey arnaldo. Thanks for your feedback on my Troy level. Here's your F4F!

Really neat underwater score challenge! Visually the level was awesome. It looked great! The concept was simple and fun. I thought the game should change some though as time moves on. maybe introduce some hazards later on in the challenge. Or if you want to avoid using hazards, have different types of bubbles appear (Ie one of the pipes suddenly springs a leak for a few seconds, and bubbles coming out increase. or use the prize bubbles, which are worth more points) I noticed the black things that you could grab for a large point boost but there were only 3 of those in the entire duration of the challenge. a little added variety could really make this level shine.

Overall I think it was a great score challenge, and was very relaxing to play through. I rated it 4 stars and tagged beautiful. thanks!

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Thanks dude for the kind words on the level and yes a lot of people said that I should put hazards in the level but I cant thanks to the glitch wend I was creating the level and I cant re-publish anymore because the deadline already pass.

Thanks everyone lets hope I win the contest :p

I'm going to have to agree with what others have said. Visually a very nice looking level and the overall experience comes across very polished. It really does need hazzards...if the player has to work to survive the entire duration they are much more likely to replay to survive longer/improve their score. Without that motivation, even though it's a good looking level I can't see myself playing it again...it really is a pity you can't make changes, the level has potential. I rated it 4 stars due to the lack of hazards.

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Originally Posted by fullofwin

I'm going to have to agree with what others have said. Visually a very nice looking level and the overall experience comes across very polished. It really does need hazzards...if the player has to work to survive the entire duration they are much more likely to replay to survive longer/improve their score. Without that motivation, even though it's a good looking level I can't see myself playing it again...it really is a pity you can't make changes, the level has potential. I rated it 4 stars due to the lack of hazards.

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Thanks dude and yes it really is a pity you can't make changes but just hope with me that I win the contest :D

I played, and agree with most posters here, the level is a fun idea, and a little variety could go a long way - the occasional empty prize bubble, a hazard or two, anyhting you can think of to keep the player on their toes!

Maybe when the contest is over, try and work some of those in and republish. Good luck with it!

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Originally Posted by julesyjules

I played, and agree with most posters here, the level is a fun idea, and a little variety could go a long way - the occasional empty prize bubble, a hazard or two, anyhting you can think of to keep the player on their toes!

Maybe when the contest is over, try and work some of those in and republish. Good luck with it!

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Thanks dude and thats what im trying to do they say the contest ends tomorrow and if I win or if I dont win I will still republish the level and make it better :p

OK so on my notes page I put,

Likes
-I liked how hte level looked, the visuals were very good
-I also loved how you put an intro in the level PROPS
-I liked how you set the mood in the level by making the water green and making your own slime

Dislikes
-there was no challenge there were creatures popping up here and there every once in a while but most of the time I was just floating on top of where you make the bubbles emmit.(but maybe because it was that emmiter glitch you were talking about, that could easily be fixed)
-I didn't think that players would be challenged when you make the bubbles emmit in one place only so they could just float there and wait for the bubbles to float up while dodging sea creatures everyonce in a while.


Suggestions
-I suggest using LED lights tweaked to green to give it a more "SLIMY" look, they're great for setting the mood in a level

-also if possible make the bubbles emmit in different places because that wouldn't be much of a challenge when you know exactly where the bubbles would float up.

-fix the emmitter glitch maybe? you need enemies to dodge!

over all I gave it 5 stars and one heart! great job on the level!

p.s. good luck in the competition ;)

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Originally Posted by wolverine_2008

OK so on my notes page I put,

Likes
-I liked how hte level looked, the visuals were very good
-I also loved how you put an intro in the level PROPS
-I liked how you set the mood in the level by making the water green and making your own slime

Dislikes
-there was no challenge there were creatures popping up here and there every once in a while but most of the time I was just floating on top of where you make the bubbles emmit.(but maybe because it was that emmiter glitch you were talking about, that could easily be fixed)
-I didn't think that players would be challenged when you make the bubbles emmit in one place only so they could just float there and wait for the bubbles to float up while dodging sea creatures everyonce in a while.


Suggestions
-I suggest using LED lights tweaked to green to give it a more "SLIMY" look, they're great for setting the mood in a level

-also if possible make the bubbles emmit in different places because that wouldn't be much of a challenge when you know exactly where the bubbles would float up.

-fix the emmitter glitch maybe? you need enemies to dodge!

over all I gave it 5 stars and one heart! great job on the level!

p.s. good luck in the competition ;)

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Thanks dude now I have an idea in what I need to fix and what I need to improve on. Thanks again once the competition is over I will try to fix everything.

PS: im making another level that you will really enjoy and it almost done :P

Interesting survival challenge. The collecting points is fun and the pipe design and decoration really gives you the sewage feeling. Despite the lack of hazards and slight visuals, it was as a fun as the other survival challenge like this in POTC level kit. By the way that was a great countdown clock. Did you made that? 4 stars

Play and F4F "The Hero Chronicles LV3 Action Mansion" when you get a chance.

Ok guys bad news I didnt win the contest :( good news I could finally re-publish the level:) bad news again im finishing another level and it will be done around 3 days so guys you have to wait a little until I finish that level

Thanks :p