The Petrol Head Thread

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10-19-2008
flakmagnet

The Petrol Head Thread

So,

What was your first car? (If you have one. Optional question is what will be your first?)

Did you/will you name your first car? Be honest!

What are you currently driving?

What is your dream car?

My first and still current car is a 1 litre, X registered Vauxhall Corsa. She's Blue and she's named Cassie, after Cassandra Cain. She's a brilliant runner, and though the other half wants to upgrade, I'm not ready to yet as I'm emotionally attached, I've had her for two years, and she doesn't cost much to run or repair.

My dream car is a Dodge Viper in blue with the two white stipes across from front to back. I've wanted one ever since playing Gran Turismo! Real world dream car would probably be a Honda Civic. Those things are pretty.
10-19-2008
Thee-Flash

1)What was your first car? (If you have one, optional question is what will be your first?)

2)Did you/will you name your first car? Be honest!

3)What are you currently driving?

4)What is your dream car?

1:Porsh 911 lol my dad gave it to me
2: Sexy bum bum nah lol i didn't name it
3: My bike / Legs
4: Evo 9
10-19-2008
ClankXIII

Check your OP. The second line doesn't read correctly. I think you should either change the comma after the 'one' to a period and capitalize the 'o' in 'optional', or add the word 'don't' after 'you'.

;)
10-19-2008
Thee-Flash

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClankXIII

Check your OP. The second line doesn't read correctly. I think you should either change the comma after the 'one' to a period and capitalize the 'o' in 'optional', or add the word 'don't' after 'you'.

;)

Clank / English teacher
10-19-2008
ClankXIII

Quote:

Originally Posted by uks-FINEST-HERO

Clank / English teacher

Fragment (consider revising)
10-19-2008
Thee-Flash

Quote:

Originally Posted by ClankXIII

Fragment (consider revising)

you really don't under stand me do you let me say this (EASY) for you

I HATE GRAMMER!
10-19-2008
ClankXIII
Quote:

Originally Posted by uks-FINEST-HERO

you really don't under stand me do you let me say this (EASY) for you

I HATE GRAMMER!
- Capitalize the 'y' in 'you' at the beginning of the sentence.
- Combine 'under' and 'stand'.
- Add a '?' after the second 'you'.
- Capitalize the 'l' in 'let'.
- Remove the parenthesis from 'EASY'.
- Uncapitalize all letters in 'EASY'.
- Change the suffix of 'Y' in 'EASY' to 'ier'
- Add a ':' after the third 'you'.
- Uncapitalize all letters in 'HATE'.
- Uncapitalize all letters in 'GRAMMER'.
- Change the 'E' in 'GRAMMER' to an 'a'.
10-19-2008
flakmagnet

OP has been edited. Enough with the grammar, on with the cars!
10-19-2008
Stix489

Quote:

Originally Posted by uks-FINEST-HERO

You really don't understand me, do you? Let me say this easily for you.

I hate grammar!

Thar, saved you the trouble ;)
10-19-2008
ClankXIII

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stix489

Thar, saved you the trouble ;)

The suffix 'Y' should have been changed to 'ier' not 'ily'.

Sorry. :o

I have yet to own a car. I do not know what car will be my first.

I will not be naming my first car.

I am currently driving my mother's car, a white Honda Accord.

My dream car is the Camaro as seen in Transformers with a different paint job.
10-19-2008
Thee-Flash
Quote:
Originally Posted by ClankXIII

Capitalize the 'y' in 'you' at the beginning of the sentence.

Combine 'under' and 'stand'.

Add a '?' after the second 'you'.

Capitalize the 'l' in 'let'.

Remove the parenthesis from 'EASY'.

Uncapitalize all letters in 'EASY'.

Change the suffix of 'Y' in 'EASY' to 'ier'

Add a ':' after the third 'you'.

Uncapitalize all letters in 'HATE'.

Uncapitalize all letters in 'GRAMMER'.

Change the 'E' in 'GRAMMER' to an 'a'.
are you trying to annoy me because please stop im not in the mood i could give you bad rep because in a way that insults me

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stix489

Thar, saved you the trouble ;)

i was never going to change it any way... you wasted ur time sorry

now get back to cars!!