The Last Sack: Introduction

The Last Sack: Introduction by JYADS
The introduction to my upcoming level series, "The Last Sack". Quite short, but a long time in the making.

I tryed really hard to make this, I hope you all enjoy. ;)

Not too bad, I like where the story is headed. I look forward to playing the series.

Feedback:

1. It's definitely a bit too short, you need a bit more dialog also. I'd like to see more of a progression towards the level it's introducing.
2. I didn't like the bridge section. You might want to have a non-visible string attached to the bottom of the planks to keep them from moving as much.

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Originally Posted by Ghandijones

Not too bad, I like where the story is headed. I look forward to playing the series.

Feedback:

1. It's definitely a bit too short, you need a bit more dialog also. I'd like to see more of a progression towards the level it's introducing.
2. I didn't like the bridge section. You might want to have a non-visible string attached to the bottom of the planks to keep them from moving as much.

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Ok, ill try fix some of those things. I will add more dialog but i cant make it much longer due to thermo constrictions......